1. Ruffles Revision 1: Paper 1 Question 5

2. English Language GCSE Paper 1 Question 5
Tuesday June 6th 2017
40 marks
24 marks for content/organisation
16 marks for technical accuracy
Show don’t tell
Dinner party adjectives
Punctuation toolkit
Change your sentence starters and structures
Descriptive language techniques
Grammar + Accuracy
Time management

5. Show, don’t tell

8. Tell into show The forest was dark. The forest was scary.
The moon shone through the trees.
It was cold.
Turn these ‘tells’ into ‘shows’.

9. 5. You are going to enter a creative writing competition.
Your entry will be judged by a panel of people of your own age.
Either:
Write a description suggested by this picture.
Or:
Write a short story about a teacher.

10. Sentence Structures
Write your own paragraph describing one of the pictures in this PowerPoint
2 short sentences.
2 medium sentences.
2 long sentences.