9 th Grade Grammar Review Editing Your Work

What can go wrong in a sentence? Subject – Verb Agreement Pronoun – Antecedent Agreement Incorrect Pronoun Case Dangling modifier Lack of parallelism Unclear Pronoun Reference (ambiguous, general and weak) Run-ons – Comma splice/Fragments Active Passive Voice

Subject Verb Agreement The subject must agree with the verb in number. He is / are Tricks for more difficult cases: “Trim the fat,” eliminate the “interrupters” Know when it’s singular or plural

“Trim the Fat” When you write a long sentence go over it and cross out “interrupters” that make you miss problems with subject – verb agreement.

Try it! After all, Elizabeth is the strongest candidate A for the job because her looks, experience, B and natural intelligence invites voters to cast C D their ballots for her. No Error. E

When is it Singular? When is it Plural? Either, Neither, None, Each The “ones” and the “bodies” – Anyone, No one, Everyone, Anybody, Nobody, Everybody All take singular verbs

Is there an error? Everyone going on the spirit bus to Giants’ A Stadium on Saturday for the State Playoff B Game are advised to wear warm clothes. CD No Error. E

Subjects Joined by “and” Subjects joined by “and” are plural Britney Spears and Angelina Jolie, each of whom is a famous celebrity, A B C is still well-known today. No Error. D E

Subjects joined by “or” Subjects joined by “or” can be singular or plural. The subject closest to the verb decides whether it is singular or plural. The kids or my husband is/are driving me crazy. My husband or the kids is/are driving me crazy. A B

Special Cases: Collective nouns (family, jury, group, audience) – take a singular verb My family [is/are] thoroughly excited to go to Florida over Winter Break.

Review To the disappointment of the crowd, neither A B the president nor any of his aides were able C D to attend the ceremony. No error. E

Interest and applications to Stanford A University, an elite school in California, B has risen since Chelsea Clinton enrolled there. C D No error. E

Pronoun Antecedent Agreement Pronouns must agree with the nouns that they replace. Watch for pronouns that appear late in the sentence.

Tricky cases – indefinite pronouns Singular: each, either, neither, no one, one, Nobody, anybody, somebody, everybody Nothing, anything, something, everything, Anyone, someone, everyone Each of the clerks does a good deal of work around his/her office.

Plural Several, few, both and many are plurals. Both do a good job in their office. Few will realize their dreams of Olympic gold medals.

Some indefinite pronouns that are modified by a prepositional phrase may be either singular or plural. These are: Some, any, none, all and most How will you know what to do????

If the object of the preposition is uncountable, then it is singular: Some of the sugar fell out of its bag. All of the jewelry has lost its glow.

When the object of the preposition is countable, then it is plural: Some of the marbles fell out of their bag. All of the jewels have lost their glow.

A number vs. The number A number = plural The number = singular A number of volunteers are offering their help. The number of volunteers increases its ranks daily.

Try some Each person who reads this book marvels A B at the impact it has on their lives. No error. C D E

I fully agree with Bertram’s idea that each person is in themselves a complex puzzle A and that all of us need to set aside time in B our hectic lives for trying to solve the puzzle. C D No Error. E

Although a teenager may think that their A B parents are often overprotective, parents think that by shielding their offspring from C harm, they are merely demonstrating how much they love their child. No error. D E

In some cultures a woman is assigned a role in life, is constantly reminded of their duties A B C to men, but is also treated with respect. D No error. E