TGmb Editor Report - Nov 2010

802.11 TGmb Editor Report - Nov 2010
May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 TGmb Editor Report - Nov 2010 Date: Authors: Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 Abstract This document summarises editorial activities on the TGmb Draft since the last meeting Status of Draft Status of comments E-Motions This document is cumulative – i.e., it will be revised per meeting to show updated status. Historic data is shown at the end of the file. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

November 2010 November 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0
Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Balloting Status November 2010 Draft Opened Closed Days Ballot Type
Pool Approve Disapprove Abstain Return #Cmnt D6.00 21/09/2010 05/11/2010 45 Technical 186 122 87% 18 comments 10% 9 6% 149 80% 454 1 w/o comments Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

November 2010 Numbering Keeping all comments from WG and Sponsor ballots in the same spreadsheet. The initial sponsor ballot is shown as LB 1000 the first recirc will be 1001 The sponsor ballot comments are numbered from onwards The next set will be onwards Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

November 2010 LB1000 Comments Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

November 2010 LB1000 Commenters Note, David Hunters comments were supplied in a separate spreadsheet due to difficulty uploading to the MyBallot tool. There is one generic comment related to these, which is the only one that the MyBallot tool will track. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

Comment Status (2010-11-08) November 2010
Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

REVmb Draft Numbering History (part)
May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) D1.0, – balloted as LB149 D2.0, – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. D3.0 – balloted as LB162 D3.01 – speculative editing of LB162 editorials D3.02 – editing of LB162 technical D4.0 – for ballot D4.01 – Speculative editing of LB163 editorials D5.0 – for ballot D6.0 – first sponsor ballot, includes MEC change Planned D6.01 – includes TGp roll-in D6.02 – includes TGz roll-in D6.03 – Speculative resolution of editorial D6.04 – implementation of LB1000 technicals D7.0 – Sponsor recirc #1 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website)
May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D6.0.pdf Draft P802.11REVmb_D6.0 Redline.pdf Composite comments (all ad-hocs) m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-comments.xls (not yet) Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action xx-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

November 2010 Rolling in p I have rolled in p into D6.0, resulting in a D6.01 (unpublished). Some of the issues resulting from this roll-in were discussed in September. And a number of action items were identified. So far I have not received this input. Should I publish D6.01 as it is now with editor’s notes calling out the pending actions? Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

Planning TGv and TGu approval is going to slip until early Feb.
November 2010 Planning TGv and TGu approval is going to slip until early Feb. I have spoken with IEEE-SA editorial staff and they will try to bring TGv publication editing forward. This early editing allows us to meet our previous project plan dates. If it doesn’t work, we will slip 2 months into 2012 publication. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

E-motions None this session. Your editor is completely un-e-motional.
November 2010 E-motions None this session. Your editor is completely un-e-motional. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

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November 2010 Balloting Status show evotes results formatted BallotID Approve Disapprove Abstain Return %Return %Abstain %Approve 149 155 23 29 207 84.15 14.01 87.08 160 166 20 25 211 85.77 11.85 89.25 162 167 212 86.18 11.79 89.3 163 164 28 13.21 89.13 172 15 91.98 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

November 2010 LB167 Comments Note, one of the “part of a no vote=Y” comments was from a yes voter. He later submitted an exact duplicate of this comment marked editorial, “part of a no vote=N”. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

LB167 Status (as of 2010-09-10) November 2010
The 7 Unresolvable comments were withdrawn by the commenters. The 9 Principle comments were given the response “AGREE IN PRINCIPLE (EDITOR: :35:14Z) - This comment is deemed editorial and delegated to the document editor for consideration in developing future drafts. Please note that the IEEE standards are edited professionally prior to publication.” Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) D1.0, – balloted as LB149 D2.0, – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. D2.01, – roll-up of n D2.02, – speculative editing of LB160 editorial comments D2.03, – Comment resolutions from Jan 2010 D2.04 – Defect resolution from D2.01-D speculative editing of MIB changes in 11-10/0216r2 D3.0 – balloted as LB162 D3.01 – speculative editing of LB162 editorials D3.02 – editing of LB162 technical D4.0 – for ballot D4.01 – Speculative editing of LB163 editorials D5.0 – for ballot D6.0 – for sponsor ballot, includes MEC change Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

LB167 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website)
May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 LB167 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D6.0.pdf Draft P802.11REVmb_D6.0 Redline.pdf Composite comments (all ad-hocs) m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Relevant tabs: “Ready for motion Sept 2010” and “Withdrawn” Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

November 2010 MEC Draft 5.0 was reviewed by IEEE-SA editorial staff as a mandatory editorial coordination (MEC) See document 11-10/1070r0 for full text of their report The outcome is that we have to change the draft’s scope and purpose statements to match those of the P PAR before starting sponsor ballot. D6.0 contains these changes, and is on the server. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

November 2010 Rolling in p I rolled in p into D5.0, resulting in a D5.01 (unpublished). This was reviewed by the editorial panel, and was in a fit state to post. However, it was not posted because of the ongoing MEC. The changes for MEC and the changes for .11p will need to be merged to produce a D6.01. There is no time urgency on posting this document, and it should not be posted before the end of initial sponsor ballot to avoid confusing the voters. The merge should be an easy matter because changes for the MEC were confined to clause 1. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

Meeting the terms of our conditional approval
November 2010 Meeting the terms of our conditional approval See document 11-10/0801r3 We have met the terms of our conditional approval No new disapprove comments No new disapprove votes We are not required to recirculate D5.0, because we have no disapprove comments, after withdrawal of the 7 disapprove comments. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

Sponsor Ballot prep D6.0 will be the version balloted
November 2010 Sponsor Ballot prep D6.0 will be the version balloted Have checked with IEEE-SA editorial staff that the changes we made meet their approval The CAC discussed at length whether D6.0 should be recirculated (because of the changes to purpose), and concluded it did not (Straw poll in CAC “are changes editorial?” result: 15,0) Sponsor ballot pool for P finishes on 14th September 2010. There are currently 184 people in the pool Academic 16 8.7% General Interest 56 30.4% Government/Military 7 3.8% Producer 71 38.6% User 34 18.5% 184 100.0% Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

E-Motions November 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0

November 2010 Motion - LB167 comments Approve comment resolutions in 11-09/0956r9 on the “Ready for motion Sept 2010” tab Stephens/ Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

July 2010 November 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) D1.0, – balloted as LB149 D2.0, – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. D2.01, – roll-up of n D2.02, – speculative editing of LB160 editorial comments D2.03, – Comment resolutions from Jan 2010 D2.04 – Defect resolution from D2.01-D speculative editing of MIB changes in 11-10/0216r2 D3.0 – balloted as LB162 D3.01 – speculative editing of LB162 editorials D3.02 – editing of LB162 technical D4.0 – for ballot D4.01 – Speculative editing of LB163 editorials Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

November 2010 Balloting Status Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 Process for D4.01 D4.01 speculative editing of 40 editorial comments from LB163 D4.01 is currently pending review by Peter and Mark. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 LB163 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D4.0.pdf Draft P802.11REVmb_D4.0 Redline.pdf Composite comments (all ad-hocs) m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Historic Page Statistics of REVmb
November 2010 Historic Page Statistics of REVmb Note, drafts balloted (i.e. Dn.0) have editorial comments hidden. As of D2.0, this implies ~18 pages of hidden comment text. Resulting unreliable deltas are highlighted yellow. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

November 2010 Motion - LB163 Editorials Approve comment resolutions in 11-09/0956r8 on the “Editorials” tab Stephens/ Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 “Go to ballot” Motion Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the first working group ballot on P802.11REVmb D4.0, Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 5.0 incorporating these resolutions and, Approve a 15 day Working Group Recirculation Ballot asking the question “Should P802.11REVmb D5.0 be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot?” Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2010 November 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) D1.0, – balloted as LB149 D2.0, – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. D2.01, – roll-up of n D2.02, – speculative editing of LB160 editorial comments D2.03, – Comment resolutions from Jan 2010 D2.04 – Defect resolution from D2.01-D speculative editing of MIB changes in 11-10/0216r2 D3.0 – balloted as LB162 D3.01 – speculative editing of LB162 editorials Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

November 2010 Balloting Status show evotes results formatted TG/WG BallotID Ballot Close Date Title BallotType Pool Approve Disapprove Abstain Return %Return %Abstain %Approve TGmb 149 27 June 2009 IEEE REVmb Draft 1.0 Technical Letter Ballot Technical 246 155 23 29 207 84.15 14.01 87.08 160 08 January 2010 IEEE mb Draft 2.0 First Recirculation Letter Ballot Recirculation 166 20 25 211 85.77 11.85 89.25 162 25 April 2010 IEEE REVmb Draft 3.0 Second Recirculation Letter Ballot 167 212 86.18 11.79 89.3 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 Process for D3.01 D3.01 speculative editing of 19 editorial comments from LB162 One of these comments (CID 3084) was subsequently transferred to GEN as it actually resolves some technical ambiguities in D3.0. However these speculative edits are present in D3.01, tagged with this CID. One of the 20 editorial comments (CID 3124) was not resolved, and was transferred to MAC. Having made this transfer, I have prepared a resolution to this comment in one of my submissions. D3.01 is currently pending review by Bill, Peter and Mark. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 LB162 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D3.0.pdf Draft P802.11REVmb_D3.0 Redline.pdf Composite comments (all ad-hocs) m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Editorials (18) – from LB162 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

November 2010 Motion - LB162 Editorials Approve comment resolutions in 11-09/0956r6 on the “Editorials” tab Stephens/ Count of Commenter Part of No Vote Resn Status N Y Grand Total A 8 D 3 6 P 2 4 13 5 18 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

March 2010 November 2010 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) D1.0, – balloted as LB149 D2.0, – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. D2.01, – roll-up of n D2.02, – speculative editing of LB160 editorial comments D2.03, – Comment resolutions from Jan 2010 D2.04, pending – Defect resolution from D2.01-D speculative editing of MIB changes in 11-10/0216r2 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Process for D2.04 D2.01 contains the roll-up of .11n
May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 Process for D2.04 D2.01 contains the roll-up of .11n D2.02 contains editing of ~50 editorial comments from LB160 D2.03 contains editing of 126 technical comments approved in Jan 2010 D2.01-D2.03 were reviewed 171 defects were reports (mostly from D2.01) Thank you to my reviewers: Stephen McCann, Jon Rosdahl, Kaberi Banerjee, Sudheer Grandhi, Mark Hamilton, Amit Bansal, Yuichi Morioka, Eldad Perahia, George Vlantis, John Ketchum, Gary Anwyl, Michael Montemurro, Matthew Gast. D2.04 is pending review by Peter Ecclesine Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 LB160 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D2.03.pdf + Redlines between D2, D2.01, D2.02 Composite comments (all ad-hocs) m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Recycled comments for review (11) MIB (2) LB160 Editorials (50) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Recycled comments for review
November 2010 Recycled comments for review 6 implemented as specified CIDs 2220, 2181, 2006, 2007, 2023, 2010 2220: conflict with .11n 2181: response incomplete 2006 & 2007: dot11PHYdot11TempType 2023: MIB description conflict 2010: missing deprecation reason 3 implemented in modified form CIDs 2030, 2076, 2075 2030: conflict with .11n 2076 & 2075: response non-responsive and ambiguous 2 not implemented at all CIDs 2011, 2061 regarding dot11TempType Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

WG Ballot 160 Comments November 2010 May 2006
doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 WG Ballot 160 Comments Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Status by ad-hoc – 2010-03-05 (summary)
May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 Status by ad-hoc – (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

November 2010 Motion - LB160 Editorials Approve comment resolutions in 11-09/0956r4 on the “LB160 Editorials” tab Stephens/ Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

November 2010 Motion – MIB Approve resolutions for comments 2214 and 2039 as shown in 11-10/0216r2 Notes: CID 2039 was previously resolved (Jan 2010). This submission proposes an alternative resolution. Draft D2.04 was speculatively edited on the assumption that this motion passes. Stephens/ Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

Historic Data Slides from previous revisions of this document for
November 2010 Historic Data Slides from previous revisions of this document for Jan 2010 Nov 2009 Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

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REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1)
May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) D1.0, – balloted as LB149 D1.01, – speculative resolution of editorials D1.02, – speculative resolution of minor technical comments D1.03, – editing of approved resolutions D1.04, – editing of approved resolutions D1.05, – roll-up of w D1.06, – defect resolution D2.0, – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. D2.01, – roll-up of n Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 Process for D2.0 D2.0 contains the editing of the 264 comments approved in Nov 2009. We needed to get the edits out as quickly as possible to give maximum time to the ballot itself over the holiday period. So we used an abbreviated review process. Bill Marshall and Adrian Stephens shared the editing and cross-checked each others’ work Matthew Gast also reviewed the edits. Thankyou to Bill and Matthew Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 LB160 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D2.0.pdf Draft P802.11REVmb_D2.0 Redline.pdf Composite comments (all ad-hocs) m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action TBD: xx-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls not yet updated to LB160 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

Draft 2.01 Draft 2.01 includes STD IEEE 802.11n-2009
November 2010 Draft 2.01 Draft 2.01 includes STD IEEE n-2009 It has not been reviewed An editorial review is planned starting after the session Any defects will be addressed in D2.02 or D2.03 Call for volunteers: if you’ve not already volunteered to help review D2.01 edits, and you want to join the party, contact Adrian by asap. So far about 11 volunteers Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

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REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1)
May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) D1.0, – balloted as LB149 D1.01, – speculative resolution of editorials D1.02, – speculative resolution of minor technical comments D1.03, – editing of approved resolutions D1.04, – editing of approved resolutions D1.05, – roll-up of w D1.06, – defect resolution Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 Process for D1.04-D1.06 D1.04 contains speculative editing of ~200 non-editorial comment resolutions approved in Sept 2009 D1.04 was reviewed and 62 defects were reported D1.05 was prepared containing a roll-up of STD w-2009 D1.05 was reviewed and 19 defects were reported D1.06 was prepared containing bugfixes for the D1.04 and D1.05 defects. Thankyou to the reviewers: Michael Montemurro, Peter Ecclesine, Matthew Gast, Kaberi Banerjee Jouni Malinen, Jesse Walker, Matthew Gast, Kapil Sood Thankyou to Bill Marshall for D1.05 editing Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.06.pdf + Incremental redlines D1.04->D1.05 etc Composite comments (all ad-hocs) m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

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May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 Process for D1.01-D1.03 D1.01 contains speculative editing of editorial comment resolutions (~770 pages modified) D1.01 was reviewed (~100 defects reported) D1.02 contains speculative editing of minor technical comment resolutions, and resolution of the D1.01 defects (~410 pages modifed) D1.02 was reviewed (~20 defects reported) D1.03 contains editing of comment resolutions approved in July 2009, plus resolution of the D1.02 defects (~12 pages modified) D1.03 was reviewed and no defects were reported Thankyou to the reviewers: Bill, Eldad, Gary, Jon, Kaberi, Mark, Matthew, Michael, Peter, Stephen and Sudheer Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

May 2006 doc.: IEEE /0528r0 November 2010 LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.03.pdf + D1.02, D1.01, D1.0 + Incremental redlines D1.02->D1.03 etc Composite comments (all ad-hocs) m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

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