2. Notes on Descriptive Writing

3. In this unit you will learn: Types of descriptive words Two types of description How to write a descriptive sentence Organizational patterns for paragraphs Tips for Writing Description Notes on Descriptive Writing

4. Think of descriptive writing as “writing that shows rather than tells.”

5. Types of Descriptive Words Concrete Words Polysymbolic Words Emotionally-impacted Words Figures of Speech

6. Concrete Words Words that stimulate an impression of one of the five senses Types of Descriptive Words

7. Words that stimulate multiple impressions of the five senses Types of Descriptive Words Polysymbolic Words

8. Concrete and/or polysymbolic words that also carry significant emotional value(s) Types of Descriptive Words Emotionally-impacted Words

9. Imaginative comparisons Object A Types of Descriptive Words Figures of Speech Object B

10. Imaginative comparisons Object A Types of Descriptive Words Figures of Speech Object B !?

11. Imaginative comparisons similes metaphors personification anthropomorphism synecdoche Types of Descriptive Words Figures of Speech

12. An indirect comparison using “like” or “as” Types of Descriptive Words Similes

13. A direct comparison suggesting a complete transformation of Object A into Object B Types of Descriptive Words Metaphors

14. 1.Simple metaphor 2.Collapsed metaphor 3.Abstract metaphor 4.Inverted metaphor 5.Functional metaphor Types of Descriptive Words Types of Metaphors

15. 1.Simple metaphor John is a fox. Types of Descriptive Words Types of Metaphors

16. 2.Collapsed metaphor John, the fox Types of Descriptive Words Types of Metaphors

17. 3.Abstract metaphor _____, “fox” Types of Descriptive Words Types of Metaphors

18. 4.Inverted metaphor foxy John Types of Descriptive Words Types of Metaphors

19. 5.Functional metaphor “That John! He sure ‘outfoxed’ me!” Types of Descriptive Words Types of Metaphors

20. Attributing life-like qualities to inanimate objects/subjects Types of Descriptive Words Personification

21. Attributing specific human-like qualities to inanimate objects/ subjects Types of Descriptive Words Anthropomorphism

22. Referencing a part of one object to compare that object with another Types of Descriptive Words Synecdoche

23. Problems with Figures of Speech A Sample Paragraph Cool water flows through the rocky banks of the creek and into a wide pond. Reeds and cattails surrounding the bank embrace the pond like a mother’s enfolding arms reaching out to caress her sleeping child. Like a beaming proud mother’s eye, the sun drenches the scene with its loving warmth. Just beneath the sparkling surface of the water, minnows shoot from rock to rock like silver darts thrust like scattershot by some unseen hand.

24. Problems with Figures of Speech A Sample Paragraph Cool water flows through the rocky banks of the creek and into a wide pond. Reeds and cattails surrounding the bank embrace the pond like a mother’s enfolding arms reaching out to caress her sleeping child. Like a beaming proud mother’s eye, the sun drenches the scene with its loving warmth. Just beneath the sparkling surface of the water, minnows shoot from rock to rock like silver darts thrust like scattershot by some unseen hand.

25. Problems with Figures of Speech A Sample Paragraph Cool water flows through the rocky banks of the creek and into a wide pond. Reeds and cattails surround the bank. The sun drenches the scene with its warmth. Just beneath the sparkling surface of the water, like silver darts, minnows shoot from rock to rock.

26. Objective Description Subjective Description Two Types of Description

27. Objective Description “technical description”

28. Concrete Words Polysymbolic Words Two Types of Description Objective Description

29. “personal description” Two Types of Description Subjective Description

30. Concrete Words Polysymbolic Words Emotionally-Impacted Words Figures of Speech Two Types of Description Subjective Description

31. Writing the Descriptive Sentence The descriptive sentence is always an abstraction with specific details. The descriptive sentence always focuses on the subject or the predicate. The descriptive sentence supports an objective—one part of the paragraph or another.

32. The descriptive sentence is always an abstraction with specific details. Descriptive sentences never present all the images; each sentence creates a limited picture. Writing the Descriptive Sentence

33. The descriptive sentence always focuses on the subject or the predicate. Subject -- Predicate Writing the Descriptive Sentence

34. The descriptive sentence always focuses on the subject or the predicate. Subject Noun – Verb – Object Nouns Who? What? Where? When? How? Writing the Descriptive Sentence

35. The descriptive sentence supports an objective—one part of the paragraph or another. Clarifies the main idea of the topic sentence Clarifies primary development Clarifies secondary development Writing the Descriptive Sentence

36. A sample descriptive sentence: The blue-grey laptop computer, perched on the parquet-laminated kitchen table, cluttered with books and papers, displays the PowerPoint abstract background— softly blended graphics that fade into white, punctuated with stiff, black letters. Writing the Descriptive Sentence

37. A better descriptive sentence: On its two back legs, the blue-grey laptop computer perched on the parquet-laminated kitchen table. (subjective description) Writing the Descriptive Sentence

38. An alternative descriptive sentence: Raised on back legs, the blue-grey laptop computer was set on the parquet-laminated kitchen table. (objective description) Writing the Descriptive Sentence

39. Basic Patterns for Organizing Effective Description Directional Organization Spatial Organization Psychological Organization

40. Directional Organization Order of the Compass Linear Chronological Sequential Basic Patterns for Organizing Effective Description

41. Spatial Organization General to Specific/Specific to General Small to Large/Large to Small Front to Back/Back to Front Inside to Outside/Outside to Inside Basic Patterns for Organizing Effective Description

42. Psychological Organization Most important to least important Least important to most important Associative (familiarity) Non-associative (random) Basic Patterns for Organizing Effective Description

43. Facing east, the house rests atop two acres of farmland. The gated drive begins at the highway and winds in a gentle “S” across the grassy front lawn and ends at the garage to the left of the main house. Behind the house stretches freshly plowed ground, rows ranging from left to right. A line of oaks crowns the crest of the property. Sample Paragraph #1

44. Sample Paragraph #2 Resting deeply back in his chair, his feet crossed on the corner of his desk, Dr. Marsh is fast asleep. The few silver-grey strands of hair sweep back from his receding hairline. His lips sealed loosely, his wide chin rests comfortably over his neck. A pair of black reading glasses dangle on the end of his nose. His chest rises and falls as he snores softly in a slow rhythm. His pulpy hands are folded in his lap over a brown folder of loose pages.

45. Tips for Descriptive Writing Focus the descriptive words on the subject or predicate. Don’t overwork the detail. Arrange descriptive sentences consistently, following an organizational plan. Keep descriptive detail objective in business communications. Use description along with other developmental patterns.