2The longer writing task This writing task is 45 minutes, including planning time.Your response to the writing task is expected to be fairly detailed and wide-ranging.In the writing task, you will be expected to be able to show how you shape individual sentences and then organise them into a whole text, and how you choose to use and link paragraphs within an overall structure.You will be marked on spelling and punctuation.You will need to use various linguistic devices and choose interesting language.
3The planningMake time to annotate the question.5 minutes planning.
4Giving the best responses For the best chance of getting high marks it is important that you:do exactly what you are asked. For example, if you are asked to write a speech, you will get no marks for writing a letteranswer the question that is asked. Make sure that you include material that answers the question. For example, the question will never ask you to include pictures, so do not waste your time drawing themrespond to all the prompts. (such as bullet points), if any are givencomplete the task in the time allowed. Plan your time carefully.
5Express yourself well Here are a few tips for writing good responses: Take your time to plan your response. Read each task carefully, make notes and plan what you are going to write. Before you start writing, check that your plan responds to the actual task and that you are not going to write about things which are not relevant.Use as many skills that you have learned and that are appropriate to the question as you can, for example in your choice of persuasive or descriptive language.Watch your spelling and punctuation.Make sure that what you have written makes sense. If you realise it doesn’t, change it. If you cannot understand what you have written, it is unlikely that the examiner will!Try to leave a few minutes at the end to check your response carefully.Think about your handwriting, even if you are in a hurry. After all, you cannot score marks if the marker cannot read what you have written.
6Writing to inform Some information texts: Railway timetable Guide booksRecipesReviewsLettersBrochuresPosters (missing person)
7Features of informative writing: Audience (degree of formality)Purpose (what is the writer trying to achieve)Clear, easy to follow layout of textUse of headings and sub-headingsOrganisation of paragraphsUse of topic sentences to introduce a paragraphUse of cohesive words, which link sentences and ideas.
9Writing to explain Some examples of explanatory writing: Text books ManualsNewspaper articlesLetterMagazines
10Features of explanatory writing: Clearly organised into paragraphs.Complex as well as simple sentences are used.Connectives such as ‘before’, ‘next’ and ‘once’ show the chronological order in which things happen.Connectives such as ‘because’, ‘since’, ‘owing to’ and ‘as a result of’ show cause and effect.The passive emphasises things and actions rather than people.Words such as ‘may’, ‘seem to’ and ‘apparently’ show when something is not proven.Explanatory writing can be in:- the first person, (I), if you are explaining something you did or experienced- the second person, (you), if you are explaining how to do something- the third person, (he, she, it), when you are explaining something outside your own experience.
15Advice to a new School Council representative The school year is almost over and your term of office as a Year 9representative on the School Council is almost over.The notice below, calling for the new form representatives, hasbeen posted on the class noticeboard.Newton Community High SchoolElections to the School CouncilThese elections will be held at the end of next week. If you would like to be your form’s representative on the School Council next year, you should give your name to your form tutor. Your tutor will explain the election process to you this week.Form representatives should be prepared to:listen to the views and ideas of members of their formattend all meetings of the School Counciltake part in decision makingreport decisions back to their formrepresent the school at functions such as parents’ evenings.
16You have been asked to write a briefing note for pupils who are considering standing for election to the School Council for next year. These pupils, who havenot been on a School council before, need to know what their duties will involve.You could also give some advice about the pleasures and pressures of the post.Write the briefing note for Year 9 representatives on the School Council.It should be about words long.Remember to:write in a style which is appropriate to secondary school pupilsbring your advice to life with examples of what you have had to douse the frame to help you organise your ideas.
17Over to you! Read and annotate the question in your pack. Plan your answer.Write the answer to the question. Try to include the features highlighted this lesson.