802.11 TGmb Editor Report - Nov 2009 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 802.11 TGmb Editor Report - Nov 2009 Date: 2009-11-17 Authors: Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Abstract This document summarises editorial activities on the TGmb Draft since the last meeting Status of Draft Status of comments from LB149 Style E-Motions Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
November 2009 November 2009 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 D1.01, 2009-07 – speculative resolution of editorials D1.02, 2009-08 – speculative resolution of minor technical comments D1.03, 2009-08 – editing of approved resolutions D1.04, 2009-10 – editing of approved resolutions D1.05, 2009-11 – roll-up of 802.11w D1.06, 2009-11 – defect resolution Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Process for D1.04-D1.06 D1.04 contains speculative editing of ~200 non-editorial comment resolutions approved in Sept 2009 D1.04 was reviewed and 62 defects were reported D1.05 was prepared containing a roll-up of STD 802.11w-2009 D1.05 was reviewed and 19 defects were reported D1.06 was prepared containing bugfixes for the D1.04 and D1.05 defects. Thankyou to the reviewers: Michael Montemurro, Peter Ecclesine, Matthew Gast, Kaberi Banerjee Jouni Malinen, Jesse Walker, Matthew Gast, Kapil Sood Thankyou to Bill Marshall for D1.05 editing Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.06.pdf + Incremental redlines D1.04->D1.05 etc Composite comments (all ad-hocs) 11-09-0706-05-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action 11-09-0956-03-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
WG Ballot 149 Comments November 2009 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 WG Ballot 149 Comments Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
Status by ad-hoc – 2009-11-03 (summary) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Status by ad-hoc – 2009-11-03 (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
E-Motions November 2009 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 “Go to ballot” Motion Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the first working group ballot on P802.11REVmb D1.0, Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 2.0 incorporating these resolutions and, Approve a 15 day Working Group Recirculation Ballot asking the question “Should P802.11REVmb D2.0 be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot?” Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
Sept 2009 November 2009 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Process for D1.01-D1.03 D1.01 contains speculative editing of editorial comment resolutions (~770 pages modified) D1.01 was reviewed (~100 defects reported) D1.02 contains speculative editing of minor technical comment resolutions, and resolution of the D1.01 defects (~410 pages modifed) D1.02 was reviewed (~20 defects reported) D1.03 contains editing of comment resolutions approved in July 2009, plus resolution of the D1.02 defects (~12 pages modified) D1.03 was reviewed and no defects were reported Thankyou to the reviewers: Bill, Eldad, Gary, Jon, Kaberi, Mark, Matthew, Michael, Peter, Stephen and Sudheer Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 LB149 Documents REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.03.pdf + D1.02, D1.01, D1.0 + Incremental redlines D1.02->D1.03 etc Composite comments (all ad-hocs) 11-09-0706-02-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls Comments assigned to / held by editor For: resolution, editing or other action 11-09-0956-00-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
WG Ballot 149 Comments November 2009 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 WG Ballot 149 Comments Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
Status by ad-hoc – 2009-09-01 (summary) May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Status by ad-hoc – 2009-09-01 (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
Style – “Puttin’ on the Ritz” ** May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Style – “Puttin’ on the Ritz” ** Decisions on global edits made by TGmb are effectively creating a “TGmb style” Adrian and Bill are creating a document to describe this style Based on decisions made by TGmb on editorial comments This style does not apply to amendments to STD-2007, but will apply to amendments to STD-20xx. Learnings from early TGn publication editing: publication editor will ensure stylistic consistency with STD-2007 Some unknowns: will publication editor of STD-20xx reverse some of these stylistic decisions? Are we wasting our time worrying about this now? Are we creating work for publication editor? ** http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Puttin'_on_the_Ritz Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
Compiling the MIB Hide any editorial tags May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Compiling the MIB Hide any editorial tags Save contents of Annex D and Annex Q as text Move contents of Annex Q just before “END” statement of Annex D. Comment out headings and Editorial Notes Run through MIB Browser If any errors fix them up till the file compiles while making matching changes in the Annex D / Annex Q sources. Freeware MIB browsers are available that can perform this compilation. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
E-Motions November 2009 May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Editorial Motion 1 Approve resolutions of P802.11REVmb WG ballot 149 comments in document 11-09-0956r0 on the “Editorials” tab Marshall/Stephens Motion # 6: 9,0,1 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Editorial Motion 2 Approve resolutions of P802.11REVmb WG ballot 149 comments in document 11-09-0956r0 on the “Minor Technical” tab Worstell/Montemurro Motion # 7: 6,0,4 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Editorial Motion 3 Approve resolutions of P802.11REVmb WG ballot 149 comments in document 11-09-0956r1 on the “MIB” tab Montemurro/Marshall Motion # 8 Withdrawn One comment (P), “compile the MIB”, see submission 11-09/0921r1 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 Editorial Motion 4 Approve resolutions of P802.11REVmb WG ballot 149 comments in document 11-09-0956r0 on the “Annex C” tab Moved: Stephens / Myles Motion # 9: 5,4,2 Proposed resolutions replace Annex C by a placeholder. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell
May 2006 doc.: IEEE 802.11-06/0528r0 November 2009 “Go to ballot” Motion Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the first working group ballot on P802.11REVmb D1.0, Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 2.0 incorporating these resolutions and, Approve a 15 day Working Group Recirculation Ballot asking the question “Should P802.11REVmb D2.0 be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot?” Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation Bruce Kraemer, Marvell