1. Treasures G3/G4
Writing Guide

2. Lesson Structure
Total lesson time: 1.5hr 1) 30min – Story Plan 2) 30min – Draft 3) 30min – Final Copy 4) Feedback

3. Part 1 – Story Plan (30min) 15min – revision 15min – story plan
Review theme and/or target language
LOFT (learning objective for today)
15min – story plan
Title:
Characters:
Setting:
Plot:
Beginning)
Middle)
End)

4. Part 2 – Draft (30min) Plot: 3 paragraphs (B/M/E)
3-4 sentences for each paragraph
YO/TH points (4 points per student)
youdao.com & thesaurus.com
Feedback – colour codes
Blue – great!
Green – grammar mistake
Orange – spelling mistake
Purple – write again

5. Part 3 – Final Copy (30min) Students use feedback to write final copy
Students may use coloured paper and fancy pens
WRITE YOUR NAME!!!
Students fill out LOFT form and glue to the back of their work
Assign incomplete work as homework
(don’t expect to ever see it again)

6. Part 4 - Feedback After class Next class
Teacher provides feedback on the LOFT form with comment and suggestion
Next class
Students read comment and write a reply
What will you do better next time?