How to write a proposal( 倡议书 ) 九年级写作讲评课

学校英语俱乐部提出 “ 听英语歌 ” 的倡 议书，请你就这一话题写一篇约 100 词的 英语文章，内容可包括：听英语歌放松心 情，有利于学习 ，有利于了解 空闲时间 …… 等等，可适当发挥。 注意：文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相 关信息。 参考词汇： vocabulary, be good for, improve

Include all key points 包含所有要点 Enough words 足够字数 30 students Some mistakes in grammar 一些语法错误 Beginning or ending 开头和结尾 Linking words 衔接词 NoUnsuitable 不恰当 NoUnsuitable The result 39 students Good Need to improve

① relax yourself… ② be good for study… ③ open up one’s mind… ④ in one’s free time,…… …… * Read the requests carefully. 审清题意 To call on ( 号召 ) people to___________________. and give reasons why they should do it 2. What are the reasons? listen to English songs 1.Why do we write this proposal? key points 要点 学校英语俱乐部提出 “ 听英语歌 ” 的倡议书，请你 就这一话题写一篇约 100 词的英语文章，内容可包 括：听英语歌放松心情，有利于学习 ，有利 于了解 空闲时间 …… 等等，可适当发挥。 注意：文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇： vocabulary, be good for, improve

It is relaxing to listen English songs. It helps we improve our English. Listen to English songs can learn some new words and improve our listening and speaking. We can open up our mind. For example we can know the music styles and the culture. In our free time, we can spend less time play computer games. One of your writings Task1: Underline the key points. * Include all key points. 包含所有要点

It’s relaxing to English songs. It helps we improve our English. and improve our listening and speaking. We can open up our mind. For example we can know the music styles and the culture. In our free time, we can spend less time computer games. Listen to English songs can learn some new words Task2: Correct the mistakes. 改错 Listening we can We can we can to us It’s __________________to open up our mind. one of the best ways listen play playing

Task3: Add the beginning and the ending. A. I think listening to English songs is good for study. B. Do you enjoy listening to English songs? I think it is helpful for us. C. The other day, my friends and I talked about listening to English songs The. They think students shouldn’t listen to English songs because they think it will waste time of studying. But I don’t think so. I think it’s good for us to listen to English songs. Choose the best beginning _____ talk too much before you get to the point one of the key points in the body part B What kind of beginning is suitable for a proposal? We should quickly get to the point. 快速切入正题 What’s your beginning?

Task3: Add the beginning and the ending. Beginning: Do you enjoy listening to English songs? I think it ’ s helpful for us./ … 1.______________listen to English songs! 2.______________ … ? 3. _____________ …. Let ’ s I hope we can What kind of ending is suitable for a proposal? It’s a call( 号召 ) ——a hope or a suggestion. Why not Ending: Share your ending. 和我们分享你的结尾吧！ *Use the suitable beginning and ending. 使用符合体裁的开头和结尾。

Do you enjoy listening to English songs? I think it’s helpful for us. It is relaxing to listen to music. It helps us improve our English. We can both learn some new words and improve our listening and speaking skills. Listening to music is one of the best ways for us to open up our mind. For example it’s helpful to know the music styles and the culture. In the free time, we can spend less time playing computer games. Why don’t you listen to English songs? It really helps a lot. Let’s listen to English songs together. Is it better now? Discuss in pairs. Try to add linking words to make it better.

First of all Next What’s more *Use the suitable linking words. 使用恰当的衔接词。 As for Do you enjoy listening to English songs? I think it’s helpful for us. ___________,it is relaxing to listen to music. _________, it helps us improve our English. We can both learn some new words and improve our listening and speaking skills. _____________,listening to music is one of the best ways for us to open up our mind. For example it’s helpful to know the music styles and the culture. _______ free time, we can spend less time playing computer games. Why don’t you listen to English songs? It really helps a lot. Let’s listen to English songs together.

How can we write a proposal? I hope.../Let’s.../Please... Why not… Body: ___________ Linking words: first of all, next, besides, what’s more, on the one hand, on the other hand, as for..., Beginning: We should ________ get to the point. Ending: quickly give reasons 1.Include all key points 2.Use beautiful sentences 3.Use suitable linking words

学校英语网站提出 “ 参加学校俱乐部 ”(Join the school clubs) 的倡议书，请你就这一话题写一篇约 100 词的英语文章， 内容可包括：能交到朋友，有利于减压，能学到 等等，可 适当发挥。 注意：文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词汇： make friends, be good for, relax beginning:_________________________________________ ending:____________________________________________ body:_____________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ Joining the school clubs is so good for us! Let’s join the school clubs together! Let’s practice! Group work

Make full use of time! Enjoy yourself after school!

Make the first writing better with the suitable beginning, ending and linking words. 运用开头、结尾和衔接词润色你的 文章。 Homework

Exercises 1.I think ___________ is good for health. swimming /… 2. I think ___________ makes us relaxed/happy...

Listening to English songs can help us learn new words. 1.Listening to English songs can learn new words. Who can learn words? Listening to music or we? 不符合逻辑 Correct the mistakes. 改错 If we listen to English songs, we can learn new words.