2Characters in Commercial Fiction Tend to be more one-dimensional—think Ivan in “The Most Dangerous Game”Characters are often used to pull the plot forwardMain characters are often attractive and sympathetic— Rainsford is handsome and capable; even General Zaroff is described as handsome and well-dressedCharacters are usually fundamentally decent with larger than life characteristicsEven “bad” characters possess characteristics that are “desirable”—think James Bond’s sexual prowess
3Characters in Literary Fiction Literary fiction also has attractive characters—think Jane Eyre, Huck FinnLiterary characters are not always attractive thoughLiterary characters are usually a combination of both good and bad—think of Missie May in “The Gilded Six Bits”—she makes a very bad decision and allows unexplainable human emotions to guide her—very humanReaders often enter into the mind of characters in literary fiction—think—readers know what Rainsford and Zaroff think because they say--
4Direct PresentationAuthors tell explicitly what characters are like or have another character describe them Advantages: Clear and Direct Disadvantages: Can be dry
5Indirect Presentation Author reveals character through actions—what the characters say and do Consider how the reader came to know Frank in “Hunters in the Snow”—Frank’s penchant for young girls is revealed in conversations with Kenny and Tub Kenny’s personality is revealed mainly through his actions: trying to run down Tub, shooting at everything…
71. ConsistencyConsistency—Characters don’t behave one way and then change without a clear reason. Imagine Ivan suddenly deciding to rescue Rainsford—unless Rainsford had “saved” Ivan at some point in the story
82. Clear MotivationsClear Motivations-Characters actions derive from clear motivations. Ie. Joe obviously loves Missie May so his decision to stay with her reasonably follows the story. If he chose to throw Missie May and the baby out at the end of the story, Hurston would have needed to plant more doubt.
93. PlausibilityCharacters must be plausible—life-like—not pure monsters or contradict themselves. The characters must be convincing. Readers should believe the character could exsist. Think Hannibal Lecter in Silence of the Lambs
10Flat CharactersFlat characters usually posses one or two traits—Ivan for example is a scary thugMinor characters are often flat characters—little development
11Round Characters Round characters are three dimensional For instance, Huck Finn has many sides;Edie, from “How I Met My Husband” is seen from the perspective of the older Edie remembering the younger Edie—her character is far from perfect but definitely given a well-rounded description
12Stock Characters Silent sheriff Detective Mad scientist In Commercial FictionIn Literary FictionSilent sheriffDetectiveMad scientistInternational spyCruel stepmotherCharacters easily recognizedUsed in literary fiction but with individualizing traitsSherlock Holmes is a detective but he is uniqueTub is a “typical overweight dupe” but he is also an individual; he hides food; he’s compulsive and needy
13Static CharactersStatic characters remain the same throughout the story—think Loretta Bird in “How I Met My Husband”
14Developing CharacterCharacter undergoes a change—either in personality or in outlook—Joe in “The Gilded Six Bits” is essentially a young man in love in the beginning of the story. The love he feels for Missie May is teenage/puppyish. The love he shows for her after her huge mistake and the birth of the child is matureThe change may not be huge, but will be significant—Tub’s outlook on life may not be greatly different but….he seems to have a bit more self confidence after …. Shooting Kenny…
15Signs of Significant Change Significant Change in a Character Must Be:Consistent with the Character—Ms. Brill couldn’t all the sudden decide to become a streetwalker—not consistent with her characterSufficiently Motivated by Circumstance—For example, Jonathan, in Achebe’s “Civil Peace,” is shaped by the civil war which preceded the incident chronicled in the story. His reaction cannot be sudden bravado and bravery, when his past action involved burying his bike and his son…The story must provide adequate time for change to occur-
16New and Original Characters Development of truly new and original characters— particularly those which go on to set a pattern for future “copy cat” characters—is very significantJames Fenimore Cooper wrote The Leatherstocking Tales, one of which is The Last of the Mohicans. The main character, Hawkeye (known by several names throughout the series), was America’s first original “hero” and Cooper’s example gave birth to all the western, ride-off-into-the sunset characters---all the way down to modern examples like Rambo and so on…..