Do Now Review your Concept Map from yesterday.  Are there more ideas that you can add to your list?  Is there another topic area that you’re interested in? Make your changes on your sheet and return to Mr. James.

WRITING AN ABSTRACT Tok, 2/20/2013

Importance  It’s usually the first thing that readers read so it’s strategic to make a good impression.  It’s an overview of the most salient aspects of your research.

When to write an Abstract  Many people write a draft abstract early in the research writing process.  The final version of a EE abstract can only be written after you have completed your EE.

What to Include – Depends on the Length 1. Your research question 2. Your main purpose 3. The importance of your research 4. A description of key previous research (optional) 5. The gap you are addressing 6. The approach/methodology you adopted (depending on the focus of your research) 7. Your key findings 8. The implications of your research

Questions to ask  When working out what to include in your Abstract, it is helpful to ask the following questions.  What is the problem or question that my essay addresses?  Why is it important?  What have others written on the topic?  How did I carry out the investigation?  What did I find?  What are the implications of my findings?

An alternative set of questions  Some might find this set of questions more useful.  Why did I do my research? What was interesting/useful about my project?  What was my methodology?  What were my main findings/results?  What were my principal conclusions?  What do my findings mean?

A combination of questions  What is the problem or question that my essay addresses?  Why is it important?  How did I carry out the investigation?  What did I find?  What are the implications of my findings?  Why did I do my research?  What was interesting/useful about my project?  What was my methodology?  What were my main findings/results?  What were my principal conclusions?

Methods focus  If your essay is about a new method, you will want to include:  the advantages (of the method )  how well it works

Variations on the theme  Abstracts written for the social sciences or sciences tend to focus on:  the scope  purpose  results of the work  Abstracts written for the arts tend to include:  background to the study  central thesis  conclusions drawn

Writing a Abstract 1. Give a general idea of what the research is about. 2. Introduce your research question. 3. State why the research is important. 4. Review the arguments of previous researchers ( two sentences). 5. Indicate a gap or limitation in previous research. 6. Report your findings. 7. Mention the implications of your findings for the field of research.

The language of Abstracts - guidelines  Use the past tense to refer to what was done and what was found at each stage of the research.  Use the present tense to comment on the significance of your research/findings.  Use active verbs whenever possible, e.g. ‘the study tested’ instead of ‘it was tested by the study’.  Use non-evaluative language - report not comment on what you have done.

Length  Aim for  No more than 300 words

What Not to Include  Definitions  Citations  Acronyms, abbreviations or symbols  Information that is not in the paper

Tip  Write about each point in proportion to the emphasis it receives in your dissertation.

Abstract The Internet has drastically changed how people interact, communicate, conduct business, seek jobs, find partners, and shop. Millions of people are using social networking sites to connect with others, and employers are using these sites as a source of background information on job applicants. Employers report making decisions not to hire people based on the information posted on social networking sites. Few employers have policies in place to govern when and how these online character checks should be used and how to ensure that the information viewed is accurate. In this article, we explore how these inexpensive, informal online character checks are harmful to society. Guidance is provided to employers on when and how to use these sites in a socially responsible manner. Clark, Leigh A. Roberts, Sherry J ‘Employer’s Use of Social Networking Sites: A Socially Irresponsible Practice,’ Journal of Business Ethics, 95:507–525 What paper is about generally. Indication of previous research Gap in policy Focus of research Usefulness of information in article

In this paper we analyse two Australian television programs, Marking Time (2003) and Molly & Mobarak (2004), foregrounding the ways in which ethnic Hazara refugees from Afghanistan have been (re)presented. We argue that by minimising cultural and religious differences both Marking Time and Molly & Mobarak construct and represent Hazara Afghan refugees as like a “certain us”, that is, as members of Australian core culture who are predominately white, family oriented and inclusivist. However, their differences are not concealed entirely and in both programs the Hazara also appear as the “other”, that is, unlike us. We point out some problems associated with privileging similarity and the possible consequences of these representations within policy making and Australian society more generally. What was done What was of interest What was found Implications Abstract (journal article) Rodan,Debbie & Cheryl Lange 2008 'Going overboard? representing Hazara refugees as just like us' Journal of Intercultural Studies vol. 29, no. 1 pp

EE Abstract Comparison Write an OEA paragraph that states your comparative analysis of two EE abstracts. Your paragraph should be no more than 150 words. Due: End of the Period.