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 Be easy but proper  Purpose  Length  Achievement  Statement Of Purpose  Ending

 For Academy: Your critical thinking skill, horizons, and academic ability.  For Job Market: Your passion, attitude, and experience.

 Better be 2 pages  Illustrate how your growing background influenced and crafted your personality  This background should also reveal your strong point

 Show what you have achieved  Illustrate what you have learned from the experiences  Show your personality and perspective from these experiences  Take these experiences to enhance your quality and impress others

 For Job Market: Describe Career planning and work attitude, how you get along with colleagues and bosses. And how you are going to manage the new job  For Academy: Show your academic insight, depth, and how well you understand the field

 Make your goal clear  Try as much as possible to impress people  Be honest and sincere  Editing, editing, and still editing

人味自傳 A Regular Person’s Flavored Autobiography Pauline Tsai 蔡詩葆

Start it like telling a story: 1 st and 2 nd paragraphs: Memorable points about one’s hometown Family conditions and members

His career oriented education experiences: 3 rd paragraph: How is his work experience related to his learning experiences? How he managed to keep approaching both in industry and academic fields?

Previous Work Experiences 4 th – 7 th paragraphs: After college→ big titled company “Coca-Cola” A big turning point in his career life How he dealt with his concerns about changing work environment?

The Outcome 8 th – 10 th paragraphs: In what way could he improve himself and how did he act to equip himself? What did he learn from working abroad?

Autobiography Sample 2 --John F. Nash Heidi

Purpose the occasion of winning the Nobel Prize be introduced to the world What would you as a reader expect to know?

Outline 1.Opening 2.Family 3.Education 4.Academic career and achievements 5.Personal life 6.Ending

1. Opening My beginning as a legally recognized individual occurred on June 13, 1928 in Bluefield, West Virginia, in the Bluefield Sanitarium, a hospital that no longer exists. Of course I can't consciously remember anything from the first two or three years of my life after birth. (And, also, one suspects, psychologically, that the earliest memories have become "memories of memories" and are comparable to traditional folk tales passed on by tellers and listeners from generation to generation.) But facts are available when direct memory fails for many circumstances. unusual expression colloquial

2. Family 4 paragraphs: father, mother, grandparents, sister focus: origin, profession, important event My father, for whom I was named, was an electrical engineer and had come to Bluefield to work for the electrical utility company there which was and is the Appalachian Electric Power Company. He was a veteran of WW1 and had served in France as a lieutenant in the supply services and consequently had not been in actual front lines combat in the war. He was originally from Texas and had obtained his B.S. degree in electrical engineering from Texas Agricultural and Mechanical (Texas A. and M.).

3. Education  Early education: 4 paragraphs focus: enlightenment And my parents provided an encyclopedia, Compton's Pictured Encyclopedia, that I learned a lot from by reading it as a child. And also there were other books available from either our house or the house of the grandparents that were of educational value. By the time I was a student in high school I was reading the classic "Men of Mathematics" by E.T. Bell and I remember succeeding in proving the classic Fermat theorem about an integer multiplied by itself p times where p is a prime.

3.Education  Advanced education:6 paragraphs focus: turning points and reasons, process of developing his specialty But while I was still at Carnegie I took one elective course in "International Economics" and as a result of that exposure to economic ideas and problems, arrived at the idea that led to the paper "The Bargaining Problem" which was later published in Econometrical. And it was this idea which in turn, when I was a graduate student at Princeton, led to my interest in the game theory studies there which had been stimulated by the work of von Neumann and Morgenstern.

4. Academic career and achievements 6 paragraphs focus: mathematic problems he solved Transition: Now I must arrive at the time of my change from scientific rationality of thinking into the delusional thinking characteristic of persons who are psychiatrically diagnosed as "schizophrenic" or "paranoid schizophrenic". But I will not really attempt to describe this long period of time but rather avoid embarrassment by simply omitting to give the details of truly personal type.

5. Personal life 7 paragraphs focus: chronicle of struggling with mental disturbances and his opinion about it

6. Ending Statistically, it would seem improbable that any mathematician or scientist, at the age of 66, would be able through continued research efforts, to add much to his or her previous achievements. However I am still making the effort and it is conceivable that with the gap period of about 25 years of partially deluded thinking providing a sort of vacation my situation may be atypical. Thus I have hopes of being able to achieve something of value through my current studies or with any new ideas that come in the future. unique perceptive on his life and convey his future vision

Uniqueness not always write in chronological ways not starting with the years theme-centered