In Class FOCUS: Macbeth and his connection to the world Self-Edit Time Quote Incorporation Quote Explanation Looking at feedback and making corrections… English 10 – Monday Week Eleven Homework Complete Re-Draft based on editing comments Electronic Copy due tomorrow Keep working on your Macbeth papers – Due on March 20 th

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Self-editing … Quote Incorporation / Lead-ins Quotation marks Line breaks Correct Citation (Act.Scene.Line-Line). English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Quote Explanation REMEMBER – For every quote there should be at least three sentences of clear, concise, and relevant explanation What What happens in the quote, why use this one, what does it prove about your thesis How How, specifically, does this support your thesis Why This is where you connect the quote to your topic sentence and to the overall thesis, drive the point home English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer editing help… (Link) Quote & Citation (Red) What (Green) What happens in the quote, why use this one, what does it prove about your thesis How (Blue) How, specifically, does this support your thesis Why (Yellow) This is where you connect the quote to your topic sentence and to the overall thesis, drive the point home English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Self-editing… Quote Incorporation & Quote Explanation REMEMBER – For every quote there should be at least three sentences of clear, concise, and relevant explanation What What happens in the quote, why use this one, what does it prove about your thesis How How, specifically, does this support your thesis Why This is where you connect the quote to your topic sentence and to the overall thesis, drive the point home English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

In Class FOCUS: Macbeth and his connection to the world SAS Curriculum Pathways Blog Post – Your Thoughts Another day? English 10 – Tuesday Week Eleven Homework Complete Re-Draft based on editing comments Electronic Copy due tomorrow Complete Class Blog Post (Link)Link Kite Runner Chapter One – Due on Thursday, March 19 th Vocabulary Quiz – Due on Friday, March 20 th Macbeth papers – Due on Friday, March 20 th

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 1 Whole Paper: SAS Online (Link)Link Pull-up the webpage Login: ahswarriors Stop when you get there and stand up! English 10 – Tuesday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 2 Whole Paper: Click on Writing Reviser Click Start Wait for software to load STOP when you get there! English 10 – Tuesday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 3 Whole Paper: Enter Name Enter Topic Copy and paste paper into the box IMPORTANT – Separate Paragraphs with a space Click Next STOP when you get there! English 10 – Tuesday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 4 Second Paragraph: Look at statistics– Do you know what all those things are? STOP when you get there! English 10 – Tuesday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 5 Whole Paper: Closer Look Section Look through the Economy Section Click one of the subsections and then click the Find in the upper right-hand corner o Voice o Clauses STOP when you get there! English 10 – Tuesday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 6 Whole Paper: Closer Look Section Look through the Variety Section Click one of the subsections and then click the Find in the upper right-hand corner o Sentences o Openings o Transitions o Repetition o Verbs STOP when you get there! English 10 – Tuesday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 7 Whole Paper: Closer Look Section Look through the Clarity Section Click one of the subsections and then click the Find in the upper right-hand corner o Diction o Pronouns STOP when you get there! English 10 – Tuesday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Writing Reviser Blog Post (Link)Link What did you think of using the SAS Online Editing Software? In what ways was it helpful? In what ways was it not helpful? What can we / the software do to help you continually improve upon your writing? English 10 – Tuesday Week Eleven

In Class FOCUS: Macbeth and his connection to the world the Rubric – Questions? Peer Editing Vocabulary Review – Unit Eight English 10 – Wednesday Week Eleven Homework Kite Runner Chapter One – Due Tomorrow, March 19 th Electronic Pictures of your family– Due on Friday, March 20 th Vocabulary Quiz Unit Eight – Due on Friday, March 20 th Macbeth papers – Due on Friday, March 20 th

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer editing… Switch and move Quiet Read through the ENTIRE essay Must give a comment in the document for ever y line on the rubric (i.e. Attention Getter and Explain Attention Getter) Positive or Negative, must give a comment Give one overall comment on that portion of the essay Give good feedback This should be taking you at least 10 minutes per paragraph! This is your last chance to get feedback…constructive criticism English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer editing… Switch and move Quiet Read through the ENTIRE essay Must give a comment in the document for ever y line on the rubric (i.e. Attention Getter and Explain Attention Getter) Positive or Negative, must give a comment Give one overall comment on that portion of the essay First Peer Editor… Introduction English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer editing… Switch and move Quiet Read through the ENTIRE essay Must give a comment in the document for ever y line on the rubric (i.e. Attention Getter and Explain Attention Getter) Positive or Negative, must give a comment Give one overall comment on that portion of the essay First Peer Editor… Introduction English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer editing… Switch and move Quiet Read through the ENTIRE essay Must give a comment in the document for ever y line on the rubric (i.e. Attention Getter and Explain Attention Getter) Positive or Negative, must give a comment Give one overall comment on that portion of the essay Second Peer Editor… First Body Paragraph English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer editing… Switch and move Quiet Read through the ENTIRE essay Must give a comment in the document for ever y line on the rubric (i.e. Attention Getter and Explain Attention Getter) Positive or Negative, must give a comment Give one overall comment on that portion of the essay Third Peer Editor… Second Body Paragraph English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer editing… Switch and move Quiet Read through the ENTIRE essay Must give a comment in the document for ever y line on the rubric (i.e. Attention Getter and Explain Attention Getter) Positive or Negative, must give a comment Give one overall comment on that portion of the essay Fourth Peer Editor… Conclusion English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer editing… Switch and move Quiet Read through the ENTIRE essay Must give a comment in the document for ever y line on the rubric (i.e. Attention Getter and Explain Attention Getter) Positive or Negative, must give a comment Give one overall comment on that portion of the essay Fourth Peer Editor… Mechanics English 10 – Monday Week Eleven

English 10 – Thursday Week Eleven In Class FOCUS: Setting up the Kite Runner What are the defining questions of the unit? Active Reading Guidelines Fishbowl Review and Sign-up Background – What dont you know…chapters 1-2 Homework Kite Runner Chapters 4-5 due on Tuesday, March 31 Electronic Pictures of your family– Due Tomorrow, March 20 th Vocabulary Quiz Unit Eight – Due Tomorrow, March 20 th Macbeth papers – Due Tomorrow, March 20 th

English 10 – Thursday Week Eleven In Class FOCUS: Setting up the Kite Runner What are the defining questions of the unit? Active Reading Guidelines Fishbowl Review and Sign-up Background – What dont you know…chapters 1-2 Homework Kite Runner Chapters 4-5 due on Tuesday, March 31 Electronic Pictures of your family– Due Tomorrow, March 20 th Vocabulary Quiz Unit Eight – Due Tomorrow, March 20 th Macbeth papers – Due Tomorrow, March 20 th

English 10 – Thursday Week Eleven Defining Questions for the Unit Throughout The Kite Runner, we will be thinking about the following two questions: 1. How do we define family? 2. How do our families define us?

English 10 – Thursday Week Eleven Active Reading Guidelines For each chapter, please find the following: One passage you have a question about; form a discussion question for this passage. One passage that contains a possible symbol; analyze what you see as the deeper significance of this symbol. One passage that relates back to our unit questions; explain what it reveals about family. You can either annotate directly in your book, or you may TYPE your responses. All annotations will be collected at the end, and they may collected at any time without prior announcement.

English 10 – Thursday Week Eleven Fishbowl Review and Sign-Up What do you remember from last semester? Lets review (Link)Link Lets sign-up…looking at the handout and the website calendar

English 10 – Thursday Week Eleven Background…What dont you know? What did you think of Chapter One? Look through Chapters One and Two and find words / phrases / things that you do not understand. Make a list. Well share! Get into groups…take one of the categories Prepare a definition for the class to share…

English 10 – Friday Week Eleven In Class FOCUS: Setting up the Kite Runner Mr. Ruggles Family - LinkLink How about Animoto… Vocabulary Quiz Turn in Macbeth Papers Homework Kite Runner Chapters 4-5 due on Tuesday, March 31 st Remember to keep in mind our active reading discussion Animoto Video

English 10 – Friday Week Eleven Active Reading Guidelines For each chapter, please find the following: One passage you have a question about; form a discussion question for this passage. One passage that contains a possible symbol; analyze what you see as the deeper significance of this symbol. One passage that relates back to our unit questions; explain what it reveals about family. You can either annotate directly in your book, or you may TYPE your responses. All annotations will be collected at the end, and they may collected at any time without prior announcement.

English 10 – Friday Week Eleven How About Animoto… Go to the English 10 website Click on the link and register You have All-Access for 6 Months Watch…learn…then do Include pictures (I had eleven pictures) Answer questions…Add text: 3 or more one word answers to How do we define family 3 or more one word answers to How do our families define us? Take a maximum of 30 minutes Video rendering & vocabulary quiz time