1. D.L.P. – Week Three
Grade eight

2. Day One – Skills
Punctuation – Comma – Nonrestrictive Clause vs. Restrictive Clause
Adjective clauses begin with who, whom, whose, which, or that. They are often in the middle of the sentences and sometimes need punctuated. A nonrestrictive clause is a subordinate (dependent) clause that is not needed for the independent clause to make sense. This nonrestrictive clause adds detail and description, but since the independent clause can function without it, it must be set off by commas. (e.g. The boy who had red hair, won the election. His having red hair has nothing to do with winning the election, so that clause is set off by commas.) If the subordinate clause is integral to the meaning of the independent clause, it is called a restrictive clause, and no commas are used. (e.g. The boy who had campaigned hard convinced people to vote for him. Campaigning hard ties into convincing voters, so no commas are needed.)
Verb Usage – To know
The verb know is an action verb that is irregular. In the past, the verb changes to knew. (e.g. I knew that girl from my old school.) In the past participle, it becomes known. Past participles must include have, has, or had. (e.g. I have known about the test for a week.)
Punctuation – Titles
When referring to a title when writing, it must be punctuated properly. Shorter works are placed in quotations. Shorter works include poems, short stories, songs, a chapter in a longer book, or a newspaper or magazine article. Longer works include books, names of magazines or newspapers, and movies.

3. Day one – sentence one
O. Henry who had spent time in prison based many of his characters on people he had knowed.
O. Henry, who had spent time in prison, based many of his characters on people he had known.

4. Day one – sentence two
The main character in the story A Retrieved Reformation may have been based on a real gentleman bank robber.
The main character in the story “A Retrieved Reformation” may have been based on a real gentleman bank robber.

5. Day Two – Skills Pronoun usage - case with who and whom
The pronoun who is nominative. That means it can be a subject of a sentence. (Who is going to the party? The man, who is tall, is my neighbor.) Whenever no other subject is found in the clause, who should be used. The pronoun whom is objective; therefore, it can work as a direct object, indirect object, or object of the preposition. (Whom do you see? To whom did you speak?) Remember, if a subject can be located, use whom. They are underlined in the last examples.
Use of a comma after an interrupting introductory word
Punctuation – Comma – Introductory Words
When a sentence begins with an introductory interrupter, it should be followed by a comma. (e.g. First, add the eggs. Yes, I would like a cookie. Honestly, I don’t understand the problem. Then, the story continued.)
Adverbs –To modify
Adverbs are used to describe verbs, adjectives, and other adverbs. An adjective cannot be used to describe a verb. (opened quick must be opened quickly) An adjective cannot be used to describe another adjective. (real excited must be turned into really excited.)

6. Ralph Spencer is a young man who everybody in town likes.
Day two – sentence one
Ralph Spencer is a young man who everybody in town likes.
Ralph Spencer is a young man whom everybody in town likes.

7. Day Two – sentence two
Actually Ralph is Jimmy Valentine, a former bank robber who wants very bad to keep his past a secret.
Actually, Ralph is Jimmy Valentine, a former bank robber who wants very badly to keep his past a secret.

8. Day Three– Skills Agreement - Indefinite pronouns
Indefinite pronouns are words that can take the place of nouns, but they are not specific. They are also complicated to use since they affected by whether they are singular or plural.
Another, anybody, anyone, anything, everybody, everyone, everything, much, nobody, no one, nothing, one, somebody, someone, and something are singular. That means these words would pair with an action verb that ends in an s or a linking verb like “is” or “was.” (e.g. Everyone on the team is going to Pizza Hut.)
Both, few, many, and several are plural. That means these words would pair with an action verb that does not end in an s or a linking verb like “are” or “were.” (e.g. Many of the people are here.)
All, any, more, most, none, and some can be either singular or plural. To determine how to make these words agree with their verb, look at the object of the preposition that follows the pronoun. If it is singular, it needs a singular verb. (All of the ice is melted.) If it is plural, it needs a plural verb. (All of the pages are torn.)
Confused words – lie/lay
The verb lie means to rest or recline. It’s parts are lie, lay, and lain. (I lie on the beach. I lay on the blanket. I have lain in bed for hours.)
The verb lay means to put something down or to place it somewhere. It’s parts are lay, laid, and laid. (I lay the book on the floor. I laid the pencil on the desk. I have laid the papers aside for now.)
Punctuation - Comma - Prepositional phrases
When a sentence starts with one prepositional phrase, it is the writer’s choice to place a comma after it or not. Be consistent. Some single prepositional phrases involving time seem logical. (At first, I was unsure.) However, if more than prepositional phrase begins a sentence, a comma must be placed at the end of them. (On Thursday in the morning, I…)

9. Day three – sentence one
Someone knows Jimmy’s secret, and they are laying in wait for Jimmy to make a mistake.
Someone knows Jimmy’s secret, and he is lying in wait for Jimmy to make a mistake.

10. Day Three – sentence two
In an emergency at the local bank Jimmy must choose between keeping his secret and saving a child’s life.
In an emergency at the local bank, Jimmy must choose between keeping his secret and saving a child’s life.

11. Day Four– Skills Capitalization - Proper noun- Place
Names of specific places must be capitalized since they are proper nouns. These could include the names of buildings and monuments. (Empire State Building, Statue of Liberty) They could also include towns, cities, states, and countries. (Belle Vernon, Monessen, Pennsylvania, Peru.)
Punctuation - Monetary amounts
When writing monetary amounts, a comma is used to separate the thousands from the hundreds spot. (1,203) In addition, a period is used to separate the dollars from the cents. ($2.12) When writing numbers in general, be careful of the punctuation.
Capitalization - Proper noun – Thing
Names of specific things must be capitalized. They may be the names of products (Kleenex), holidays (Fourth of July), languages (French), historical events (Battle of Gettysburg), or companies (Nike). When the noun is more than one word, follow the same rules for capitalizing words in a title.

12. Day four – sentence one
Some popular O. Henry stories are about ordinary people living in new york city in the early 1900’s.
Some popular O. Henry stories are about ordinary people living in New York City in the early 1900’s.

13. Day four – sentence two
“The Gift of the Magi” is about a young wife with not quite two dollars – actually $1,87 – to spend as christmas approaches.
“The Gift of the Magi” is about a young wife with not quite two dollars – actually $1.87 – to spend as Christmas approaches.

14. Day Five– Skills Verb tense consistency
For logic purposes, the verbs used in a sentence or longer piece must be in the same tense. (e.g. I like cats. They are nice. They have fur.)
Comparison of adjectives and adverbs
The three degrees of comparison are positive, comparative, and superlative. The positive degree is simply the adjective or adverb. The comparative degree means that two things are being compared. The suffix “er” is used or the words more or less. (bigger, more interesting, less exciting) The superlative degree compares more than two things. The suffix “est” or the words most or least are used. (biggest, most interesting, least exciting)
A double comparison occurs when both the suffix and the words are used. It would be wrong to say the plan was more bigger. Use either the suffix or the word. (e.g. The plane was bigger. The movie was less interesting.)
A double comparison occurs when both the suffix and the words are used. Use one or the other.
Modifiers –Dangling Participles
A participle must describe a noun. (e.g. The running water is cold. The girl, swinging on the swing, is having fun.) When the participle is not placed near enough to what it describes or the noun is not present, the participle is said to be dangling. Running on the playground, skinned knees happen.) To solve this, place the participle close to what it describes. (e.g. Running on the playground, many children get skinned knees.)

15. Day five – sentence one
To get money, Della sells her beautiful hair, and Jim sold his watch, the most finest thing he owns.
To get money, Della sells her beautiful hair, and Jim sells his watch, the finest thing he owns.

16. Day five – sentence two
Their gifts to each other, a watch chain and combs, are useless, having sold her hair and his watch.
Their gifts to each other, a watch chain and combs, are useless since he sold his watch and she sold her hair.