1. COMPOSITION MISTAKES 4 INTERMEDIATE LEVEL SECOND YEAR

2. Spend the day at a pleasant beach we had recommended a little remote To spend the day at a pleasant beach we had been recommended. It Was a little remote So we decided to go to hear to have better views So we decided to go there to have better views Once we got to the top us we are marvelled at the view Once we got to the top we were marvelled at the view Suddenly got all darkSuddenly evereything became dark In a few minutes began a great storm In a few minutes a fierce strom broke out We had no place to protect usWe had nowhere to protect ourselves

3. When suddenly a pastor we had seen he came to help our When suddenly a shepherd we had seen before came to help us The beach is always quiteThe beach is always quiet She asked after what happenedShe wondered after that what had happened We decided to go to swimming We decided to go swimming They were going to beach They went to the beach Let´s go to walkLet´s go for a walk John and David were agreed John and David agreed David told them to return David told them to go back It was more and more darkIt was getting darker and darker Chester, the dog of PeterChester, peter´s dog They understood each other without talkWithout talking They gave the van back to the garage They took the van back…

4. They did anything during hours They didn´t do anything for hours They was rescued They were rescued “Of course”, he said “Of course”, he answered We were running across the forestWe were running through the forest Everybody were sleeping Everybody was sleeping He never had been travelled to London He had never travelled to London Although this holidays will be a nightmare Although these holidays would be a nightmare They reminded that they had eaten mushrooms They remembered that they had eaten mushrooms 6 km before arrived France 6 km before arriving in France