1. On the Sidewalk Bleeding
by Evan Hunter

2. Characterisation
Characterisation is the process by which the author reveals the personality of a character.
Characterisation is revealed through direct characterisation and indirect characterisation.
Direct Characterisation tells the audience what the personality of the character is.
Example: “The patient boy and the quiet girl were both well mannered and did not disobey their mother.”
Explanation: The author is directly telling the audience the personality of these two children. The boy is “patient” and the girl is “quiet”.

3. Characterisation
Indirect Characterisation shows things that reveal the personality of the character. There are five different methods of indirect characterisation= S.T.E.A.L!
Speech
What does the character say? How does the character speak?
Thoughts
What is revealed through the character’s private thoughts and feelings?
Effect of character on others/How others feel about the character
How do other characters feel or behave in reaction to this character?
Actions
What does this character do? How does this character behave?
Looks
What does this character look like? How does this character dress? Etc.

4. Method of Characterization
Examples from the text
What the examples reveal about the character’s character
Speech
Thoughts
Effect on others—how others behave
in reaction to the character
Actions
Looks

5. Themes
Describe and explain each of these themes in the text, giving specific examples/details to support your answer:
Conflict
Appearance versus reality
Loss
Prejudice

6. Features/Techniques Key features of short stories include:
‘Slice of life’
Twist endings
Left to draw your own conclusions
Some of the key techniques used in this story include:
Dialogue
Repetition
Stream of consciousness / Third person limited narrative POV
Short sentences
Find at least 3 examples of each of these techniques in the text.