A GUIDE FOR BEGINNERS ON THE RHETORIC OF S The Rhetoric of

What type of are you trying to send? Consider the following: Who is the audience of your ? How close are you with the person you are ing? Does this require a reply? Are you asking a question or seeking information from someone you do not personally know? Are you sending this for a business related purpose (attain an internship or job, make professional connections etc.)

If Your Audience is a Close Friend or Family Member When ing someone who you would regularly talk to in person or on the phone specific rules of rhetoric apply Personal s tend to be less formal that other types of . All rules about punctuation and sentence structure are more likely to be ignored.

Informal/Personal s Cont. The use of humor, internet shorthand, emoticons, or crude language are more likely to be used. They tend to use a more conversational tone and follow a “chat-like” structure. Examples of a Informal/Personal “hey emily I can take your friday shift if no one has… could you possibly take my 12:15-2:15 tomorrow(thurs)? if not, I can still take your friday, but thought I’d check:) Just let me know! Kelsey”

Informal/Personal s Cont. Example 2: “Ben, Where were you yesterday dumbass? You need to hit me up about the showt his weekend, ttyl. Chris.” Rhetorical Appeals of Personal s: Ethos- when discussing subject matter that both members are knowledgeable about or when talking about the values of the members. Pathos when the subject of the appeals to the emotions of the readers, most often used when ing family members.

Formal/Business Related s When ing someone who is a colleague or a superior to you a more formal and professional type of rhetoric should be used Business s tend to be serious in tone, while keeping to most rules of grammar and punctuation. Business s can vary in seriousness and structure, depending on the subject of the , and the audience.

Formal/Business Related s Cont. Examples that show differences in formal s: “Ben, I have one more check for you to sign. Let me know when I can get a hold of you today to take care of it. -Mike” This was written by a officer in a student organization to a member of the organization While this is not an extremely formal scenario, the rhetoric of the is more serious than an informal or personal

Formal/Business Related s Cont. Hello, I want to remind you that the syllabus calls for you to select a topic for your paper by end of day on Monday. I have posted a more definitive assignment for you to review. Also, keep your eyes open for articles on a current public relations issue (e.g. Phelps, Octuplet Mom, Christian Bale) that you will bring to class before the end of the week so we can create a deep database and use a web-based information tool to organize our knowledge on the matter. Have a beautiful weekend. Tim This is an example of an that a professor may send to one of their students. It has a professional and serious tone while still being polite

Automated or Mass s Automated or mass , tends to be very impersonal and structured. They are sent with a specific purpose, generally to inform or request information. Often automated s are sent by large companies to their customers or organized digital systems

Automated or Mass s Examples of automated or mass s: “To initiate the password reset process for your Google Account, click the link below: If clicking the link above doesn't work, please copy and paste the URL in a new browser window instead. If you've received this mail in error, it's likely that another user entered your address by mistake while trying to reset a password. If you didn't initiate the request, you don't need to take any further action and can safely disregard this . Thank you for using Google.” This is an example of an received from a company in response to a request for an online password. The is very bland and straight to the point because it is a general template that sent automatically

Automated or Mass Elon Events Management System Confirmation Emily, Thank you for signing up for the event. You have signed up for the Searching for Internships Appointment on 2/23/2009 at 10:45 AM. It will be held at 112 McEwen. Calendar Reminder You can now add the event you just signed up for to your /calendar client. If you would like to add the event to one of our support calendar clients, follow the directions below. This is another example of an automated that is standard except that the system changes names and dates

Overview Overall the rhetoric of varies with the audience and subject matter of the message Consider who you are sending the message to Judge the level of respect and the need for correct punctuation according to the audience and subject

Overview Cont. Good Rules of Thumb: If you would call the person on the phone regularly you can be more informal If the person is older than you or your superior use a respectful tone If the is being sent for a specific purpose to a large number of people the rhetoric may be bland and impersonal

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