Proofreading Warm-up Item 1 Last month aunt sarah maria and me traveled to new york city and attend a poetry readding at symphony square. Corrected Last month Aunt Sarah, Maria, and I traveled to New York City and attended a poetry reading at Symphony Square.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 2 Do he or anyone else truely grasp the meaning of the poem. Corrected Does he or anyone else truly grasp the meaning of the poem?

Proofreading Warm-up Item 3 Trina have you ever considered writting a poem about you’re dayly chores john asked. Corrected “Trina, have you ever considered writing a poem about your daily chores?” John asked.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 4 “No” she replyed, but I think Ill pay attention the next time I wash the dishes. Corrected “No,” she replied, “but I think I’ll pay attention the next time I wash the dishes.”

Proofreading Warm-up Item 5 You done a wonderful job i have never heard a more lovelier reading of “Once by the Pacific”. Corrected You did a wonderful job; I have never heard a lovelier reading of “Once by the Pacific.” (more deleted)

Proofreading Warm-up Item 6 Few of emily dickinsons poems was published during her lifetime Corrected Few of Emily Dickinson’s poems were published during her lifetime.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 7 Shane couldn’t find no paper so he wrote his poem on his lunch bag, unfortunately he forgot and throws away the bag after lunch. Corrected Shane couldn’t find any paper, so he wrote his poem on his lunch bag. Unfortunately, he forgot and threw away the bag after lunch.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 8 i never thought of fog as being like no cat Corrected I never thought of fog as being like a cat.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 9 If I were fog I would lick the tops of the buildings the way a cat licks it’s paws. Corrected If I were fog, I would lick the tops of the buildings the way a cat licks its paws.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 10 Alice walker know that many woman from her mothers generation had hard lifes Corrected Alice Walker knows that many women from her mother’s generation had hard lives.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 11 As you read the poem aloud listen very careful to the rhythm, and to the sound affects. Corrected As you read the poem aloud, listen very carefully to the rhythm and to the sound effects. (comma after rhythm deleted)

Proofreading Warm-up Item 12 Mr wordsworths poem and miss wordsworths journal entry are both in our book, which one do you like best. Corrected Mr. Wordsworth’s poem and Miss Wordsworth’s journal entry are both in our book. Which one do you like better?

Proofreading Warm-up Item 13 Carlos never kept a journal before but he really enjoy it now. Corrected Carlos has never kept a journal before, but he really enjoys it now.

Proofreading Warm-up Item 14 the poet said that he stirs up controversy with words in the interview Corrected The poet said in the interview that he stirs up controversy with words. (sentence revised)

Proofreading Warm-up Item 15 for his project in english class jamal memorized four poems by pat mora Corrected For his project in English class, Jamal memorized four poems by Pat Mora.