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Click on the subject of the second sentence.Click on the subject of the first sentence. This comma splice is actually two sentences run together with only a comma to separate them. Lolita wanted nine children, then she could start her own baseball team. Here’s a comma splice: What is a Comma Splice? That is not correct. Please try again. Correct. “Lolita” is the subject and “wanted” is the verb in this sentence. Correct. “She” is the subject and “could start” is the verb in this sentence. Click on the subject of the second sentence.Click on the subject of the first sentence. This comma splice is actually two sentences run together with only a comma to separate them. Josefina has gone to Mexico every summer with her mom, this year, they will go in August. Here’s another example of a comma splice: Correct. “Josefina” is the subject and “has gone” is the verb in this sentence. Correct. “They” is the subject and “will go” is the verb in this sentence. Click here to learn one way to fix comma splices. Skip this demo Click to begin

That is not correct. Please try again. Fixing Comma Splices: Connect them using a “transition” word accordingly afterwards as a result consequently furthermore in fact indeed however in addition instead meanwhile nevertheless otherwise then therefore likewise for example accordingly similarly thus Click on the spot where the first sentence ends and the second sentence begins in the comma splices below Correct. Using “therefore” with a semicolon and a comma connects these two sentences to show a result., therefore ; otherwisefor exampleneverthelesstherefore Good. Now look at these transition words and click on the one that best fits in the space. she could not speak.Sara was so frightened that she could not breatheSara was so frightened that she could not breathe she could not speak., Correct. Using “as a result” with a semicolon and a comma connects these two sentences to show the effect of a fact., as a result ; likewiseas a resultin additionmeanwhile Good. Now look at these transition words and click on the one that best fits in the space. it employs thousands of workers.Salmon fishing is a big industry in AlaskaSalmon fishing is a big industry in Alaska it employs thousands of workers., Correct. Using “however” with a semicolon and a comma connects these two sentences to show a contrasting idea., however ; insteadthereforesimilarlyhowever Good. Now look at these transition words and click on the one that best fits in the space. it still ran like a top.The convertible behind the shed was old and rustedThe convertible behind the shed was old and rusted it still ran like a top., Correct. Using “furthermore” with a semicolon and a comma connects these two sentences to add information and strengthen a point.,furthermore; insteadhoweverfurthermoreconsequently Good. Now look at these transition words and click on the one that best fits in the space. she reads Italian without a dictionary.Jana can speak French effortlesslyJana can speak French effortlessly she reads Italian without a dictionary., Click here to see some common transition words Do More Practice

That is not correct. Please try again. Fixing Comma Splices: Connect them using a “transition” word accordingly afterwards as a result consequently furthermore in fact indeed however in addition instead meanwhile nevertheless otherwise then therefore likewise for example accordingly similarly thus Click on the spot where the first sentence ends and the second sentence begins in the comma splices below Correct. Using “instead” with a semicolon and a comma connects these two sentences to show a different choice., instead ; neverthelesssimilarlylikewiseinstead Good. Now look at these transition words and click on the one that best fits in the space. she hired a personal translator.Janet refused to speak French in ParisJanet refused to speak French in Paris she hired a personal translator., Correct. Using “otherwise” with a semicolon and a comma connects these two sentences to show an avoidable consequence., otherwise ; howeverin additioninstead Good. Now look at these transition words and click on the one that best fits in the space. I might forget all the words on test day.I need to study flashcards everydayI need to study flashcards everyday I might forget all the words on test day., Correct. Using “afterwards” with a semicolon and a comma connects these two sentences to show something happening next., afterwards ; for exampleneverthelessotherwiseafterwards Good. Now look at these transition words and click on the one that best fits in the space. he is ready for his afternoon classes.Every morning, Jay takes a napEvery morning, Jay takes a nap he is ready for his afternoon classes., Correct. Using “indeed” with a semicolon and a comma connects these two sentences to emphasize a point with an example.,indeed; likewisebesidesaccordinglyindeed Good. Now look at these transition words and click on the one that best fits in the space. he can even fix an old VCR.Manny knows how to fix almost anythingManny knows how to fix almost anything he can even fix an old VCR., Click Here to Exit!