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高三上期中考作文 Attitude is Everything. 围绕一句名言或谚语的夹叙夹议型议论文的写作 第一段 解读名言 第二段 具体例子 第三段 总结.

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1 高三上期中考作文 Attitude is Everything

2 围绕一句名言或谚语的夹叙夹议型议论文的写作 第一段 解读名言 第二段 具体例子 第三段 总结

3 第一段如何解读名言 1. As a saying goes:“ Attitude is everything.” that is true. 2. As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. It suggests that if you willing to do something, nothing can’t be managed. So personally, I think it is correct to say “Attitude is everything” 解读不到位 / 偏差

4 如何解读名言 1.As a saying goes:“ Attitude is everything.” in my opinion, only by facing difficulties bravely and seizing opportunities can one succeed. First we should spare no effort to study to study and make us equipped with the knowledge. In addition,… What’s more, … 2. As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything”, which is profound and self-evident, as far as I’m concerned. Only with a good attitude will we accomplish a wide range of assignments however tough they are. Since we put our heart into them, we will make progress of significance and obtain a lot through it. 过度解读

5 正确解读 1.As bill,the great American speaker, said:“ Attitude is everything.” It’s significant to have a positive life attitude. (Jin zheting) 2.As is known to all, attitude is everything. So it is necessary for us to have a good attitude to our life. (Chen shenqi)

6 正确解读 3. As is known to all, attitude plays a vital role in our life. A good attitude usually leads to success while a bad one deserves failure. (Wu haowei) 4. As a saying goes: “Attitude is everything.” it means attitude will decide whether we will succeed. If we take a positive attitude, we will be more likely to achieve our goals. (Zhang sheng)

7 正确解读 5. As Peter said: “Attitude is everything.” I strongly approve of it. From my point of view, it is important to have a positive attitude towards study even our life. (Wu yue) 6. As a saying goes:“ Attitude is everything.” I can’t agree with it more. Attitude plays an important role in our life, which can determine our life. A positive attitude may lead to good life while a negative one may ruin our life. (Lu yilun) 7. As is known to us, attitude is everything. It is our attitude that makes a great difference to our future. (Chen songwei)

8 开头(简洁,开门见山) When it comes to the experience of my life, I define attitude as the most important thing. (叶颖) …I totally agree with it because of what I experienced. ( 周子心 ) It may disappoint you that there are too many things in this world we can’t achieve, but we can change our attitude. (任菁菁) There is no doubt that attitude is of great significance… ( 汤心怡) I really think that attitude is everything that destine what you can be. ( 周子心 ) We can improve ourselves with an uplifting attitude. (叶颖) Traveling through the jungle of life, we are supposed to hold a positive attitude, which will help us go farther. ( 夏成艳 )

9 第二段开头常用的过渡性句子, 引出自己的例子。 1 ) My own experience is a good example of … 2) Take my life/ my experience for example/for instance. Take my life/ my experience as an example. 引出他人的例子 你校正在进行 “ 英语读书周 ” 活动。该活动要求学生摘录 名言佳句( quote )并相互交流, 以下是某同学的句子: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.” 请按下列要求用英语写一篇 100~120 个词的短文: 1. 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法 2. 举例说明理由 4) We may take a common/typical example of… 5) History/Our society is filled with the examples of fulfilling your dream with determination, and hard work. 6) The story is not unusual. It is one of many examples I’ve ever heard/read/encountered.

10 事件描述(控制字数,表达出情绪) …I felt breathless, and the legs were sore. But I pushed myself to continue as a determined voice in my heart leading the way… ( 周子心 ) Don’t deprive yourself of a chance to take the challenge. ( 汤心怡) Don’t deprive yourself of a fulfilling life that a positive attitude brings you. ( Anne ) I always regard myself as a normal girl, with no potential to win a prize…I hesitated at first, but at the thought of changing my attitude, I said yes. ( 夏成艳 ) It was too boring for a little kid to merely sit in front of the piano for such a long time. Thus I gradually lost interest. ( 陈林骋 ) I felt my face burning hot and desperately desired to run away… ( 叶颖 )

11 第三段结尾(针对例子,点题,比开头长一点,更深入) A correct attitude is like a compass, which can help you navigate the rough sea of life and show you the way to the shore of success. (林正直) No goal is impossible, no dream is too far-fetched, if only you get up rather than give up, if only you have a positive attitude! (林正直) Do remember: Good life lies, first of all, in good attitude! ( 夏成艳) Before we applaud for success, we should take pride in our struggle and great attitude. Once you take everything seriously and have a strong heart, how can the sense of incapability draw you back? (任菁菁) Having a positive attitude is essential to building self-esteem and self- confidence. You can also dig out incredible potential beneath your soul and embrace a more competent, mature and responsible self. ( 周姝 )

12 Never can we have access to success if we lack a positive attitude to life. Not realizing it, I just complained about my drawbacks before. Every time I was faced with difficulties in study, I only gave up thinking about them, believing I wasn’t intelligent enough to work them out. One day, my parents’ encouragement came as a turning point of my life. Since then, I appreciated working out problems and my grades got better. As a saying goes: “Attitude is everything.” No matter how tough the tasks are, we can accomplish them with determination and confidence. We’re supposed to believe in our competence, rather than being passive. Only if we have a positive attitude, will we find a new dimension of life. 程丹阳 16

13 You can’t deny that success depends on many things such as patience, opportunity or perseverance. Whereas attitude plays the most important part in it. Take myself for example. I have faced several difficulties in my life. However frustrating the problems are, I always want to try again and do my best. I believe my hard work will pay off and the situation won’t get progressively worse. In face of setbacks, we should believe in ourselves and keep it up. When complaining about life, you fail in the beginning. Sometimes, a positive attitude can be a light in the dark leading you to dream. Bear in mind that attitude decides, attitude is everything. 陈逸川 重写

14 As a Roman once said: “ Attitude is everything.”, which strikes the importance of having a positive attitude towards life into my heart. I took part in an English speech contest last year, but without paying much attention to it, I failed. This year I made up my mind to spare no effort to fully prepare for it. With a positive attitude, I grasped the opportunity of distinguishing myself --- I won the championship. Now I’m fully aware of what the Roman meant. Absolutely, attitude is everything. A positive attitude is shiny sunshine leading to a more fulfilling life, a belief that illuminates you to accomplish your goals, a guide that helps you get better in both life and work. With a positive attitude, no goal is too far-fetched, no dream is too big. The importance of having a positive attitude can be seen everywhere. 陈莉 25

15 Attitude is everything. A positive attitude makes us energetic while a negative one makes us tired and frustrated. Once I was tired of study and feel nothing was interesting. At that time I hardly smile and my grades dropped. For me, it was a time when the sky was black and everything around me was bull. Luckily, with the help of parents and teachers, I finally get my interest back in study. I realize that we have got to study, to put our positive attitude in it, to enlarge our scopes of knowledge and to embrace a confident self. My mind was relieved and my world was back to life. Attitude is everything. Positive attitude opens our eyes to the multiple world and gives us abilities to realize our potentials. The right attitude is of incredible importance. 25

16 Attitude, in everyone’s life, means a lot. In my mind, having a good attitude towards life is as important as having a healthy body. I think a good attitude means being positive. I have had many tests till now. Each time I fail, I won’t be sad but tell myself “Failure is the mother of success.” In this way, I can soon recover from the failure and be more hard-working. When I suffer from misfortune, I won’t complain but thank it for making me stronger. It is my attitude that makes me so successful today. In a word, attitude is everything. You get a good attitude and then you can enjoy a colorful life. Your attitude towards life is really of great significance! 21

17 As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything”, which is profound and self-evident, as far as I’m concerned. Only with a good attitude will we accomplish a wide range of assignments however tough they are. Since we put our heart into them, we will make progress of significance and obtain a lot through it. Take my life for example. Occupied with overwhelming papers and loaded with great pressure in Senior Three, I never fail to neglect the process of accumulating knowledge, and pay close attention to what I do all the time, which cultivates my ability of efficiency, furthers my perseverance and steels my will to brave the storm. All the people of great achievements demonstrate that success does need nothing but attitude. I am convinced that it is a good attitude that enables people to step ahead on and on and embrace a brilliant self! 22

18 Attitude is altitude. Progressively As a saying goes


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