Peer Review Backpacks against the back wall. You will need a pencil and highlighter. Peer Review

First, carefully read through the paper from start to finish First, carefully read through the paper from start to finish. Make notes regarding anything you notices the first time through. These may include: Spelling Good ideas Awkward wording Unclear information/ vague words Mistakes using grammar, mechanics, etc. Peer Review

Peer Review Does it match the prompt in the rubric? Thesis: Highlight the thesis Is their thesis the last sentence of their introduction? Is it clearly worded? What revisions would you make to their thesis? Does it match the prompt in the rubric? Thesis Statement: By attending ___________________________, I will be able to fulfill my dream of becoming ________________. If not, how can they fix it? Peer Review

Peer Review Topic Sentences: Underline topic sentences. Evidence What revisions would you make to their topic sentences? Evidence Do they have at least 4 sources? Put a star by each source. Does their evidence clearly support their thesis statement and topic sentence? Do they introduce their evidence? What revisions would you make to their evidence? Peer Review

Peer Review Citations Are the citations in parenthesis? Is there a set of parenthesis after every fact they use? Check to make sure there is only the article title (“Article Titles Looks Like This”) or the last name of the author (Jones). Peer Review

Do they have a good hook and a summary section in their introduction? What revisions would you make? Peer Review

Peer Review Do they have a strong conclusion? Did they restate their thesis correctly? Peer Review

Do they have effective transition words/phrases throughout their paper? Highlight these words and phrases Peer Review

Peer Review Write three things this person did well. Write two things they should improve. Peer Review