12-Sentence paragraph Common issues: Tie evidence to theme in analysis This illustrates the theme that . . . because. . . Internal citations (Alexie) (“Eulogy”) (“30 Days on the Reservation”) (The Lone Ranger and Tonto Fistfight in Heaven) (Bill Moyer’s Interview of Sherman Alexie) (“Assimilation through Education”) Elaboration sentences MUGS = Mechanics Usage Grammar Spelling Re-do’s: Make any corrections needed and staple the new copy to the top of the old copy. Re-do’s must be in to me by the last Friday of the quarter—October 26.