1. Composition Correction
1. You is a lazy student.
1. You are a lazy student.
2. I afraid.
2. I am afraid.
3. Ms Ho called me to saw her.
3. Ms Ho called me to see her.

2. Composition Correction
4. You have handing in your homework.
4. You have handed in your homework.
5. When you will come back to HK?
5. When will you come back to HK?
6. I need to buy some book.
6. I need to by some books.

3. Composition Correction
7. I have many Christmas homework.
7. I have much Christmas homework.
8. May be we have many topics.
8. Maybe we have many topics.
9. She was smile.
9. She smiled.

4. Composition Correction
10. She didn’t punished me.
10. She didn’t punish me.
11. I hadn’t handed my homework.
11. I hadn’t handed in my homework.
12. Ms Ho must very angry.
12. Ms Ho must be very angry.

5. Composition Correction
13. I did not had my breakfast.
13. I did not have my breakfast.
14. When I on the bus…
14. When I was on the bus…
15. I arrived the school.
15. I arrived at the school.

6. Composition Correction
16. So Ms Ho could not punished her.
16. So Ms Ho could not punish her.
17. I was down and worry.
17. I was down and worried.
18. My homework was in a boy school bag.
18. My homework was in a boy’s school bag.

7. Composition Correction
19. I stayed in the classroom see the view.
19. I stayed in the classroom to see the view.
20. I went to fast food shop.
20. I went to a fast food shop.
Be careful with grammar.

8. Composition Correction
Rewrite the following sentences:
1. We are very enjoy.
1. We enjoy very much.
2. Don’t hard-working very much.
2. Don’t be too hard-working.

9. Composition Correction
3. You no worried.
3. You need not worry.
4. Your homework is Tom gives me.
4. Tom gives me your homework.
5. Amy’s homework is I take to copy.
5. I take Amy’s homework to copy.

10. Composition Steps: 1. Underline key words.
2. Number the points you have to answer.
3. Decide the tense.
4. Proofread the composition.

11. Question 1 Opening End it with
Must be creative and imaginative, interesting and attractive

12. Question 2 Voluntary work Have you started
What will you be required to do
Had not been at home during Christmas
Stayed out all night without telling your mum
Quarreled with sister
Ask for pocket money