1. Super Strategies for Teaching Paraphrasing and Summarizing! Cristin A. Boyd Studies in American Language, San Jose State University, San Jose/Silicon Valley California USA superteach@cristinanderic.com http://boydsteachingresources.pbworks.com/

2. S OME ‘ SLIGHTLY R ANDOM ’ THOUGHTS Little to no research about teaching paraphrasing Limited resources for actual “how to” (most grammar focused) Activities based on 17+ years of teaching reading & writing (and a search for resources) Not an exhaustive collection (share ideas) How-to/what of citation is not black & white Accessible readings = soft sources (popular magazines) Justification: build skills & confidence Today’s Outline Challenges, activity, practice, variations, repeat End: more Q & A and create resources

3. TERMS & MEANING FOR THIS PRESENTATION Paraphrase: A restatement of an author’s idea. Usually a shorter piece of text -- sentence or two. Length of restatement can be as long as or longer than original. Attribution is required for every paraphrase. Paraphrasing is a fundamental part of writing a summary. Summary: A series of restatements about an article, essay, etc. Restatements work together as a whole. Summary is much shorter than original. Generally requires one attribution.

4. C HALLENGES FOR ESL/EFL S TUDENTS Ownership of ideas varies between cultures. Memorized sections of Confucianism Mother: Person I admire (Yongfang 2003) Paraphrasing may be interpreted differently. Restating words of scholars = bad news Common knowledge in collectivist cultures Some cultures are reader (vs. writer) responsible. Assumptions re: reader knowledge http://boydsteachingresources.pbworks.com/

5. M ORE C HALLENGES Reading skills Ss misunderstand original Ss depend on lower-level reading skills (decoding) Ss lack vocabulary Ss are preoccupied with grammar/sentence structure. Teacher feedback/learning focus on grammar/ sentence structure Grammar = mastery of language Textbooks don’t explain “how” to paraphrase. Teachers don’t explain “how” either.

6. T HE MOST PRESSING CHALLENGE ( IN MY EXPERIENCE / OPINION )... a misplaced focus on the word

7. W HY IS THIS A MISPLACED FOCUS ? Meaning in English is not character/word-level Sentences and paragraphs carry meaning Cited source info used to support paragraph-level ideas 1 paragraph = 1 idea (topic sentence, supporting, conclusion) Paraphrase = restatement of an idea (that is used to support another idea)

8. W HY DO SOME STUDENTS FOCUS ON WORDS ? Desire to understand everything Low-level reading/learning skills Words are tangible; ideas often elusive Native country learning (lang = math) Grammar-based paraphrase activities Heavy reliance on bottom-up processing Memorization-focused learning Word-focused L1 Example

9. L1 I NFLUENCE ON W ORD FOCUS mu ('tree') shows a trunk and two leafless branches of a tree. The bottom half of the character may be hanging branches or the roots of a tree.… the character doubles to represent "forest" and triples to represent "dense forest." It joins with the character for "person" to represent "rest,”... mo ('last' or 'top') shows a tree in which the top is marked with a horizontal stroke, while ben ('source' or 'origin') shows a tree in which the root is marked with a horizontal stroke. Relationships between characters complex also From: http://www.mmtaylor.net/Literacy_Book/DOCS/pt1.html

10. W HERE IS M EANING ? In English... -- a collection of words (groups of sentences and paragraphs) -- “discourse blocks” (Christensen 1963, Pitkin 1969) - - paragraphs (Kaplan 1972) By focusing on Words, Ss = Miss & Misunderstand main ideas when reading Worry too much about individual words, grammar & sentence structure Paraphrase slowly & laboriously End up with stilted, awkward, incorrect paraphrases (plagiarized content?) http://boydsteachingresources.pbworks.com/

11. P ROBLEMS WITH G RAMMAR - BASED PARAPHRASE ACTIVITIES Some combination of changes to original: compliment and subject positions verb from positive to negative verb from active to passive Focuses too much on words Result: Missed/misunderstood idea Poor/Jumbled/Stilted Restatement ExamplesProblems

12. T O T O OVERCOM To overcome these challenges & resulting problems: all paraphrase work in my classes is based on... First understanding an idea then restating it.

13. W HERE TO BEGIN : G OOD R EADING S KILLS ( UNDERSTANDING IDEAS ) Pre-read to get overall gist of article/section Read fast, multiple times Focus on IDEA/s Focus on content words (vs. function) Scan for main ideas In paragraphs and sentences Avoid getting side tracked on individual words http://boydsteachingresources.pbworks.com/

14. R EADING S KILLS ( CONTINUED ) R Mmy ading Skills Work through ambiguity. Avoid translation. Use dictionaries very rarely Use context for meaning Look up: important & repeated keys words only when main idea truly can’t be deciphered. Embrace a new style of reading! Resource: What good readers do handout

15. #1 PARAPHRASING RESOURCE ! S TEPS FOR PARAPHRASING W ELL Introduced and regularly practiced & reviewed... on board, in quizzes & front page of class wiki Resource: “Paraphrase Well” handout

16. S TEPS FOR P ARAPHRASING WELL 1) Read the section repeatedly to understand the main idea. 2) List important key words. 3) Cover original & restate the main idea in your different words. 4) Don’t worry about grammar! Restate idea first! 5) Check restatement for clarity of original idea (& original structure) 6) Check grammar & edit as needed. 7) Check attribution.

17. A S THE TEACHER … I CONSISTENTLY WALK THE TALK and focus mainly on Ss’ restated ideas I address grammar only after the idea is clear.

18. P ARAPHRASE “ ON THE RUN ”

19. Paraphrase “on the run” A fun, active activity for practice with word meanings from context (definitions) Original text posted outside class ‘Runner’ reads a definition outside (2 minutes) ‘Scribe’ is told meaning inside classroom Collaboratively write a new definition Same activity with steps/list article Ss can exchange and check others’ work Limit Time! Don’t allow Ss time to memorize!

20. V ERBAL R ESTATEMENT do activity

21. V ERBAL R ESTATEMENT Ss retell main idea verbally Speaking = less worry about grammar, sentence structure, perfection T can draw out some missing points/details; walk S toward main idea. “You almost have it, but isn’t there something about X ?”

22. M AGAZINE B LUBS Do activity

23. M AGAZINE B LUBS Use short blurbs from magazines. Provide a context for paraphrase. Ss work in pairs Limited time – about 5 minutes. Makes Ss focus on idea, can’t get side tracked w/ vocabulary, no time to look up words, pressure to report main idea. Short blurbs focus students on one idea Context makes paraphrasing more realistic Context focuses reading on using an idea for support

24. S UMMARY R ESOURCES “Finding main ideas” handout Summary Grid How to Write a Summary handout (on wiki) Debate in Costco Connection magazine

25. I NTEGRATION WORK To integrate paraphrased source into a paragraph Sentence 1: introduces topic (topic sentence) Sentence 2: introduces paraphrase Sentence 3: connects/integrates source & main idea. Resource: integration handout

26. S OURCE LIST 1: New York Times Up Front Nov 22, 2010 2: New York Times Up Front Oct 25, 2010 3: Health June 2009 4: Mothering Jan 2010

27. Thank You! http://boydsteachingresources.pbworks.com/

28. W HAT IS SENTENCE - LEVEL P ARAPHRASING ? W HERE DOES IT FIT INTO STEPS FOR RESTATING MAIN IDEAS ? Using synonyms Changing sentence from active to passive and vice versa. Changing parts of speech. Combining sentences. Inverting complement and predicate. See grammar toolbox web link/handout on wiki page. Only after main idea has been restated. Word level focus = lost main idea. Back to L1 reading skills. Only as a means to fine-tune a paraphrase; make it less like original. In some classes I never give out a sentence-based handout! Sentence-level paraphrase work When and where?