1. Language Learning Support Section, EDB 1 April 2011

2. TimeProgramme 9:20-9:40 Registration 9:40 – 9:55 Welcoming speech Souvenir presentation and photo taking 9:55-10:25 Warm Up Activities 10:25-10:40 Break 10:40-11:25 Writing -discussion & Writing 11:25-11:50 Filler Games (Find the mistakes) -spelling -cohesive devices -tenses -punctuation & capitalization 11:50-12:00Concluding remarks Prize-giving

3. Why do we organise this event?

4. Raise students' awareness on the different stages of writing Provide a platform for students to write with collaborative effort so as to make writing fun Develop students' generic skills such as communication, collaboration and creativity Aims of this event:

5. Facilitate cross-school teacher collaboration and develop curriculum leaders Raise teachers' awareness on the importance of teaching writing skills explicitly

6. What do students do in this event?

7. Part 1 – Warm up Categorising words/phrasesCategorising words/phrases Rearranging jumbled words into sentencesRearranging jumbled words into sentences Rearranging jumbled sentences into a paragraphRearranging jumbled sentences into a paragraph Matching elaborations with topic sentencesMatching elaborations with topic sentences

8. Guide students to move from words to sentences and from sentences to paragraphs Raise students’ awareness of text organisation Highlight the importance of elaborating ideas in writing What are the functions of the warm up games?

9. Part 2 – Writing Promote the use of graphic organisers for generating and organising ideas, and revising the text features of different text typesPromote the use of graphic organisers for generating and organising ideas, and revising the text features of different text types Encourage students to use checklists to revise and edit their work in the post-writing stageEncourage students to use checklists to revise and edit their work in the post-writing stage

10. Part 3 – Filler Games (Find the mistakes) Raise students’ awareness of common mistakes SpellingSpelling Cohesive devicesCohesive devices TensesTenses Punctuation & capitalisationPunctuation & capitalisation

11. ‘In primary schools, teachers need to develop learners’ skills in the various phases of the writing process, viz. pre- writing, drafting, revising and editing.’ ‘In primary schools, teachers need to develop learners’ skills in the various phases of the writing process, viz. pre- writing, drafting, revising and editing.’ ‘Teachers need to develop a sense of community and sharing amongst the learners so that writing can become a collaborative and cooperative effort.’ ‘Writing is an essential element in English lessons and it can be made enjoyable.’ Source: English Language Curriculum Guide (P1-P6), 2004, p.152 Working towards the goals…

12. Language Learning Support Section, EDB 1 April 2011

13. Part 1 – Warm Up

14. Game A Categorisation of words There are 18 stickers in each envelope. Put the stickers in the correct columns. Fiction Groups: Non-fiction Groups:

15. Game A Categorisation of words Fiction Characters Setting Connectives Verbs Non-fiction Places of living Behaviours Food Taking care of the animal

16. Game A Categorisation of words Time limit: 2 minutes Put up your hands when you finish your work. Teachers will collect your work and check. If 12 out of 18 words/phrases are correct, a sticker will be put on your score board. Don’t Rush!

17. Game B Put the words in the correct order. Rearrange the words in the envelope to make a sentence. Time limit: 1 minute / sentence Put up your hands when you finish your work. Teachers will check your work. You cannot make any changes. You have to make 6 sentences. If you get 4 correct sentences, a sticker will be put on your score board. Don’t Rush!

18. Rearrange the sentences in the envelope to make a paragraph. Write the letters in the boxes. Game C Rearrange sentences to form a paragraph D A ECB

19. Time limit: 3 minutes Put up your hands when you finish your work. Teachers will check your work. You cannot make any changes. If you put all the sentences in the correct order, a sticker will be put on your score board. Don’t Rush! Game C Rearrange sentences to form a paragraph

20. Match topic sentences with elaborations. Write the letters in the brackets. Game D Matching topic sentences with elaborations A C B

21. Time limit: 4 minutes Put up your hands when you finish your work. Teachers will check your work. You cannot make any changes. If you match all items correctly, a sticker will be put on your score board. Don’t Rush! Game D Matching topic sentences with elaborations

22. Break

23. Part 2 - Writing

24. 2. Writing In this session, four groups will write a fiction text. the other four groups will write a non- fiction text. you will be given a question paper, some graphic organisers to choose from, a revision and editing checklist, a drafting sheet, a worksheet for writing the final product some pieces of rough paper.

25. you will be given 45 minutes to discuss and write. try to do drafting in 15 minutes a bell will ring 15 minutes before the writing time ends – make use of the checklists to check and polish your work Write down the number of words at the end of the paper ( xx words)

26. Awards FictionNon-fiction The Best Content Award The Best Organisation Award The Best Use of Language Award The Best Cooperation Award The Best Content Award The Best Organisation Award The Best Use of Language Award The Best Cooperation Award

27. you will be given 45 minutes to discuss and write. try to do drafting in 15 minutes a bell will ring 15 minutes before the writing time ends – make use of the checklists to check and polish your work Write down the number of words at the end of the paper ( xx words)

28. 3- Filler Games

29. We will answer questions about: Spelling Cohesive Devices Tenses Punctuation & capitalisation Round 1 Round 2

30. Who will play the game? Round 1: Spelling Cohesive Devices

31. Instructions: I will ask 12 questions. Questions will be shown on the screen. You have to press the light button before you answer questions. Give your answers only after your group name is called. e.g. Group 1 You need to give the answer a, b or c in 5 seconds. No correction from other teams is allowed. You will get one score for each correct answer. The group with the highest score will get a prize. Light button testing

32. Question Samples (Spelling)

33. Once upon a time in a quite country village, there lived there little pigs, They were the luckyest animal in the country. They had just got enough money from their grandfather to build three houses. A.2 B.3 C.4 Spelling Question Samples Count the number of mistakes How many mistakes can be found in this passage?

34. Once upon a time in a quite country village, there lived there little pigs, They were the luckyest animal in the country. They had just got enough money from their grandfather to build three houses. A. queue, three, luckiest B. quiet, three, luckiest C. quiet, three, luckyiest Spelling Question Samples Correct the mistakes Which of the following are the right corrections?

35. Question Samples (Cohesive devices)

36. My family and I visited Hong Kong last week. We had a happy time in Hong Kong. First, we went to Repulse Bay early in the morning. Next we went to Aberdeen. (1) _________ we visited the Space Museum in Tsim Sha Tsui. (2) __________, we went for a concert in the Hong Kong Coliseum. (3) _____________, we enjoyed a big dinner in a nice restaurant. A. Then, After that, Finally B. First, However, Suddenly C. Then, After that, Therefore Cohesive Devices Question Samples Which of the below shows the correct answers of the blanks?

37. Question Samples (tenses)

38. Last week, my mom buys me a tasty cake. I liked it very much. Recently, a new girl has joined my class. She will tell me that the food in Australia is very different from Hong Kong. She went there next month. Let me tell you about her trip next time. A. 1 B. 2 C. 3 Tenses Question Samples Count the number of mistakes How many mistakes can be found in this passage?

39. Tenses Last week, my mom buys me a tasty cake. I liked it very much. Recently, a new girl has joined my class. She will tell me that the food in Australia is very different from Hong Kong. She went there next month. Let me tell you about her trip next time. A. will buy, told, goes B. bought, told, will go C. bought, is telling, will go Question Samples Correct the mistakes Which of the following are the right corrections?

40. Question Samples (Punctuations & capitalisation)

41. Punctuations & capitalisation Time limit: 30 seconds/question There are four mistakes in the text below. Circle the mistakes and write the correct answers (the whole words) above the mistakes. bears are interesting animals, They like Eating fish. I like to read about bears but i don’t want to meet them! Bearsanimals. eatingI Question Samples Mark and correct the mistakes on the paper

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