1. Writing a Thesis and Introductory Paragraph SHD 2013

2. You should have already: Completed your T-chart Picked “yes, SHD was justified” or “no, SHD was not justified” Picked four pieces of evidence. Two pieces should be matched to one PERSIA GEM, the other two need to be matched to a different PERSIA GEM. Completed your body paragraph G.O.s

3. Using Claims to Write a Thesis Look at each of your claims. Turn your claims into short clauses Example: “Is Starbucks justified in charging such high prices for its coffee?” Claim 1: Starbucks offers its customers several beverage options which attracts and retains customers. Claim 2: Starbucks provides diverse amenities which causes customers to remain, and purchase more. Clause 1: more choices Clause 2: relaxing environment

4. The components of a Thesis 1.You must acknowledge something about the opposite argument which will make your argument look superior. 2.You must state, simply, your position. 3.You must preview your evidence using the clauses you have made. Example: Although Dunkin Donuts is less expensive, Starbucks coffee is worth the higher price because it offers coffee drinkers more choices and a relaxing environment. You may combine the clauses: a more individualized experience.

5. Introductory Paragraph Must contain three parts: 1.Early sentences  grab reader’s attention Americans purchase coffee in unprecedented amounts on the go, and they want their coffee to be an experience, not just a beverage. Starbucks offers that experience, what they have created is not just a transaction, but a front porch experience, where the community matters. 2. Historical context  5Ws and H Starbucks began in 1971 in Seattle, Washington and quickly grew into a global coffee company and coffee house chain through innovation and fair trade practice. It has outperformed many of its competitors. 3. Thesis Statement  you’ve made it! Although Dunkin Donuts is less expensive, Starbucks coffee is worth the higher price because it offers coffee drinkers more choices and a relaxing environment.

6. Try it! Open Safari Login to GoogleDrive Open your SHD Instructions packet in desktop mode so you can edit it. Find the page titled “Develop a Thesis Statement.” Create your Thesis. Then, create your Introductory Paragraph. Finish both for HW.