1. Journal Entry #69 Title: Biggest Worry
You have 7 minutes to write your response to the following questions. Be sure to explain your answers.
What are your biggest worries this term?
Why does this concern you? Explain your answer.
As always, format matters. Please be sure to write using complete sentences and correct capitalization.

2. Tuesday:
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3. Tuesday:
I’m…Los Angeles: An apostrophe is missing in contraction I’m. Los Angeles was misspelled and should be capitalized because it is the name of a place.
all-day: Add a hyphen to all-day as it is a compound adjective.
I saw…: A subject and verb needed to be added as this was a fragment.
Commas: Commas are added between the listed places as they are items in a series.
Downtown: Downtown is capitalized as it is considered a region; however, this is a debated topic.
The Sunset Strip: This is the name of a street and should be capitalized.
stars’: The possessive and plural form should be used here.
quite the tour!: Quite was misspelled, and only one exclamation mark is needed. TV, it: Commas separate introductory elements from the rest of the sentence.
than I had imagined: Then is mainly an adverb, often used to situate actions in time. Than is a conjunction used in comparisons. The verb tense should be in the past perfect tense (used when something occurred before another action in the past).
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