1. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 1 802.11 TGmb Editor Report - Sept 2009 Date: 2009-09-21 Authors:

2. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 2 Abstract This document summarises editorial activities on the TGmb Draft since the July 2009 meeting Status of Draft Status of comments from LB149 Style E-Motions

3. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 3 REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) D1.0, 2009-05 – Balloted as LB149 D1.01, 2009-07 – speculative resolution of editorials D1.02, 2009-08 – speculative resolution of minor technical comments D1.03, 2009-08 – editing of approved resolutions

4. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 4 Process for D1.01-D1.03 D1.01 contains speculative editing of editorial comment resolutions (~770 pages modified) D1.01 was reviewed (~100 defects reported) D1.02 contains speculative editing of minor technical comment resolutions, and resolution of the D1.01 defects (~410 pages modifed) D1.02 was reviewed (~20 defects reported) D1.03 contains editing of comment resolutions approved in July 2009, plus resolution of the D1.02 defects (~12 pages modified) D1.03 was reviewed and no defects were reported Thankyou to the reviewers: Bill, Eldad, Gary, Jon, Kaberi, Mark, Matthew, Michael, Peter, Stephen and Sudheer

5. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 5 LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members area of 802.11 website) –Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.03.pdf + D1.02, D1.01, D1.0 –+ Incremental redlines D1.02->D1.03 etc Composite comments (all ad-hocs) –11-09-0706-02-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor –For: resolution, editing or other action –11-09-0956-00-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls

6. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 6 WG Ballot 149 Comments

7. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 7 Status by ad-hoc – 2009-09-01 (summary)

8. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 8 Style – Puttin on the Ritz ** Decisions on global edits made by TGmb are effectively creating a TGmb style Adrian and Bill are creating a document to describe this style –Based on decisions made by TGmb on editorial comments This style does not apply to amendments to STD-2007, but will apply to amendments to STD-20xx. Learnings from early TGn publication editing: publication editor will ensure stylistic consistency with STD-2007 Some unknowns: will publication editor of STD-20xx reverse some of these stylistic decisions? –Are we wasting our time worrying about this now? –Are we creating work for publication editor? ** http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Puttin'_on_the_Ritz

9. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 9 E-Motions

10. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 10 Editorial Motion 1 Approve resolutions of P802.11REVmb WG ballot 149 comments –in document 11-09-0956r0 –on the Editorials tab

11. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 11 Editorial Motion 2 Approve resolutions of P802.11REVmb WG ballot 149 comments –in document 11-09-0956r0 –on the Minor Technical tab

12. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 12 Editorial Motion 3 Approve resolutions of P802.11REVmb WG ballot 149 comments –in document 11-09-0956r0 –on the MIB tab One comment (P), compile the MIB, see submission 11-09/0621r1

13. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 13 Editorial Motion 4 Approve resolutions of P802.11REVmb WG ballot 149 comments –in document 11-09-0956r0 –on the Annex C tab Proposed resolutions replace Annex C by a placeholder.

14. doc.: IEEE 802.11-09/0953r0 Submission Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel CorporationSlide 14 Go to ballot Motion Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the first working group ballot on P802.11REVmb D1.0, Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 2.0 incorporating these resolutions and, Approve a 15 day Working Group Recirculation Ballot asking the question Should P802.11REVmb D2.0 be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot?