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CLAIM TO THESIS TYPES OF EVIDENCE
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Sometimes in professional essays the claim may be implicit, but in formal essays that you will write for class, the claim is traditionally stated explicitly as a one sentence thesis statement that appears in the introduction of your argument. To be effective, a thesis statement must preview the essay by encapsulating in clear, unambiguous language the main point or points the writer intends to make. CLAIM TO THESIS
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Closed thesis statement = limits the number of points the writer will make Example: The three dimensional characters, exciting plot, and complex themes of the Harry Potter series make them not only legendary children’s books but enduring literary classics. This thesis asserts that the series constitutes a “literary classic” and specifies three reasons – each of which would be discussed in the argument. A closed thesis will often include (or implie) the word because. Example: The Harry Potter series has become a legendary children’s book and enduring literary classic because of its three-dimensional characters, exciting plot, and complex themes. Take away: a closed thesis is a reliable way to focus a short essay in a timed situation. CLOSED THESIS
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Regardless of the type of evidence a writer chooses to use, it should always be relevant, accurate, and sufficient. Relevant evidence is evidence that specifically applies to the argument being made. Accurate information means ensuring information is not taken out of context and that it is from credible sources. EVIDENCE
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Types historical information – can provide background and context Expert opinion – a person who has published research on a topic or whose job or experiences gives him or her specialized knowledge. Need to make sure your expert is seen as credible by your audience. Quantitative evidence – statistics, surveys, polls, census information SECOND HAND EVIDENCE
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Specific and Accurate Evidence: Before any writing can take place, you must gather evidence to explore the validity of the assertion. Evidence used to support the "Agree or Disagree Question" must be specific and accurate—named and factually correct MAKE SURE YOUR EVIDENCE IS SPECIFIC AND ACCURATE!
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Write a meaningful opening sentence or two that makes a personal observation about the focus of the question that reveals your thinking. DON’T write flowery, general beginnings. Get right to the point! Use the first sentence or two to begin to define the meaning of the assertion. Allude to something here that will be finished in the conclusion. End with the thesis you wrote while brainstorming. (Note: weak openings are forgiven if the paper ends strongly. If running out of time, skip part of the body to make your conclusion.) ORGANIZING THE ESSAY
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1.Topic sentence/claim – refers to thesis found in introduction 2.Concrete detail sentence #1 shows support for the topic sentence (For example…) 3.Commentary 4.Commentary 5.Concrete detail sentence #2 shows support for the topic sentence (In addition…) 6.Commentary 7.Commentary 8.Concrete detail sentence #3 shows support for the topic sentence (Furthermore…) 9.Commentary 10.Commentary 11.Concluding sentence – sums up the paragraph ORGANIZATION OF PARAGRAPHS
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Make sure you take a paragraph to clearly summarize what the assertion is saying into your own words. Use a variety of evidence—aim to include at least three different examples. (This will give you at least a six paragraph essay form) In your intro, you must clearly state your purpose. (Thesis) Use examples that support your thesis. Don’t claim to know something about the larger topic and then give examples that prove otherwise. Read the assertion carefully—it is impossible to score above a 3 or 4 if you misread the prompt. Fully explain your examples—figure about a paragraph for each specific topic/ example. At some point make a connection between the prompt and real life experience. FINAL THOUGHTS
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