1. Persuasive Elaboration
Add Support and Details
Explain Your Reasons
Why Should People Agree With You?

2. Try adding sentences like these:
The reason I say this is…
For example, …
For instance, …
This would be like…
One thing I know is…
If _________ then _________.

3. Try adding sentences like these:
In fact, …
The same is true with…
Let’s not forget…
Surprisingly, …
Let’s remember…
Furthermore…
Likewise…

4. Add a Rhetorical Question
Engage the reader by making them interact with your paper.
The question should make people answer the way you want them to answer.
Instead of No one likes to do homework.
Turn it into a Rhetorical Question:
Do you like to do homework?
How many of us like to do homework?