1. In this line graph shows How many cars sold in three countries, China, France and Britain, from 1960 to 2000. (2 mistakes) This line graph shows how many cars sold in three countries, China, France and Britain, from 1960 to 2000.

2. After that, From 1960 to 1990 levelled out by 50 thousands. (4 mistakes) After that, from 1960 to 1990 it levelled out at 50 thousand.

3. But after 5 years it’s was rapid increased to 200 thousends. (7 mistakes) However, after 5 years it increased rapidly to 200 thousand.

4. Then, there was increased in number of cars sold to around 190,000 in 1965. (3 mistakes) Then, there was an increase in the number of cars sold to around 190,000 in 1965.

5. Overall, the number of car sold by China and France increased. Whereas in Britain was decreased. (4 mistakes) Overall, the number of cars sold in China and France increased, whereas in Britain it decreased.

6. After this, there was decreased gradually from 1965 to 1980. (4 mistakes and missing information) After this, there was a gradual decrease from 150,000 in 1965 to about 125,000 in 1980.

7. In china, they were 30 thousands car sold in 1960. (4 mistakes) In China, there were 30 thousand cars sold in 1960.

8. Between 1995 to 2000, the number not change. (2 mistakes) Between 1995 and 2000, the number did not change.

9. There is no change from 1995 to 2000 about 150 thousand cars sold. (2 mistakes) There was no change from 1995 to 2000 at about 150 thousand cars sold.

10. Following then, from 1960 to 1980 was declined gradually about 130,000. (3 mistakes) Following this, from 1960 to 1980 it declined gradually to about 130,000.

11. Finaly, China rose dramatically at 250,000 in 2000. (3 mistakes) Finally, the number of cars sold in China rose dramatically to 250,000 in 2000.

12. Next, it have remain steady in 1995 to 2000. (3 mistakes) Next, it remained steady from 1995 to 2000.

13. After that, the number of cars fell down to approximately 135,000 in 1980. (2 mistakes) After that, the number of cars sold fell moderately to approximately 135,000 in 1980.

14. China was the lowest country from 1960 to 1990. (2 mistakes) China had the lowest number of cars sold from 1960 to 1990.

15. At last, it’s didn’t changed from 1995 to 2000. (3 mistakes) Finally, it didn’t change from 1995 to 2000.