1. Day 1 Whole essay outline Body Paragraph Outline

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3. Basic Essay Format Introduction 1 st Subtopic 2 nd Subtopic 3 rd Subtopic Conclusion

4. Each Body Paragraph Should follow the same basic format

5. Body Paragraph Format Topic Sentence 1 st Subtopic Details to support your subtopic Transition to next topic

6. Topic Reason/Detail/Fact Explain Explain Conclusion Body Paragraph Elements

7. Body Paragraph Greens Thesis Sentence: The main topic of the composition is stated. Write a Thesis Statement Ex- My favorite animal is the Giant Panda for two reasons.

8. Body Paragraph Yellows Reason/Detail/Fact : Give the reader a main reason, detail or fact that relates to and supports the topic sentence. Ex- First of all, I like the panda because it looks so cute and cuddly.

9. Body Paragraph Reds Explain/Example: Give an example for the statement made in the reason/detail/fact sentence. Ex- The panda's black and white body colors are simple, make it stand out, and look soft. Its sad looking face makes me want to hug it and make it happy.

10. Body Paragraph Greens…Again Concluding Sentence: The topic is restated to remind the reader what the composition was about. (Begin this sentence with Clearly,... All in all,...) GO BACK

11. Blues Use transitions (First,... First of all,... In addition,... Also,...) to start these sentences.transitions Add quotes to support your ideas Use complex sentences Use effective vocabulary Paraphrase Catchy sentence Clincher Background information

12. My favorite animal is the Giant Panda for two reasons. First of all, I like the panda because it looks so cute and cuddly. The panda's black and white body colors are simple, make it stand out, and look soft. Its sad looking face makes me want to hug it and make it happy. In addition, I am fond of the giant panda because it is endangered. We all should try to preserve the animals, like the panda, that are in danger of extinction. Clearly, the Giant Panda is the animal I like best.

13. Day 2 Introduction Conclusion –More specific information

14. Basic Essay Format Introduction 1 st Subtopic 2 nd Subtopic 3 rd Subtopic Conclusion

15. Introduction Catchy –A catchy sentence to get the reader’s attention Thesis –Clearly answers the essay question Three –Your three Subtopics Background Information Transition

16. Introduction Catchy Thesis Three

17. Basic Essay Format Introduction 1 st Subtopic 2 nd Subtopic 3 rd Subtopic Conclusion

18. Three –Your three Subtopics Thesis –Clearly answers the essay question Clincher –This leaves the reader knowing you are a great writer and you have proven your point

19. Day 3 Add a catchy sentence and a three prong occasion position thesis statement to you Introduction

20. Thesis Three Pronged thesis Include your three subtopics in your thesis

21. Writing an Occasion/ Position Thesis The topic sentence is a type of a complex sentence- An occasion / position statement. –Your thesis should include two parts Occasion = Reason for writing Position = What you plan to prove or explain

22. Key Words for Occasion Position Thesis Statements Examples of great words to start your thesis sentence with: After Although As As if As long as As soon as Because Before Even Even if Even though If In order to In order that Since So that Though Unless Until When Whenever Where Wherever Whether While

23. Occasion/ Position Thesis Example Example of a Topic Sentence: ( Bold is the occasion part of sentence, Italic is the position part of sentence. Unless you are willing to take risks, you may not reach your goals. After I tried out for band, I learned that there were several things that I had to do for a good performance.

24. Quote the story Paraphrase Explain or Define Think big Picture Use Onomatopoeia Question Describe in Detail Catchy

25. Example Intro Paragraph Swoosh! I love the sound of the ball tickling the nylon netting. My favorite hobby is attending Boston Celtics games because, they have a great team this year, I am afforded the opportunity to travel to down town Boston, and I am able to spend quality time with my Dad. I’m even more excited about the start of this season than ever before, because of the Celtics’ recent acquisitions.

26. Day 4 More Blues Effective verbs Effective vocabulary Complex Sentences

27. Day 5 transitions

28. Transitions – Introduce new ideas – Connect reasons, details, or facts – Help the writer and the reader Analogies –Where is the next tee? –Walking without jumping

29. Examples of great TRANSITION words to help the reader flow into and understand the next idea. One way Another way First Another Next First - Second Third The first The second One example Another example That night A good way A better way The best way Another Finally One other Along with In addition Equally important When spring came One Another First of all Second Last to be considered First of all Next The final Another way that In addition to

30. Missing Transition example Amy Tan became a famous author after her novel, The Joy Luck Club, skyrocketed up the bestseller list. There are other things to note about Tan as well. Amy Tan also participates in the satirical garage band “The Rock Bottom Remainders” with Stephen King and Dave Barry.

31. Effective Transition Example Amy Tan became a famous author after her novel, The Joy Luck Club, skyrocketed up the bestseller list. Though her fiction is well known, her work with the satirical garage band, The Rock Bottom Remainders, receives far less publicity.

32. Elements of a Transition Statement Transition Word Complex Sentence First Subtopic Second Subtopic Thesis

33. Beowulf is a True Hero Beowulf is strong –Pulls off Grendel’s arm TRANSITION Beowulf is resourceful –He kills Grendel’s mother with a sword he finds

34. Beowulf is strong –Pulls off Grendel’s arm Transition: Although Beowulf is incredibly strong, it is his resourcefulness that saves his life in the end and makes him a time less hero. Beowulf is resourceful –He kills Grendel’s mother with a sword he finds

35. Day 6 Adding Clincher to conclusion

36. Basic Essay Format Introduction 1 st Subtopic 2 nd Subtopic 3 rd Subtopic Conclusion

37. Three –Your three Subtopics Thesis –Clearly answers the essay question Clincher –This leaves the reader knowing you are a great writer and you have proven your point

38. Clincher