Teacher: Kenji Tachibana Digital Photography I. Assignment Feedback Self Portrait Final Rough Self Portrait Final Rough 9 slides Copyright © 2003 – 2009 Kenji Tachibana

Teacher: Kenji Tachibana Digital Photography I Assignment Feedback: Final Rough B est Choice: Sometimes ‘not so’ Sean’s ‘through the looking glass’ story idea is very good but his Best image choice Does not tell that story very well. Separating one reality from another by changing one reality to B&W is also a good idea. 2_seanBest-env.jpg

Teacher: Kenji Tachibana Digital Photography I Assignment Feedback: Final Rough L east Choice: The other Best Sean delivers with his Least choice. There are four (4) lab work treatments (stages) of the new Best choice Image. The bottom image is the starting point for the story telling variations… Fully lab worked: 2a_seanBest-env.jpg

Teacher: Kenji Tachibana Digital Photography I Assignment Feedback: Final Rough T ell the Story Better: Variation ‘a’ and ‘b’. Separate into two worlds using Sean’s idea… 2a_seanBest-env.jpg2b_seanBest-env.jpg

Teacher: Kenji Tachibana Digital Photography I Assignment Feedback: Final Rough T ell the Story Better: Take it further Variation ‘b’ and ‘c’. Reshape the right side to improve the composition and story telling. 2b_seanBest-env.jpg2c_seanBest-env.jpg

Teacher: Kenji Tachibana Digital Photography I Assignment Feedback: Final Rough T ell the Story Better: Final moves… Variation ‘c’ and ‘d’. Add image depth (fore, middle, and background) and color punch. 2c_seanBest-env.jpg2d_seanBest-env.jpg Burn down the arm gradually to minimize importance… Colorize with gradated green.

Teacher: Kenji Tachibana Digital Photography I T ight Layout: Tight layout Composition: Line & movement analysis

Teacher: Kenji Tachibana Digital Photography I T ight Layout: Tight layout Through the Looking Glass: Tight layout

Teacher: Kenji Tachibana Digital Photography I Assignment Feedback: Final Rough S ummary: We’re in the final stretch, please don’t drop the ball now. You want to carry that ball into the end-zone. And that is a few hard-work weeks away. Tight layout means that it’s close. Actually the only thing that needs improvement is your expression. The expression is too neutral for your story. The final expression is up to you but it needs to be more than just neutral.

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