1. 802.11 TGn Editor Report Sept 2006 Date: 2006-09-19 Authors: Sept 2006
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Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

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Abstract
This document summarises editorial activities on the TGn Draft and Comment resolution
It also contains a summary of the status of the TGn LB84 comment resolution based on the ad-hoc comment resolution spreadsheets
Status as of the start of the TGn session on
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Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

3. Editorial assistance: Editorial review:
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Acknowledgements
Editorial assistance:
John Ketchum
Editorial review:
Amit Bansal, Bjorn A. Bjerke, Eldad Perahia, George Vlantis, Krishna Pillai, Sanjiv Nanda, Solomon Trainin, Tomoko Adachi, Yuichi Morioka
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4. Related Documents TGn DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website)
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Related Documents
TGn DRAFT (members’ area of website)
P802.11n-D1 03.pdf  
n-redline-version-tgn-draft-1-03.pdf  
n-task-group-n-draft-d1.03-in-word-format.doc 
Comments “owned” by the editor:
n-tgn-d1-0-lb84-editorial-plus-duplicates.xls
Composite spreadsheet
n-tgn-d1-0-lb84.xls
Submission Template
n-tgn-lb84-submission-template-and-guide.doc
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Process for Draft D1.03
Each “A or C” resolution was implemented (if possible). The draft was edited and was also marked with a comment indicating the related CID.
The comments spreadsheet was updated with Edit Status and Edit Notes. Edit Notes indicate any interpretation or modification of the resolution that was implemented. Edit Status indicates one of: EI, EM, EMR, ER, EN (see next slide).
A complete response to the Comments approved in July in is document 11-06/0706r11 in the “Approved in July” tab.
The working draft and spreadsheet were reviewed by editorial volunteers who reported ~200 defects.
The defects were corrected, and D1.03 was published.
Time required (for ~800 comment resolutions):
2 weeks for initial editing
2 weeks for review
1 week for addressing defects and publication
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Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

6. Terminology Edit Status (New) Type (Ed) Resolution Status
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Terminology
Edit Status (New)
EI = Edited as resolution
EM = Edited with minor changes
EMR = Edited with changes, recycled for TGn approval
ER = Cannot edit, recycled for rework and TGn approval
EN = Nothing to do (duplicate of other resolution)
Type (Ed)
T = Technical
ST = Submission Technical
DT = Disputed Technical
Resolution Status
A = Accept
R = Reject
C/L = Counter/Alternate (equivalent)
D = Defer
T = Transfer
W = Withdraw
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Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

7. Implementation of “A+C” resolutions approved in July
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Implementation of “A+C” resolutions approved in July
Resn Status EI EM
EMR EN ER
EIR
Grand Total A
109
132 29
168 16 1
455 C 80 49 18
226 6
379
189
181 47
394 22
834
Status as in 11-06/0706r11
Since then, reclassified EIR comment to EI
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8. Treatment of recycled “EMR+ER” comments
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Treatment of recycled “EMR+ER” comments
These are comments that need input from the technical ad-hocs, and subsequent re-approval by TGn
EMR comments relate to the editor’s “best interpretation” of the resolution, but require TGn re-approval because what the editor implemented was substantively different to the resolution approved by TGn.
These comments all need to be discussed, modified (if necessary) and approved by motion in TGn as soon as possible.
The editor will then make any necessary adjustments to D1.03 and issue a D1.04 for approval before the end of the next full TGn session.
Unhanded EMR comments will probably delay the approval of D1.04
ER comments do not block the approval of D1.04.
However it may be instructive for ad-hocs to look at these early rather than late to discover what kind of resolution causes the editor to assign an ER status.
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9. Graphical summary of process
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Graphical summary of process
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10. Editorial Actions/Motions this week
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Editorial Actions/Motions this week
Action: ad-hoc to
collect defects in D1.03
answer questions on EM comments
Motion: Approval of “Edit Status”=EM (edit with mods) resolutions
Motion: Approval of EMR comments returned after review by ad-hocs
Action: revise draft as required to address:
Defects identified
EMR resolutions that did not agree with what the editor did in D1.03
Motion: approve draft D1.04
Motion: approve resolutions to (~100) editorials
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11. Status of Comments Database
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Status of Comments Database
The LB84 comments are distributed between 13 Excel worksheets in 9 separate files.
The comments are regularly checked against the original corpus, held in 11-06/0541r2 to ensure that no comments are lost, and fixed fields of the comments have not been changed.
The list of components follows on the next slide.
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12. Sept 2006
Monday morning status
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13. Component Files Sept 2006 Document name Version number Short name
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Component Files
Document name
Version number
Short name
Comments 14
editorials
Unapproved editorial resolutions 35
beam
Beam main sheet 31
general
General main sheet 33
mac
MAC main sheet 38
phy
PHY main sheet 29
psmp
PSMP main sheet 34
frame
Frame main sheet 03 ca
CA Doc main sheet 22
coex
Coex main sheet
dup
Unapproved duplicates
edited
Edited approved A+C comments
no edit required
TGn Approved R+W comments
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Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

14. Status by Component – Unique Tech only
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Last Updated By A C R L W D ER
EMR
Blank
Total
Done
% Done
approved 1
100
beam 23 97 17
123 4
264
137
51.8 ca 13 7 25 24 96
coex 14 34 20
113 2
202
385 68
17.6
edited
241
126
367
editorials 50
frame 8 9 16 37 69
150 33 22
frame 1364 motion 55 27
107
frame emr motion 11
general
64.7
general emr motion 3
mac 6 79 90
195
11.7
mac 1363 motion 42 21 86
mac 912 motion 18 19 70
mac emr motion 10
no edit required
174
226
258
681
phy 56 52 76
171
176
533
184
34.5
psmp
psmp motion 2 66 83 28
177
Totals
750
729
499
554
543
3124
2008
64.2
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Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

15. Status by Component – Ad-hoc main sheets
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Status by Component – Ad-hoc main sheets
Last Updated By A C R L W D ER
EMR
Blank
Total
Done
% Done
beam 23 97 17
123 4
264
137
51.8 ca 13 7 1 25 24 96
coex 14 34 20
113 2
202
385 68
17.6
frame 8 9 16 37 69
150 33 22
general 11
64.7
mac 6 79 3 90
195
11.7
phy 56 52 76
171
176
533
184
34.5
psmp
Totals
130
206
148
554
542
1606
491
30.6
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Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

16. Status by Component – Motion sheets
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Status by Component – Motion sheets
Last Updated By A C R L W D ER
EMR
Blank
Total
Done
% Done
frame 1364 motion 55 27 25
107
100
frame emr motion 2 11 13
general emr motion 1 3 4
mac 1363 motion 42 23 21 86
mac 912 motion 33 18 19 70
mac emr motion 6 10
psmp motion 2 66 83 28
177
Totals
203
171 93
467
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Bruce Kraemer, Marvell

17. Sept 2006
Tuesday morning
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18. EMR status Last Updated By A C EMR Grand Total beam 4 coex 2 8 12
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EMR status
Last Updated By A C
EMR
Grand Total
beam 4
coex 2 8 12
frame emr motion 11 13
general emr motion 1 3
mac
mac emr motion 5 6
phy motion 3
psmp motion 2 33 47
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19. Sept 2006
Motions
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20. Sept 2006
Editor Motion 1
Whereas the editor found it necessary to make minor modifications in the incorporation of TGn comment resolutions approved in July, identified with an “Edit Status” of “EM”, and
whereas 11-06/0706r15 has 181 “EM” Comments:
CIDs: CID, 24, 25, 44, 51, 123, 130, 157, 201, 461, 498, 560, 589, 610, 613, 623, 633, 663, 668, 855, 867, 874, 934, 936, 937, 978, 979, 1075, 1082, 1103, 1107, 1110, 1114, 1116, 1120, 1122, 1135, 1138, 1139, 1149, 1168, 1170, 1257, 1281, 1286, 1289, 1297, 1300, 1303, 1304, 1307, 1314, 1318, 1327, 1338, 1339, 1426, 1430, 1456, 1457, 1460, 1461, 1473, 1742, 1752, 1805, 1956, 1965, 1969, 1992, 2470, 2486, 2572, 3155, 3157, 3158, 3159, 3160, 3161, 3162, 3163, 3164, 3165, 3166, 3167, 3168, 3169, 3170, 3171, 3172, 3173, 3174, 3175, 3176, 3177, 3178, 3179, 3180, 3181, 3182, 3183, 3184, 3185, 3186, 3187, 3188, 3189, 3190, 3191, 3192, 3193, 3194, 3195, 3200, 3201, 3203, 3205, 3209, 3210, 3211, 3212, 3214, 3215, 3216, 3217, 3218, 3411, 3412, 3420, 3421, 3432, 3442, 3466, 3474, 3620, 3755, 3804, 3827, 3841, 3852, 3912, 3998, 4019, 4022, 4050, 4545, 4552, 4599, 4606, 4676, 4818, 5108, 5109, 5152, 5156, 5157, 6765, 6781, 6782, 6789, 7050, 7104, 7105, 7156, 7224, 7337, 7338, 7353, 7580, 7609, 7621, 7657, 7658, 9955, 9969, 10304, 10353, 11970, 11996, 12001, 12149, 12255
Move to accept the resolution of the comments as amended by the “Edit Notes” column where the comment has an “Edit Status” of “EM” (Edited with modifications) in document 11-06/0706r16 on the “Edited” tab
Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

21. Sept 2006
Editor Motion 2
Whereas review was requested of modifications in the incorporation of TGn comment resolutions approved in July, identified with an “Edit Status” of “EMR”, and
whereas the referenced EMR comments have been reviewed and updated by the technical ad-hocs
30 CIDs: 1443, 2334, 3976, 10079, 1311, 1209, 1423, 1445, 1455, 4638, 7276, 7283, 7612, 612, 632, 635, 1119, 1181, 1990, 3754, 3727, 3729, 5140, 8112, 1459, 7308, 6788, 3726, 3746, 1533,
(The other 17 EMR comments were brought before TGn independently by General, MAC and PSMP motions)
Move to accept the resolution of comments in document 11-06/0706r16 on the “EMR Comments” tab with the following modifications:
Correct the document reference in CID to 06/1412r3 (from 06/1442r3)
Remove “ and Table 15a” from resolution in CID 3746 (would otherwise make Supported rates element mandatory for non-HT STA in measurement pilot)
Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation