Today’s Agenda 12/18 1.Review Paragraphs 2.Essay Notes 3.Introductions & Conclusions

CAHSEE Grade Sheet 1. Practice Essay 1 = _____ / 4 PASS/ TRY AGAIN 2. Leadership Paragraph = _____ / 4 PASS/ TRY AGAIN

STUDENT SAMPLES

Confidence is a strong quality needed by a good leader to be successful. Having confidence shows the people he is leading he knows what he is doing and trusts himself. By showing the people you know what you are doing and have trust in yourself they will begin to trust him. Also, confidence shows that a leader will not be swayed in his decisions. A good leader having the confidence to stick with his original decision shows that he believes what he is doing will work and will not be swayed by what others think is correct. Having confidence gives a good leader the strength to speak to the ones he is leading. Confidence is important for a good leader because in order to lead properly a leader must be able to clearly say what he wants everyone to do. These are some reasons that it is important for a good leader to have confidence.

Some More Essay Notes

First paragraph

Paragraph 1 What is the purpose of the first paragraph of an essay? Background

Starting your first Paragraph It’s good to start with a hook, and then introduce your topic. Ask a question. Ask a question. State a interesting quote or fact State a interesting quote or fact Tell a story Tell a story

Good Leaders Hook.... Hook.... Our leaders… Many of our most important figures in history have been great leaders. are people who represent our society and guide us to do great things and better our people. The qualities a leader possesses is vital to his or her success.

Paragraph 1 What is the purpose of the first paragraph of an essay? HookBackground You make your point and state your thesis.

Hook.... Hook.... Our leaders… Many of our most important figures in history have been great leaders. are people who represent our society and guide us to do great things and better our people. The qualities a leader possesses is vital to his or her success. Thesis: A good leader demonstrates intelligence, ________, and _________.

Body Paragraphs What is the purpose of the body paragraphs in an essay? Supporting details and facts.

Good Leaders 1. Topic Sentence: One quality that a leader has is a great deal of knowledge. 2.Introduce a detail or fact. 3. State its importance. 4. Repeat. 5. Finish with a concluding sentence

Last Paragraph Conclusion

This is the last thing your readers will read, so you must summarize your main points. Give the short version Conclusion

Good Leaders Essay Restate your thesis: 3 important facts Call to action (what do you want your audience to do or think? A strong and capable leader is smart, and wise, and takes care if difficult situations. A smart leader will be able to lead or guide people into making correct decisions; a wise leader will understand the needs of each person on the team, and a responsible leader will keep track of important details to keep the team on track.