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初三作文改错 Proud of My School 1. My school likes a big family. 2. Do you know what fun in my school? 3. I have come to my school since three years ago.

4. Our school is looks like a big book. I can learn something what I want to know. And our school must teach me something what I want to learn. I like a fish and play in the knowlander-sea. In our school, I have lots of something interesting. Teachers like parents. Classmates like brother and sisters. All of them are very friendly. We often play games, together. They are always make something fun and make me to laugh. School is my the second home.

5.What do you think about ? 6. We can play on the playground, play balls, talk each other and so on. 7. There are so many trees and so much glass in my school.

8. Every year. Many students grow up in our school. At last. They will be useful people. And they are send to many places. 9. But the environment is very well. 10. So I feel my teacher isn’t my teacher, like my parents.

II. 1. In the evening, I usually watching TV or play with dogs. 2. I sometimes help my mother do housework. Like watch dishes or clean floor. I like do it very much. 3. You asked me what would I do this holiday. 4.I don’t feel well this days. 5. Do exercise can make me strong.

6.I think do exercise is very important. For our healthy. 7. Don’t do the homework all day. And have some time, like playing football., basketball. And so on. 8. I think that we have a healthy body more important than others.

9. I will do exercise everyday. 10. They are include dance. sing songs. Play with my friends. And travel.

修改以下作文 (1) Dear Jim, How are you? I’m fine. Thank you for your present. I like it very much. This red shirt fits me very much. And red is my favourite colour. Last week is my birthday. We had a good time in my birthday party. It was very lively! I was play games with my friends in the party. We talked and laughed. I think I have a great birthday party! I wish you can come to China. Then I can lead you to visit China. OK? And what do you do these days? Please write me soon. Your friend, Li Lei

(2) Hello Jim. Thank you for your letter, your preses very fit me. I like your preses colour. I am very like it. Now, I’m very nice. I have taken birthday a part last week. The part is very hot. How are you Jim, what do feel now. I want to visit you come to China. If you come here, I will very happy, and I like red best. I think I will be a cool boy. If I put the shirt on. thank you again I hope you will come my home next year, when I take my birthday part. I think, that will be very fun.

(3) I hope you come to my birthday party, and have a good time.

(4) This size is fit as me. I have lots of funny things, every day. I have done my birthday party last week. This party had many people. They given me that best wishes and lots of gifts. This week we will have sports meeting. I will join a program. I hope you will give me some wishes to win this race. What will you do? Do you like do it? I hope you can come China. I wait you.

(5) Hello, Jim. Thank you for your gift. I like it very much. The gift is my favourite colour and it fit me very well. I’m very well and last week I have a birthday party. The party was very fun and I feel so happy. Jim, what did you do last week. Are you have fun. I wish you to come to China soon. I’m miss you. Bys!

(6) I’m very well today. Last week is my birthday.

范文： Zhonghua street Shijiazhuang Hebei, China June 21st, 2002 Dear Jim, How are you? Many thanks for the shirt! I’m vet happy to hear from you again. I love the shirt very much, Jim. And red is my faourite colour. You remembered ！ It’s just my size. Every time I wear it, I will think of you. I’m fine here in China. Last week I had a birthday party. Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food. We really had a wonderful time together. How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much. I always miss the days we were together last summer. I hope you can come to China some day. Please write back soon. Your friend Li Lei