Beat the Teacher!!! Señor Broddle’s sentences are rubbish – see if you can do better. What can you put in to make these sentences better?

WALT: how to improve your work at sentence level Learning Outcomes: Understand what is needed to extend your sentences effectively in Spanish Identify areas in your own work for improvement Apply what you have learnt to improve 5 sentences from your controlled assessment

5 step rule for extending sentences. Say something Tengo un gato 2. Add more words Tengo un gato gris y blanco 3. Add more ideas. Tengo un gato gris y blanco. Mi gato se llama Pepsi y tiene dos años

4. Add an opinion and reason Tengo un gato gris y blanco. Mi gato se llama Pepsi y tiene dos años. Me gusta mi gato porque es divertido u juguetón 5. Add an opposite Tengo un gato gris y blanco. Mi gato se llama Pepsi y tiene dos años. Me gusta mi gato porque es divertido u juguetón pero no me gustan los perros porque son violentos.

Try the 5 step rule with the following sentence. Mi persona favorita es Michael Jackson. Say something Add more words Add more ideas Add an opinion and reason Add an opposite

WALT: how to improve your work at sentence level Learning Outcomes: Understand what is needed to extend your sentences effectively in Spanish Identify areas in your own work for improvement Apply what you have learnt to improve 5 sentences from your controlled assessment

Identify areas in your own work for improvement Highlight 5 sentences from your controlled assessment where you think you could apply the 5 step extension rule.

Apply what you have learnt to improve 5 sentences from your controlled assessment Say something Add more words Add more ideas Add an opinion and reason Add an opposite

WALT: how to improve your work at sentence level Learning Outcomes: Understand what is needed to extend your sentences effectively in Spanish Identify areas in your own work for improvement Apply what you have learnt to improve 5 sentences from your controlled assessment

Plenario. Share 2 sentences that you have improved with the person sitting next to you. How has this helped you to achieve your target grade?