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You have been doing a project on travel and tourism. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay giving your opinions on the following statement. Travel broadens the mind and widens our horizons. You should state whether you agree or disagree with this statement, explaining your reasons clearly.. Write your Essay in 120-180 words. Find the following information from the task. Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal What do you need to include? Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Does the example answer the task? Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal Content Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Does the example answer the task? Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal Content Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Does the example answer the task? Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal Content Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Does the example answer the task? Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal Content Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Does the example answer the task? Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal Content Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Does the example answer the task? Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal Content Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Does the example answer the task? Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal Content Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Does the example answer the task? Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal Content Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons What else should an essay include? Brief introduction including some background information
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Does the example answer the task? Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal Content Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons What else should an essay include? Brief introduction including some background information
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Does the example answer the task? Type of text. Reader. Register. Essay Teacher Formal Content Aim.Give opinion Whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Some reasons to support your opinion. Explanations of the reasons What else should an essay include? Brief introduction including some background information What is missing? Conclusion!
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. Choose the correct conclusion To conclude, I strongly believe that if we travel with an open mind, our horizons will be widened even further. In conclusion, Travelling abroad is one of the best ways to spend your holidays My favourite place to go is the far East. Culturally, it is very different and it really made me realise how life is different in other parts of the world. To conclude, It is my opinion that although travel has benefited our society, we should limit the amount we travel by aeroplane to protect the environment for future generations What do you need to check again when deciding on your conclusion? You have been doing a project on travel and tourism. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay giving your opinions on the following statement. Travel broadens the mind and widens our horizons. You should state whether you agree or disagree with this statement, explaining your reasons clearly.. THE TASK!
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. To conclude, I strongly believe that if we travel with an open mind, our horizons will be widened even further. Choose the correct conclusion What do you need to check again when deciding on your conclusion? You have been doing a project on travel and tourism. Your teacher has asked you to write an essay giving your opinions on the following statement. Travel broadens the mind and widens our horizons. You should state whether you agree or disagree with this statement, explaining your reasons clearly.. THE TASK!
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. To conclude, I strongly believe that if we travel with an open mind, our horizons will be widened even further. Other important ingredients of an essay Indicate order of points To show the result of something
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. To conclude, I strongly believe that if we travel with an open mind, our horizons will be widened even further. Other important ingredients of an essay To show the result of something Indicate order of points
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. To conclude, I strongly believe that if we travel with an open mind, our horizons will be widened even further. Other important ingredients of an essay To show the result of something Indicate order of points
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. To conclude, I strongly believe that if we travel with an open mind, our horizons will be widened even further. Other important ingredients of an essay To show the result of something Introduce opinion Indicate order of points
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. To conclude, I strongly believe that if we travel with an open mind, our horizons will be widened even further. Other important ingredients of an essay To show the result of something Introduce opinion Indicate order of points
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Travel abroad is no longer a luxury and nowadays most people in my country have had at least one foreign holiday. Personally, I think this has benefited our society in a number of ways. Firstly, it enables us to observe and value other cultures and to understand that ours is not the only way of life. Consequently, this helps combat ignorance and narrow –mindedness, which so often lead to racial prejudice and even violence. Secondly, foreign tourists can learn from and ‘borrow’ those aspects of other cultures which are better that in their own country. It seems to me that the improvement in my country’s eating habits owes a great deal to foreign travel. Another benefit is that the more people can now see the world’s most spectacular natural sights and visit it’s most important historic monuments. As a result, we discover our planet and become more knowledgeable in a way that is simply not possible with the internet or television. To conclude, I strongly believe that if we travel with an open mind, our horizons will be widened even further. IN SUMMARY Decide whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Think of three reasons for that opinion Think of a way of expanding those three ideas. Only AFTER doing this should you start to write!
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