1. WALT: to improve written work using helppack on zimflex
WILF: to add at least one example of past & future tenses to your work to aim for Grade C
YOUR TASK: Holidays – the chance to win 2 weeks in the sun
You decide to enter a competition for the chance of winning a 2 week holiday abroad. You have to write an account of your holiday experiences and preferences.
You could include:
A description of a recent holiday you have been on – where you stayed, how you got there, when you went, etc...
What you did whilst you were there
Your opinion of the holiday
What type of holiday you like best and why
Your plans for your holiday next year
Why you think you should win the competition.
Remember in order to score the highest marks, you must answer each task fully developing your answers when it is appropriate to do so (task to be a minimum of 250 words, maximum 300 words)

2. HELP
PAST TENSE!!

3. HELP
TENSES!!
These are all good examples that you can use in your own work.

4. HELP These time phrases will MAKE YOU use your 3 TENSES!!
These are all good examples that you can use in your own work.

5. HELP You MUST have OPINIONS for a Grade D-C
These phrases show you how to use opinions with the past & future tense – excellent!!!

6. Example Grade B written work

7. Match up the expressions below with the expressions that are written in GREEN in the text that you have read on the previous slide.
These are VERY GOOD examples of phrases YOU SHOULD USE in your own written work!!!

8. SPANISH:
ENGLISH:
Answer these questions for Carlos, from the text you have read on the first slide.
Where does he normally go on holiday?
Where did he go last year?
Who did he go with?
How was it?
How many days did he spend there?
Where did he stay?
What did he do?
Where did he eat?
Does he like Barcelona?
Where is he going to go on holiday next year?
If he won the lottery, where would he go on holiday?
Now answer these questions for your own holidays to help you start your own written work, or to help you improve what you have already done.

10. You LAST PARAGRAPH should explain WHY you want to win the competition, and win the 2 weeks holiday…use the phrases below to help you.
En conclusión…
Tengo que ganar este concurso…
Me gustaría ganar este concurso…
In conclusion…
I have to win this competition…
I would like to win this competition…
…porque…
Me encanta ir de vacaciones
Me gustaría viajar más por el mundo
Me interesa mucho aprender sobre las
otras culturas
Me gustaría tener una aventura nueva
I love going on holiday
I would like to travel the world more
I am interested in learning about
other cultures
I would like to have a new adventure