Depth and Development of Ideas Adding detail to your essay! Prove-its

Depth and Development of Ideas Adding detail to your writing. Use sensory imagery (i.e. taste, touch, smell, sight, sound), to rewrite your statement. For Example. The dog is wet. Prove it, but don’t say wet. The dog came in dripping all over my clean floor.

Prove It!! 1.The boys are playing basketball. Prove it, but don’t say basketball. 2.Your class is in the cafeteria. Prove it, but don’t say cafeteria. 3.Betty is getting on a horse. Prove it, but don’t say horse. 4.Frank is playing the piano. Prove it, but don’t say piano. 5.It’s Christmas. Prove it, but don’t say Christmas.

Prove It!! 6.It’s Halloween. Prove it, but don’t say Halloween. 7.Don is riding a bicycle. Prove it, but don’t say bicycle. 8.The girls are at the mall. Prove it, but don’t say mall. 9.Katie has lost her shoe. Prove it, but don’t say shoe. 10.It’s cold outside. Prove it, but don’t say cold.

Prove It!!! 11.The boy is afraid. Prove it, but don’t say afraid. 12.The playground is muddy. Prove it, but don’t say muddy.

Your Essay

Revising and Editing You have now completed another revision to your essays. Revision can be easy if you know how to do them!