1. Six Traits for Writing

2. Organization
Hamburger paragraph

3. Idea Development
How can I make it more detailed, learn more about it, and make it more interesting?

4. Word Choice
BIG
Titanic
Massive
Enormous
Gargantuan

5. Voice
Who and what the story is about
-Once upon a time there lived…

6. Convections -Let’s get together more often!
-But we need to be in our proper place

7. The brown dog runs after the black cat. Complete sentences transitions
Sentence Fluency
The brown dog runs after the black cat.
Complete sentences transitions

8. Hope you enjoyed!!!