1. Potters For Peace Jocelyn K Ballast

2. Mission Statement Offer support, solidarity and friendship to developing world potters To assist with appropriate technologies sustained using local skills and materials To help preserve cultural traditions To assist in marketing locally, regionally and internationally.

3. Color Scheme Grey –Business-like Gradient –Adds Interest –Still professional

4. Set-Up Simple Layout Text Navigation Visuals

5. Navigability Too many links Navigation

6. Text When the size of the window changes, The text does too!

7. Text Cont. Amount –Too much –repetative

8. Content History Purpose Methods

9. Tone Descriptive –History, situation Technical –Design of filters Informative –News, statistics, volunteer opportunities

10. Audience Donors Donor Page Pathos Appeal “Responsible”

11. Audience Cont. Volunteers –Volunteer page –“Brigades” US citizens –Looking to donate –Concerned with “sustainability”

12. Personal Suggestions Line up pictures with description!