1. Structure and Framework Expository Essays

2. What is an Expository Essay? The expository essay is written for the purpose of presenting information. It explains, informs, gives direction, or shows how to do something.

3. Parts of an Expository Essay Introduction Body Paragraphs Conclusion

4. Intro. Paragraph Body Par. #1 Body Par. #2 Concluding Paragraph

5. No-no’s for Expository Writing  Do not use the word “reason(s)” in any part of the essay.  Do not use the word “you” unless the essay is persuasive.  Do not “piggyback” words (repeatedly using the same word throughout the essay).

6. INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPH: Short and sweet. Contain only your topic and position.(aka thesis statement) Topic: What is being asked in the prompt. Position: What your take is on the matter. (your point of view) No explanations or “reasons” should be included.

7. Listing only two elements in your introduction paragraph would leave an extremely short “blah” introduction! Therefore, to add some spice (be on fire!) use the “funnel” idea to your Introduction paragraph.

8. Introductory Paragraph (FUNNEL) The first stage is very vague, simply make a statement involving the topic. (Broad, sweeping statement) The second level works on bringing the reader to the topic and position (but not clearly). The third and/or fourth level should clearly state topic and your position.

9. EXAMPLE: Introduction Paragraph Funnel PROMPT: Think about whether you would like being a pet owner, or not? Explain… Throughout my life I’ve been faced with many individual choices and experiences. I’ve also thought long and hard about the possible decisions I’ll make in the future. Where to live, what career to pursue and where I will go to college are just a few. One thing I know for sure though is that being a pet owner is not part of my destiny.

10. A completed funnel introduction paragraph Throughout my life I’ve been faced with many individual choices and experiences. I’ve also thought long and hard about the possible decisions I’ll make in the future. Where to live, what career to pursue and where I will go to college are just a few. One thing I know for sure though is that being a pet owner is not part of my destiny.

11. SUMMARY How to Write an Outstanding Introductory paragraph 1.Never give an explanation or a reason in the introduction. 2. Always indent. 3. Be sure the paragraph includes at least 3 to 5 sentences, with all sentences beginning with capital letters and ending with punctuation. 4. Make sure the introductory paragraph contains these two items: A.Your topic sentence (refers to the prompt) B. Your position about what’s being asked in the prompt

12. BODY PARAGRAPHS

13. Body Paragraphs Body paragraphs are the “meat and potatoes” of any essay. The body paragraphs are where supporting details/reasons belong. In timed writing, there should only be two body paragraphs.

14. Body Paragraphs Body paragraphs include each of the following four elements: Transitions Statements One time when’s (OTW)/anecdotes Thesis tie-in

15. Transitions The first element of the four parts to the body paragraph: Transitions (change or passing from a place, activity, thing, time, etc.) Transitions Transitions make sections of an essay flow. transitions For the purposes of learning the structure and foundation of a strong essay, at first all students will use the same three transitions (“To begin with,” “Furthermore” and “Ultimately”).

16. Statements Statements The second element of the four parts to the body paragraph: Statements  The “statements” are the vital part of the essay.  The statement or topic sentence reveals to the reader what the paragraph is going to be about.  The statements are the support for your position.

17. This is an example of an effective statement: To begin with To begin with, I don’t ever want to own pets because they are way too expensive. This is an example of an ineffective statement: To begin with, To begin with, I don’t want to be a pet owner because they are not for me.

18. Anecdotes (One Time When-OTW) The third element of the four parts to the body paragraph:  Anecdotes or “one time when’s” are personal stories told to illustrate a point.  OTWs support the statements.

19. Anecdotes One Time When (OTW) (Example) To begin, pets can be extremely messy. I remember one time when we got a pet kitten and it shed all over the house and left balls of hair and shredded newspapers everywhere. It’s no wonder I don’t want another pet.

20. The last element of the four parts to the body paragraph: Thesis Tie-in The thesis tie-in is the most difficult and most easily forgotten component of the body paragraph. However, it is essential. Without the thesis tie-in, the essay will be off-task. Why? The thesis tie- in effectively ties the whole paragraph back to the main topic.

21. Thesis Tie-In (Example) To begin, pets can be extremely messy. I remember one time when we got a pet kitten and it shed all over the house and left balls of hair and shredded newspapers everywhere. It’s no wonder I don’t want another pet.

22. The conclusion paragraph wraps up the essay briefly. The conclusion should quickly sum up the point of view and lightly brush upon the support (reiterating the statements in the body paragraphs. The conclusion starts with a transition (ultimately,) and restates the topic and position similar to a thesis tie-in. An extra sentence or two added after the reiteration of support adds voice (spice it up). Conclusion Paragraph

23. Ultimately, being a pet owner is definitely not in my future. Pets can be extremely messy and expensive to care for. I do not have what it takes to be a pet owner. Conclusion Paragraph Example

24. Planning Web Body 1 Topic and Position Introduction Body 2 Conclusion First Supporting Reason Second Supporting Reason (Support) Anecdote Restate topic, position, and supporting reasons

25. Planning Web Body 1 Pet Owner No Introduction Body 2 Conclusion Extremely Messy Expensive to care for Kitten shed, shred newspa per Pet owner No Messy & $ Vet bills