1. Structure of an Essay:

2. “FLEE” Map – the basic structure for writing an essay
Introduction
Reason #1
(Evidence #1)
Reason #2
(Evidence #2)
Reason #3
(Evidence #3) OR
Example
Example
Example
Explanation
Explanation
Explanation
Elaboration
Elaboration
Elaboration
Conclusion
= Transitions

3. Introduction General statement that introduces the topic.
Additional statements that lead into the thesis statement.
Thesis statement.

4. Introduction – Think of an introduction as an upside down triangle.
General
General statement that introduces the topic.
Additional statements that lead into the thesis statement.
Thesis statement.
Specific

5. Strategies for Introductions
An intriguing example
A provocative quotation (with a lead-in)
A general statement or universal observation.
Other strategies include: vivid and concise anecdotes, a thought-provoking question, or a surprising fact/statistic (Although these are effective strategies, you will not be using any of these strategies from #4 in your papers).

6. Example of a General Statement
Today, there is no doubting the fact that we lead faster-paced lives.

7. After you make a general statement…
You need transitional statements or elaborations that connect your general statement to your thesis.
Examples:
It seems hardly anyone has time to do get anything done and we are always looking for a quicker way to do things.
From drive-thru banking to self -serve gas stations, there seems to be no end in sight.
This trend has long ago surfaced in our choice of food and fast food restaurants have become a huge business as people “rush” from place to place.

8. Thesis statement
Your last sentence is the thesis.
Example:
Although many of us find fast food convenient when we are in a hurry, it is a bad idea to eat it too much or too often as it can have a very negative impact on our health.

9. Example of an Introduction:
[General statement]: Today, there is no doubting the fact that we lead faster-paced lives.
[Transitional statement(s)]: It seems hardly anyone has time to do get anything done and we are always looking for a quicker way to do things. From drive-thru banking to self -serve gas stations, there seems to be no end in sight. This trend has long ago surfaced in our choice of food and fast food restaurants have become a huge business as people “rush” from place to place.
[Thesis]: Although many of us find fast food convenient when we are in a hurry, it is a bad idea to eat it too much or too often as it can have a very negative impact on our health.

10. Introduction example
Today, there is no doubting the fact that we lead faster-paced lives. It seems hardly anyone has time to do get anything done and we are always looking for a quicker way to do things. From drive-thru banking to self -serve gas stations, there seems to be no end in sight. This trend has long ago surfaced in our choice of food and fast food restaurants have become a huge business as people “rush” from place to place. Although many of us find fast food convenient when we are in a hurry, it is a bad idea to eat it too much or too often as it can have a very negative impact on our health.

11. You give it a try… School is great ..School is boring
General statement:
Transitional statement(s):
Thesis statement:

12. Example

13. “FLEE” Map – the basic structure for writing an essay
Introduction
Reason #1
(Evidence #1)
Reason #2
(Evidence #2)
Reason #3
(Evidence #3) OR
Example
Example
Example
Explanation
Explanation
Explanation
Elaboration
Elaboration
Elaboration
Conclusion
= Transitions

14. Body paragraphs Body Paragraphs (Paragraph Frame): Topic sentence
Evidence (specific example, detail, or reason that “proves” the topic sentence)
Commentary/Connection/Explain (interpretation of how the example relates to the topic sentence.)
Additional supporting sentences with evidence and commentary.
Concluding sentence

15. A paragraph might look like this…
Topic sentence: [One of your observations that stems from the thesis]
Evidence: [A quote or descriptive paraphrase/summary of an example].
Commentary: [How your evidence relates to your thesis – controlling idea]
Evidence: [Further quote or summary…
Commentary: [Relate to thesis…]
Evidence: [Additional info.]
Commentary: “ “
Concluding Sentence: Rephrases your main idea/observation.
Transitional Sentence (may be combined with the concluding sentence or the next topic sentence) [Blend of Plot & Thought]

16. BALANCE!!!
You want your body paragraphs to have a balance of reasons/plot /examples/facts and thought!
50% PLOT
50% THOUGHT
It is acceptable to have more thought than plot but not the other way around.

17. Sample body paragraph
Let’s illustrate this point with a simple example; one that familiar to all of us. Recently McDonald’s in Canada has had the two dollar deal: a Big Mac and small fries. This is a very big temptation as it is very quick and cheap, and even my son (who doesn’t normally eat at McDonald’s) bought this meal last week. But what did he eat when he ate a Big Mac and fries? First, in the hamburger he got 570 calories, with almost half of them (280 calories) coming from fat. Ten grams of this fat is saturated, the most dangerous kind, the kind which is harmful to our heart. In fact, the Canadian Food Guide recommends that we "choose lower-fat foods more often" as not doing so negatively impacts our health. This of course, does not follow under those healthy eating regulations.
Can you identify the plot sentences and the thought sentences?

18. Sample body paragraph
Let’s illustrate this point with a simple example; one that familiar to all of us. Recently McDonald’s in Canada has had the two dollar deal: a Big Mac and small fries. This is a very big temptation as it is very quick and cheap, and even my son (who doesn’t normally eat at McDonald’s) bought this meal last week. But what did he eat when he ate a Big Mac and fries? First, in the hamburger he got 570 calories, with almost half of them (280 calories) coming from fat. Ten grams of this fat is saturated, the most dangerous kind, the kind which is harmful to our heart. In fact, the Canadian Food Guide recommends that we "choose lower-fat foods more often" as not doing so negatively impacts our health. This of course, does not follow under those healthy eating regulations. Black = Fact Red = Thought

19. You give it a try…
Topic sentence: [State one of your observations that stems from the thesis]
Evidence: [Provide a quote or descriptive paraphrase/summary/fact as an example].
Commentary: [How does your evidence relate to your thesis – controlling idea]
Evidence: [Further quote or summary…]
Commentary: [Relate to thesis…]
Concluding Sentence: Rephrases your main idea/observation.
Transitional Sentence (may be combined with the concluding sentence or the next topic sentence)

20. Transitions
Transitions are the links between paragraphs (and sentences/ideas) that help the reader follow the main line of thought.
4 Types:
1st type:
Standard devices – words/phrases. See list. These can become painfully obvious when used over and over again; therefore, avoid too many standard devices. Instead use hooks…

21. Some common standard devices:
Transitions to emphasize a point
Transitions to clarify
Transitions to add information
Transitions to conclude or summarize
again, for this reason, indeed, in fact, to emphasize, to repeat, truly
[Avoid: first, second, etc.]
because of, for example, for instance, in other words, put another way, that is
again, also, additionally, another, besides, equally important, for example, furthermore, moreover, further, in addition, next, finally, as well, together with, along with
As a result, consequently, thus, therefore, due to, in short
[Avoid: in conclusion, finally, lastly]

22. Transitions cont’d.
2nd type: Paragraph hooks – more sophisticated form of transition. The last word/phrase of the preceding paragraph is hooked into the first sentence of the paragraph and used as a point of departure for another idea. Should not exceed 3-4 words. The repetition hooks the paragraphs together. Ex. He is a gentleman who embodies the very spirit of loving-kindness. The loving-kindness begins to look a little doubtful when Twain’s darker writings are read.

23. Transitions cont’d.
3rd type: Idea hook – hook into preceding paragraph, but instead of repeating the exact word/phrase, you refer to an idea just expressed, compressing it into a single phrase. Ex. Twain is the spirit of loving-kindness. Such a view of Twain would probably have been a source of high amazement to the author himself.

24. Transitions cont’d.
4th type: Combination of several types – Combine standard devices with idea/paragraph hook. Ex. Twain is the spirit of loving-kindness. In contrast to this view of him, Twain would probably have been surprised and would have characterized himself as the opposite.

25. Example Transitions
But this example doesn't just stop with the hamburger. Oh, no! Now, remember that my son also gets a small fries! Unfortunately, there are another 210 calories in the fries, with 10 more grams of fat (1.5 grams of it saturated).

26. Types of Lead-ins for Quotes
The “somebody said” lead-in:
Ex. After he hears of Kemmerich’s death, Paul
comments, “I become faint, all at once I cannot do any
more. I won’t revile any more, it is senseless”.
The “blended” lead-in:
Some of the quoted material is left out . What is retained is
blended right into the sentence (your own words).
Ex. Paul becomes disillusioned early on by the war to the point
of becoming “faint” and views it as “senseless”.
The “sentence” lead-in:
This lead-in is followed by a colon.
Ex. Paul evidently suffers from despair after the death of his
fellow soldier: “it is senseless”.

27. “FLEE” Map – the basic structure for writing an essay
Introduction
Reason #1
(Evidence #1)
Reason #2
(Evidence #2)
Reason #3
(Evidence #3) OR
Example
Example
Example
Explanation
Explanation
Explanation
Elaboration
Elaboration
Elaboration
Conclusion
= Transitions

28. Conclusion
The conclusion needs to wrap up things and allow the reader to withdraw gracefully. How do you withdraw gracefully?
Rephrase the thesis
Make additional statements about the topic.
End with a general statement that leaves an impression on the reader (a clincher).

29. Conclusion (specific to general)…
REWORD: Rephrase the thesis.
REMIND: Additional statements about the paper topic. Mention some of your best points.
RELATE: General statement that ends the essay (clincher).

30. Conclusion Steps: Go to the introduction (rewrite it if necessary)
Reword your thesis (same meaning different wording). This rewording becomes the first sentence of your paragraph. You may have to add an appropriate word or phrase to this sentence to tie it into the paragraph that came before.
Pick a key word or phrase from the introduction and work it into the next sentence. This reworking creates an echo and provides a sense of completeness.

31. Steps cont’d.
4. Remind your reader of your most important points/ideas from your body paragraphs but do not summarize points by simply listing them. Do not be flatly repetitive; be interesting and selective. Remind of the points by using fewer and different words. Sometimes tying in the paper’s title is effective (if it is a catchy, good title). 5. Relate your thesis to a broader background. This sentence should be a universal statement, something that could apply to the reader’s own life. Leave the reader with an insightful ending which gives him/her something to think about, something which will keep your analysis alive long after it has been read. Ask yourself: what can a person learn about life from my paper?

32. You give it a try…
Reword the thesis sentence and add any needed transition word/phrase:
Using different words, remind of the most important body paragraph points:
Relate to life by sharing what a person can learn about life from your paper: