1. Gradebook 1
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2. Before we start
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Type of question: Tudor essay
Topic: HVIII government
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3. THE OVERARCHING PROBLEMS
Not particularly understanding what to talk about in a government question (as in which bits of the government)
Too much focus on key ministers/their reforms (Wolsey and Cromwell)
Not enough on Parliament, Local government, Privy Council etc.
Not particularly understanding 'fundamentally transformed’
Talking about success/positive impact = not relevant to ‘transformed’
Lack of linking each paragraph back to the concept of ‘fundamentally transformed’

4. To what extent was England’s government fundamentally transformed in the years 1509-1547
It is a question that covers all of HVIII’s reign
It is a question that focuses on consequence (specifically change)
It links to key question 2 on the course: In what ways and how effectively was England governed during this period?

5. Introduction DEFINE What words need defining in this question?
CRITERA What would need to happen in order for English government to have fundamentally transformed in the years ?
JUDGEMENT A) What will you explore in your paragraphs? B) What is your answer to the question?

6. Main body
You need paragraphs that suggest there WAS a revolution in government
You also need paragraphs that suggest there WAS not a revolution in government
Does this mean looking at ‘continuity’ or ‘what stayed the same’?

7. POINT
What are you discussing in this paragraph.
EVIDENCE
What SPECIFIC evidence do you have on this topic?
EXPLAIN
What does your evidence suggest about the differences/similarities between the N/S
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Does your explanation suggest there were ‘significant differences between the N/S C.1845?
Use the information sheet you have been given, and your essay, to re-plan this essay.

8. CONCLUSIONS REASSERT YOUR JUDGEMENT
HOW HAVE YOUR PARAGRAPHS PROVEN THAT YOUR ANSWER IS THE CORRECT ONE?