1. BING-BANG-BOOM
WRITING TECHNIQUE

2. WHY ARE WE LEARNING THIS.
MAKING A STRONG EFFORT TO BECOME MORE EFFICIENT WRITERS.
IMPLEMENT STRUCTURE TO PARAGRAPHS.
TIE COMMENTARY AND FACTS BACK TO THE MAIN IDEA OF PARAGRAPH.
BUILD THE WRITING LIKE A CRESENDO.

3. STEP 1: Topic Sentence Topic: DREAMERS
Clearly states the main idea of the paragraph.
Underline in RED.
Ex: The world needs more dreamers, without them barriers remain unbroken.

4. Step 2: Concrete Detail/Commentary- Bing
Concrete detail: Supports the main idea with a fact.
Concrete Detail: Underline in Blue.
Commentary: Writer’s opinion on the fact in relation to the main idea.
Commentary: Underline in Green.

5. Bing: Concrete Detail: Commentary
Walt Disney, a true innovator opened Disney Land in 1955.
Without his vision and drive towards excellence, millions of Disney dreams would remain unfulfilled.

6. Bang: Concrete Detail: Commentary
To strengthen this argument, Michael Jordan, a true dreamer was cut from his high school basketball team only to become one of the most decorated sports athletes in history.
Michael Jordan, a model of strength and determination is a true dreamer and example of excellence.

7. BOOM: Concrete Detail: Commentary
Barack Obama, a man that envisions himself as the first African American man to dawn the U.S. Presidency.
A true dreamer, this man believes in his heart that he can annihilate the discrimination barriers at the core of this nation.

8. Conclusion Sentence: Restate the main idea in a different light.
Paraphrase the main idea.
Underline in RED.
Dreamers defy the odds, they break social, economic and prejudicial barriers, we need more of them!

9. The Big Picture
The world needs more dreamers, without them barriers remain unbroken.
Walt Disney, a true innovator opened Disney Land in 1955.
Without his vision and drive towards excellence, millions of Disney dreams would remain unfulfilled.
To strengthen this argument, Michael Jordan, a true dreamer was cut from his high school basketball team only to become one of the most decorated sports athletes in history.
Michael Jordan, a model of strength and determination is a true dreamer and example of excellence.
Barack Obama, a man that envisions himself as the first African American man to dawn the U.S. Presidency.
A true dreamer, this man believes in his heart that he can annihilate the discrimination barriers at the core of this nation.
Dreamers defy the odds, they break social, economic and prejudicial barriers, we need more of them!