1. World Events Research Comparison Essay
English 10

2. Sometimes authors use fiction as a way of teaching history or telling greater truths about the world around them. To Kill a Mockingbird for example, while a work of fiction, gives the reader great insights as to the institution of racism and bigotry during The Great Depression. Similarly, Luisa Valenzuela and Naguib Mahfouz, authors of “The Censors” and “The Norwegian Rat,” respectively, use their fiction to tell greater truths about the world around them. Can you think of any other stories that accomplish this?

3. Use class conversation to identify the purpose & message of each work:
The Censors
The Norwegian Rat
In a 5 body paragraph essay you will compare and contrast these stories to three world events (2 may be from the class articles, 1 must be by research in the computer lab). Like the group presentations, your focus should be on the author’s word choice and how the situations relate to the real world. See the point for point graphic organizer below for an idea of how to organize your paper.

4. Brain Storm: Choose the article you presented and write some notes for a comparison below. Next read 1 more article for comparison. After writing your notes, circle the column in which you will highlight for your paper.
Name of Article
Similarities to Stories
Differences from Stories

5. Point by Point Comparison Model1
Introduction in which you state your purpose & give Background info.
Next give your thesis statement:
There are more differences than similarities between vacationing in the mountains or at the beach. 2
One similarity between mountains and beaches as they are both tourist destinations 3
First difference between mountains and beaches is climate A.  Mountains B.  Beach 4
Second difference between mountains and beaches are types of activities A.  Mountains B.  Beach 5
Conclusion
Instructions: In a 5 body paragraph essay you will compare and contrast these stories to three world events (2 may be from the class articles, 1 must be by research in the computer lab). Like the group presentations, your focus should be on the author’s word choice and how the situations relate to the real world. See the point for point graphic organizer below for an idea of how to organize your paper.

6. Your Essay Outline: Stars = What you should write today 1
Introduction =Intro to topic (comparing stories to real life) +summaries of the stories + Thesis statement
Article 1 Name:
Article 2 Name:
Research Article: 5
Conclusion

7. Intro paragraph Topic Sentence Topic sentence =
Title of short story (in quotes),
+ author
+ summary of the novel.

8. Examples
The Giver, by Lois Lowry is a story about a boy who begins to questions the world around him; and when he does he learns that nothing in his world is what it seems.
“The Tell-tale Heart”, by Edgar Allen Poe is a story about a criminal who’s guilt becomes so great that he eventually goes mad and turns himself in.
Try creating an introductory background statement about either or both of the short stories.
“The Censors” by Luisa Valenzuela is a short story about a man named Juan is trying to trying to capture a letter he wrote to avoid the penalty of death if his coded language is caught by the censorship bureau.

9. Step 2 - Answer the question: How do the stories tell greater truths?
Watch out for “I” statements

10. Step 3 (Thesis Statement)- Choose your Evidence
Choose the names of the articles you will compare the stories to.
Overall you should make a claim as to whether there are more similarities or differences to be found.

11. Example paragraph:
(Topic Sentence) Sometimes works of fiction are solely warn us about consequences for choices we make in the world around us. (Summarize Story)“The Censors,” by Luisa Valenzuela for example, is a short story about a man named Juan who is trying to trying to capture a letter he wrote the breaks the censorship laws in his country. To avoid the penalty of death, Juan joins a the censorship bureau and begins to censor letters of others in order to retrieve his letter. In the end Juan falls victim to a society controlled by fear, and himself as he turns himself into the censorship bureau. (Thesis Statement) Overall, “The Censors” when taking a look at the modern world has more similarities than differences when comparing it to censorship problems in Russia, China, and North Korea. Note: In your thesis statement you should name three countries you will compare the story to. Save the titles of your articles for your work citations.

12. Your Essay Outline: Stars = What you should write today 1
Introduction =Intro to topic (comparing stories to real life) +summaries of the stories + Thesis statement
Article 1
Russia
 "If I am found innocent, it will prove that there is a certain freedom to express oneself. If I am found guilty, it means we are approaching a critical time for art and artists in this country."
 (Russia Cracks Down on Political Art)
Article 2 China
Research North Korea 5
Conclusion

13. Anatomy of a body Paragraph:
Consider the following model of a typical literary analysis paragraph:
Supporting
Detail*
Supporting
Detail*
Supporting
Detail*
Concluding Sentence

14. Body Paragraph Checklist:
Consider the following when using supporting quotes and passages in your writing:
Lead into or set up your quote/passage with speaker (character/narrator) and occasion (context, or what’s happening in the plot
Follow up a quote with at least two sentences of commentary and analysis before moving on to the next supporting detail
Avoid excessive plot summary
Be sure the quote is relevant to your topic sentence and thesis—does your quote help prove your point?
Avoid letting the quote speak for itself—avoid “dropping” the quote

15. One country “The Censors” seems to be strikingly similar to is Russia.
Sentence Type
Body paragraph # 1
Topic
Sentence
One country “The Censors” seems to be strikingly similar to is Russia.
Set up Quote
In “The Censors” there is a law forbidding anyone to write any thing in the mail that speaks negatively about their government. Similarly, In Russia, even artists are being targeted.
Give Quote
Artist, Alexander Shchednov, on the topic in his homeland has stated: "If I am found innocent, it will prove that there is a certain freedom to express oneself. If I am found guilty, it means we are approaching a critical time for art and artists in this country" (Russia Cracks Down on Political Art).
Explain quote
Like “The Censors” the artist faces a severe punishment for breaking the censorship law for expressing his honest opinion. While he may not face death, he is controlled by a society ruled by fear of dissent.

16. Active and Academic Verbs to Use in Critical Literary Analysis
Repeat the process within 2 more body paragraphs.
Active and Academic Verbs to Use in Critical Literary Analysis
Emphasizes Elucidates Compares Suggests
Creates Illustrates Exemplifies Parallels
Juxtaposes Implies Alludes to Observes
Identifies Organizes Reinforces Defines
Clarifies Contrasts Argues Mirrors
Echoes Develops Connotes Focuses
Balances Relates Expresses Insinuates

17. Conclusion Checklist:
The conclusion begins with a restatement of the thesis, not a repetition, and gradually widens toward a final, broad statement of implication.
Borrows from the body paragraphs, without being flatly repetitive or listing points already covered.
Creates echoes of the introduction and body paragraphs to reinforce analysis/ideas.
Moves outward with a statement that relates the thesis to a broader implication so the reader can see it in a larger perspective.

18. Conclusion Strategies Checklist:
Give a symbolic or powerful fact/detail
Create an analogy that relates your topic to a larger implication
Give an especially compelling example
Use a meaningful quotation
Recommend a course of action
Echo the approach/language of the introduction
Reference and make meaning of the title of the work you are analyzing

19. Closes using strategy from list on previous slide.
Sentence
Type
Conclusion
Restatement of thesis
Borrows information from other paragraphs
Closes using strategy from list on previous slide.

20. Work Cited Page
Type the name of the article into Google to find the source.
Good to for work cited page.
Bibliography: Or
Bibliography: