1. NB2 – Writing mistakes Nov.3, 2010

2. The People normally call me Alex People normally call me Alex I live in a region at the north of Spain I live in a region in/to the north of Spain Actually, I live in Langreo, a village of Asturias At present, I live in Langreo, a town in Asturias The best thing on Saturday night is to go out with friends The best thing …. is going out with friends I’m nurse, and I’ve a brother; he’s engineer I’m a nurse, and I have a brother; he’s an …

3. I also go to english classes I also go to English classes How my father takes me to school in his car, I arrive early As my father takes me to school in his car, I arrive early I like travelling for visiting other countries I like travelling to visit other countries I think I am a optimistic person I think I am an optimistic person I’ m polite and generous person I’m a polite and generous person I’m an outgoing person and cheerful I’m an outgoing and cheerful person

4. I don’t have very tall I am not very tall I’m dark hair, and I have 35 year old I have dark hair and I am 35 years old I go to differents places at the summer I go to different places in the summer My exams are very long and heavies My exams are very long and tedious The middle of my family live far of here Half my family live(s) far from here

5. I love stay with my friends and my favourite hobbie is read I love being…and my favourite hobby is reading I love sleep and go out, and I play the guitar, I love the music I love sleeping and going out ….. I love music I like going out and have fun with my friends I like going out and having fun with my friends I love travelling and go trekking, but I don’t like going to shopping I love travelling and going trekking, but I don’t like going shopping

6. I like having sunbathe in summer I like sunbathing in summer I hate study but I need it I hate studying, but I need it I am studing at a Secondary School, and I like rideing on my bike I am studying … and I like riding on my bike Specially I like football I specially like football I have to studying every days I have to study every day / all days

7. I have working in the mornings I have to work in the mornings It is an strange surname It is a strange surname Actually I don’t have work At present / currently, I don’t have a job I’m quiet shy sometimes I am quite shy sometimes I’m waitress in the weekend I’m a waitress at weekends

8. My mum says me that I’m crazy My mum tells me that I’m crazy I study at the Oviedo’s University Oviedo University / the University of Oviedo I lived in Madrid during 3 years I lived in Madrid for 3 years My favourite sports is football and handball My favourite sport is / sports are… She’s hobbys are listening music and go out Her hobbies are listening to music and going…