802.11 TGmb Editor Report - May 2010 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 802.11 TGmb Editor Report - May 2010 Date: 2010-05-12 Authors: Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 Abstract This document summarises editorial activities on the TGmb Draft since the last meeting Status of Draft Status of comments E-Motions This document is cumulative – i.e., it will be revised per meeting to show updated status. Historic data is shown at the end of the file. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2010 May 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. D2.01, 2010-01 – roll-up of 802.11n D2.02, 2010-01 – speculative editing of LB160 editorial comments D2.03, 2010-02 – Comment resolutions from Jan 2010 D2.04 – Defect resolution from D2.01-D2.03 + speculative editing of MIB changes in 11-10/0216r2 D3.0 – balloted as LB162 D3.01 – speculative editing of LB162 editorials Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2010 Balloting Status show evotes results formatted TG/WG BallotID Ballot Close Date Title BallotType Pool Approve Disapprove Abstain Return %Return %Abstain %Approve TGmb 149 27 June 2009 IEEE 802.11REVmb Draft 1.0 Technical Letter Ballot Technical 246 155 23 29 207 84.15 14.01 87.08 160 08 January 2010 IEEE 802.11mb Draft 2.0 First Recirculation Letter Ballot Recirculation 166 20 25 211 85.77 11.85 89.25 162 25 April 2010 IEEE 802.11REVmb Draft 3.0 Second Recirculation Letter Ballot 167 212 86.18 11.79 89.3 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

May 2010 LB162 Comments Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

May 2010 LB162 Status (as of 2010-05-12) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 Process for D3.01 D3.01 speculative editing of 19 editorial comments from LB162 One of these comments (CID 3084) was subsequently transferred to GEN as it actually resolves some technical ambiguities in D3.0. However these speculative edits are present in D3.01, tagged with this CID. One of the 20 editorial comments (CID 3124) was not resolved, and was transferred to MAC. Having made this transfer, I have prepared a resolution to this comment in one of my submissions. D3.01 is currently pending review by Bill, Peter and Mark. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

LB162 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 LB162 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D3.0.pdf Draft P802.11REVmb_D3.0 Redline.pdf Composite comments (all ad-hocs) 11-09-0706-11-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action 11-09-0956-06-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Editorials (18) – from LB162 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Historic Page Statistics of REVmb May 2010 Historic Page Statistics of REVmb Note, drafts balloted (i.e. Dn.0) have editorial comments hidden. As of D2.0, this implies ~18 pages of hidden comment text. Resulting unreliable deltas are highlighted yellow. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

E-Motions May 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2010 Motion - LB162 Editorials Approve comment resolutions in 11-09/0956r6 on the “Editorials” tab Stephens/ Count of Commenter Part of No Vote   Resn Status N Y Grand Total A 8 D 3 6 P 2 4 13 5 18 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 “Go to ballot” Motion Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the first working group ballot on P802.11REVmb D3.0, Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 4.0 incorporating these resolutions and, Approve a 15 day Working Group Recirculation Ballot asking the question “Should P802.11REVmb D4.0 be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot?” Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

March 2010 May 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. D2.01, 2010-01 – roll-up of 802.11n D2.02, 2010-01 – speculative editing of LB160 editorial comments D2.03, 2010-02 – Comment resolutions from Jan 2010 D2.04, pending – Defect resolution from D2.01-D2.03 + speculative editing of MIB changes in 11-10/0216r2 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Process for D2.04 D2.01 contains the roll-up of .11n May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 Process for D2.04 D2.01 contains the roll-up of .11n D2.02 contains editing of ~50 editorial comments from LB160 D2.03 contains editing of 126 technical comments approved in Jan 2010 D2.01-D2.03 were reviewed 171 defects were reports (mostly from D2.01) Thank you to my reviewers: Stephen McCann, Jon Rosdahl, Kaberi Banerjee, Sudheer Grandhi, Mark Hamilton, Amit Bansal, Yuichi Morioka, Eldad Perahia, George Vlantis, John Ketchum, Gary Anwyl, Michael Montemurro, Matthew Gast. D2.04 is pending review by Peter Ecclesine Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

LB160 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 LB160 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D2.03.pdf + Redlines between D2, D2.01, D2.02 Composite comments (all ad-hocs) 11-09-0706-09-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action 11-09-0956-04-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Recycled comments for review (11) MIB (2) LB160 Editorials (50) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Recycled comments for review May 2010 Recycled comments for review 6 implemented as specified CIDs 2220, 2181, 2006, 2007, 2023, 2010 2220: conflict with .11n 2181: response incomplete 2006 & 2007: dot11PHYdot11TempType 2023: MIB description conflict 2010: missing deprecation reason 3 implemented in modified form CIDs 2030, 2076, 2075 2030: conflict with .11n 2076 & 2075: response non-responsive and ambiguous 2 not implemented at all CIDs 2011, 2061 regarding dot11TempType Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

WG Ballot 160 Comments May 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Status by ad-hoc – 2010-03-05 (summary) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 Status by ad-hoc – 2010-03-05 (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Historic Page Statistics of REVmb May 2010 Historic Page Statistics of REVmb Note, drafts balloted (i.e. Dn.0) have editorial comments hidden. As of D2.0, this implies ~18 pages of hidden comment text. Resulting unreliable deltas are highlighted yellow. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

E-Motions May 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2010 Motion - LB160 Editorials Approve comment resolutions in 11-09/0956r4 on the “LB160 Editorials” tab Stephens/ Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

May 2010 Motion – MIB Approve resolutions for comments 2214 and 2039 as shown in 11-10/0216r2 Notes: CID 2039 was previously resolved (Jan 2010). This submission proposes an alternative resolution. Draft D2.04 was speculatively edited on the assumption that this motion passes. Stephens/ Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 “Go to ballot” Motion Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the first working group ballot on P802.11REVmb D2.0, Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 3.0 incorporating these resolutions and, Approve a 15 day Working Group Recirculation Ballot asking the question “Should P802.11REVmb D3.0 be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot?” Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Historic Data Slides from previous revisions of this document for May 2010 Historic Data Slides from previous revisions of this document for Jan 2010 Nov 2009 Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

January 2010 May 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 D1.01, 2009-07 – speculative resolution of editorials D1.02, 2009-08 – speculative resolution of minor technical comments D1.03, 2009-08 – editing of approved resolutions D1.04, 2009-10 – editing of approved resolutions D1.05, 2009-11 – roll-up of 802.11w D1.06, 2009-11 – defect resolution D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. D2.01, 2010-01 – roll-up of 802.11n Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 Process for D2.0 D2.0 contains the editing of the 264 comments approved in Nov 2009. We needed to get the edits out as quickly as possible to give maximum time to the ballot itself over the holiday period. So we used an abbreviated review process. Bill Marshall and Adrian Stephens shared the editing and cross-checked each others’ work Matthew Gast also reviewed the edits. Thankyou to Bill and Matthew Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

LB160 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 LB160 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D2.0.pdf Draft P802.11REVmb_D2.0 Redline.pdf Composite comments (all ad-hocs) 11-09-0706-07-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action TBD: 11-09-0956-xx-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls not yet updated to LB160 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Draft 2.01 Draft 2.01 includes STD IEEE 802.11n-2009 May 2010 Draft 2.01 Draft 2.01 includes STD IEEE 802.11n-2009 It has not been reviewed An editorial review is planned starting after the 802.11 session Any defects will be addressed in D2.02 or D2.03 Call for volunteers: if you’ve not already volunteered to help review D2.01 edits, and you want to join the party, contact Adrian by email asap. So far about 11 volunteers Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

WG Ballot 160 Comments May 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Status by ad-hoc – 2010-01-13 (summary) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 Status by ad-hoc – 2010-01-13 (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Historic Page Statistics of REVmb May 2010 Historic Page Statistics of REVmb Note, drafts balloted (i.e. Dn.0) have editorial comments hidden. As of D2.0, this implies ~18 pages of hidden comment text. Resulting unreliable deltas are highlighted yellow. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

November 2009 May 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 D1.01, 2009-07 – speculative resolution of editorials D1.02, 2009-08 – speculative resolution of minor technical comments D1.03, 2009-08 – editing of approved resolutions D1.04, 2009-10 – editing of approved resolutions D1.05, 2009-11 – roll-up of 802.11w D1.06, 2009-11 – defect resolution Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 Process for D1.04-D1.06 D1.04 contains speculative editing of ~200 non-editorial comment resolutions approved in Sept 2009 D1.04 was reviewed and 62 defects were reported D1.05 was prepared containing a roll-up of STD 802.11w-2009 D1.05 was reviewed and 19 defects were reported D1.06 was prepared containing bugfixes for the D1.04 and D1.05 defects. Thankyou to the reviewers: Michael Montemurro, Peter Ecclesine, Matthew Gast, Kaberi Banerjee Jouni Malinen, Jesse Walker, Matthew Gast, Kapil Sood Thankyou to Bill Marshall for D1.05 editing Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.06.pdf + Incremental redlines D1.04->D1.05 etc Composite comments (all ad-hocs) 11-09-0706-05-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action 11-09-0956-03-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Status by ad-hoc – 2009-11-03 (summary) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 Status by ad-hoc – 2009-11-03 (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Sept 2009 May 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 Process for D1.01-D1.03 D1.01 contains speculative editing of editorial comment resolutions (~770 pages modified) D1.01 was reviewed (~100 defects reported) D1.02 contains speculative editing of minor technical comment resolutions, and resolution of the D1.01 defects (~410 pages modifed) D1.02 was reviewed (~20 defects reported) D1.03 contains editing of comment resolutions approved in July 2009, plus resolution of the D1.02 defects (~12 pages modified) D1.03 was reviewed and no defects were reported Thankyou to the reviewers: Bill, Eldad, Gary, Jon, Kaberi, Mark, Matthew, Michael, Peter, Stephen and Sudheer Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.03.pdf + D1.02, D1.01, D1.0 + Incremental redlines D1.02->D1.03 etc Composite comments (all ad-hocs) 11-09-0706-02-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action 11-09-0956-00-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

WG Ballot 149 Comments May 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Status by ad-hoc – 2009-09-01 (summary) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 May 2010 Status by ad-hoc – 2009-09-01 (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell