1. In Class FOCUS: Macbeth and his connection to the world Collect CSAP Packets Watch film versions of Macbeth 5.7 – Whats the connection? Macbeth – Four Paragraph Essay Thesis and Rough Outline What do they look like? Examples and some tips… Your turn – Write out your Thesis and Outlines English 10 – Monday Week Nine Homework Bring in your Thesis and Rough Outline tomorrow! – HARD COPY Purchase Kite Runner by Monday Independent Reading Projects – Due March 13 th Keep working on your Macbeth papers – Due on March 20 th

2. Watching film versions of 5.7 Watch the two versions: Polanski Modern What is different between the film and the text? What director choices did they make in producing the last scene? Which Deep, Deep Question are you going to be doing? English 10 – Monday Week Nine

3. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Your challenge: To write a four paragraph essay describing your response to one of the Deep, Deep Questions that we started this unit with. Make sure to have a clear thesis, introduction, two body paragraphs with examples from Macbeth, and a conclusion. We will spend the next two weeks going over structure, writing, peer editing, and also using some new software to improve your writing. English 10 – Monday Week Nine

4. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Step One, choose a Deep, Deep Question: 1. Do women have to be masculine in order to be powerful? 2. What impact do dreams or dream-like states have on our waking lives? 3. To what extent is ambition healthy? When does it become destructive? 4. What drives people over the edge? What causes them to lose control of themselves? 5. Do we control our own destinies, or do our destinies control us? Is there such a thing as fate? English 10 – Monday Week Nine

5. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Step Two, write a thesis statement: 1.Clear (easy to understand; carefully worded) 2.Specific (lays out arguments for two body paragraphs) 3.Analytical (makes a judgment and delves deeper than plot summary) Lays out two main points Use Macbeth in the title Do not use personal words English 10 – Monday Week Nine

6. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Examples: I believe in fate because we can't peer into the future and see what life has in store for us. We can only take what life throws at us as it comes. Fate is a realistic thing because we cannot control the future, like Macbeth tried to do. In Shakespeares Macbeth, the main character, Macbeth, tries to control his own destiny, which resulted in his actions being punished and fate deciding his life. English 10 – Monday Week Nine

7. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Step Three, write a rough outline: Introduction (Attention getter, Explain the attention getter, background information, and Thesis) First paragraph (Topic sentence) Second paragraph (Topic sentence) Conclusion (Recap thesis, explain the main points, and hit it home) Example: See templatetemplate English 10 – Monday Week Nine

9. In Class FOCUS: Macbeth and his connection to the world Looking at thesis statements & outlines Introduction What do they look like? Examples and some tips… First Paragraph Try It – Write out your Introduction and First Paragraph English 10 – Tuesday Week Nine Homework Macbeth books due on Thursday – NO EXCEPTIONS Introduction and First Paragraph tomorrow! -COMPUTER Purchase Kite Runner by Monday Independent Reading Projects – Due March 13 th Keep working on your Macbeth papers – Due on March 20 th

10. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Thesis statements: Link Look at the thesis examples: Do They…. ?? 1.Clear (easy to understand; carefully worded) 2.Specific (lays out arguments for two body paragraphs) 3.Analytical (makes a judgment and delves deeper than plot summary) Lays out two main points Use Macbeth in the title Do not use personal words English 10 – Tuesday Week Nine

11. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Thesis statements: Fix them Offer suggestions Work in partners English 10 – Tuesday Week Nine

12. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Is anyone lost? PEER EDITING… Look at each others thesis statements: Find your two oclock partner One, look at the thesis: 1.Clear (easy to understand; carefully worded) 2.Specific (lays out arguments for two body paragraphs) 3.Analytical (makes a judgment and delves deeper than plot summary) Lays out two main points Use Macbeth in the title Do not use personal words English 10 – Tuesday Week Nine

13. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay PEER EDITING… Look at each others thesis statements: Find your two oclock partner Two, look at the topic sentences Does it relate to the thesis? Does it prove a point? What is missing? English 10 – Tuesday Week Nine

14. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay PEER EDITING… Look at each others thesis statements: Find your two oclock partner Three, look at the introduction Is your attention grabbed? Is the attention getter explained? Is there background information? Is the thesis clearly found? English 10 – Tuesday Week Nine

15. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Introduction examples: Link A.Attention getting idea B.Explain the attention getting idea C.Background information D.Transition to thesis E.Thesis English 10 – Tuesday Week Nine

16. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay First Paragraphs Link A.Topic Sentence B.Set-up C.Lead-in D.Quote E.Citation F.Explaining the quote G.Connection to the topic sentence H.Transition to the next quote Two to three quotes per paragraph English 10 – Tuesday Week Nine

17. Homework Introduction and First Paragraph tomorrow! -COMPUTER Purchase Kite Runner by Monday Independent Reading Projects – Due March 13 th Keep working on your Macbeth papers – Due on March 20 th

19. In Class FOCUS: Macbeth and his connection to the world Why Mrs. Leclaire Wants You To Do Your Best Close reading of Macbeth Act Three Scene Two Peer Editing of Introduction and Paragraph One Some tips… Second Paragraph English 10 – Wednesday Week Nine Homework Macbeth books due tomorrow – NO EXCEPTIONS Second Paragraph tomorrow! – COMPUTER COPY Purchase Kite Runner by Monday Independent Reading Projects – Due March 13 th Keep working on your Macbeth papers – Due on March 20 th

20. Macbeth Close Reading Turn in your Macbeth books to Act Three Scene Two (p. 91) Lets read through it… Using all the elements of literature that you know, write down the connections/uses in lines 3.2.51-62 and explain them with examples. - Personification- Assonance - Imagery- Figurative Language - End Rhyme- Symbols Take ten minutes and write out your response. English 10 – Wednesday Week Nine

21. Macbeth Close Reading Be innocent of the knowledge, dearest chuck, Till thou applaud the deed. Come, seeling night, Scarf up the tender eye of pitiful day; And with thy bloody and invisible hand Cancel and tear to pieces that great bond Which keeps me pale! Light thickens; and the crow Makes wing to the rooky wood: Good things of day begin to droop and drowse; While night's black agents to their preys do rouse. Thou marvell'st at my words: but hold thee still; Things bad begun make strong themselves by ill. So, prithee, go with me. English 10 – Wednesday Week Nine

22. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Introduction: Link A.Attention getting idea (red) B.Explain the attention getting idea (red) C.Background information (purple) D.Transition to thesis (purple) E.Thesis (yellow) English 10 – Wednesday Week Nine

23. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay First Paragraph Link A.Topic Sentence (yellow) B.Set-up (purple) C.Lead-in (green) D.Quote (green) E.Citation (green) F.Explaining the quote (yellow) G.Connection to the topic sentence (yellow) H.Transition to the next quote (blue) Two to three quotes per paragraph English 10 – Wednesday Week Nine

24. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer Edit… Introduction: 1.Attention getting idea (red) 2.Explain the attention getting idea (red) 3.Background information (purple) 4.Transition to thesis (purple) 5.Thesis (yellow) 6.Two Comments (One, something great & One, something to work on) English 10 – Wednesday Week Nine

25. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer Edit… First Paragraph: 1.Topic Sentence (yellow) 2.Set-up (purple) 3.Lead-in (green) 4.Quote (green) 5.Citation (green) 6.Explaining the quote (yellow) 7.Connection to the topic sentence (yellow) 8.Transition to the next quote (blue) Two to three quotes per paragraph English 10 – Wednesday Week Nine

26. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Some tips… Make sure you have lead-ins into quotes Make sure to put / in-between lines and cite correctly o NO- make strong themselves by ill. So, prithee, go with me. (Shakespeare 91) o YES- make strong themselves by ill / So, prithee, go with me (3.2.51-62). Make sure to explain your quotes well. Make sure to connect the quotes to the topic sentence and thesis. English 10 – Wednesday Week Nine

28. In Class FOCUS: Macbeth and his connection to the world Why Mrs. Leclaire Wants You To Do Your Best Turn in Macbeth books Conclusion Paragraph Sentence Variety Exercises Editing with the Second Paragraph Peer Editing SAS Online Editing English 10 – Thursday Week Nine Homework Whole paper draft Monday! – COMPUTER COPY Purchase Kite Runner by Monday Independent Reading Projects – Due March 13 th Keep working on your Macbeth papers – Due on March 20 th Conferences Tonight & Enjoy your extended weekend.

29. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Link to examplesLink Conclusion Paragraph: A.Re-state thesis (yellow) B.Main points (blue) C.Hit it home (purple) English 10 – Thursday Week Nine

30. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Some tips… Sentence Variety: Make sure that you vary your sentence structure Why? How do you do that? Handout (Link)Link English 10 – Thursday Week Nine

31. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Some tips… Make sure you have lead-ins into quotes Make sure to put / in-between lines and cite correctly o NO- make strong themselves by ill. So, prithee, go with me. (Shakespeare 91) o YES- make strong themselves by ill / So, prithee, go with me (3.2.51-62). Make sure to explain your quotes well. Make sure to connect the quotes to the topic sentence and thesis. English 10 – Thursday Week Nine

32. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Peer Editing…Switch and move away…Quiet Second Paragraph: 1.Topic Sentence (yellow) 2.Set-up (purple) 3.Lead-in (green) 4.Quote (green) 5.Citation (green) 6.Explaining the quote (yellow) 7.Connection to the topic sentence (yellow) 8.Transition to the next quote (blue) Two to three quotes per paragraph Grammar, spelling, punctuation, one compliment and one suggestion English 10 – Thursday Week Nine

33. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay Second Paragraph: Take their suggestions and improve your paragraphs Two minutes of revising Expectations…stay with me please. Really cool, but it is only a program. English 10 – Thursday Week Nine

34. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 1 Second Paragraph: SAS Online (Link)Link Pull-up the webpage Login: ahswarriors Stop when you get there and stand up! English 10 – Thursday Week Nine

35. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 2 Second Paragraph: Click on Writing Reviser Click Start Wait for software to load STOP when you get there! English 10 – Thursday Week Nine

36. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 3 Second Paragraph: Enter Name Enter Topic Copy and paste paper into the box Click Next IMPORTANT – Separate Paragraphs with a space STOP when you get there! English 10 – Thursday Week Nine

37. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 4 Second Paragraph: Look at statistics– Do you know what all those things are? STOP when you get there! English 10 – Thursday Week Nine

38. Macbeth Four Paragraph Essay SAS Online Editing – Page 5 Second Paragraph: Closer Look Section Look through the Variety Section Click one of the subsections and then click the Find in the upper right-hand corner o Sentences o Transitions o Repetition STOP when you get there! English 10 – Thursday Week Nine