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1 Designed by Roger Designed by Roger Dec. 14 2008

2 Designed by Roger 作文题目:假定你叫张华。一家英文报社来信 要邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况, 并依照调查写一篇报道。请根据下表提供的信 息,对你的调查作简要介绍,发给报社。 主要的用途出现的问题 1 阅读国内外新 闻,学习英语 2. 发 email 、欣 赏音乐、看电影 玩游戏等 3. 网上购物 1. 过多的在网上玩游戏, 浪费了时间,影响了学 业 2. 浏览不健康信息,对 身心有害

3 Designed by Roger 注意:词数 80 左右;文章开头与结尾已给出, 不计入总数 Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you something about how the students use the Internet ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ______________________________ I hope every student can make use of the Internet properly for their studies.

4 Designed by Roger Step 1 List the key points 要点 1 阅读国内外新闻,学习英语 read news at home and abroad/ learn English have access to learning news at home and abroad as well as learning English 要点 2 发 email 、欣赏音乐、看电影玩游戏 send e-mails listen to /enjoy/appreciate music see/watch films play computer games

5 Designed by Roger 要点 3 网上购物 do online shopping 要点 4 过多的在网上玩游戏,浪费了时间, 影响了学业 spend too much time in playing computer games online waste time/ affect their studies be buried in be lost in be glued to be addicted to be hooked on be bad for be harmful to do harm to have a bad/negative effect on have a bad influence on

6 Designed by Roger 要点 5 浏览不健康信息,对身心有害 read unhealthy/harmful/dirty information do harm to both their body and mind. be physically and mentally harmful to sb.

7 Designed by Roger Step 2 Make sentences 要点 1 阅读国内外新闻,学习英语 1.They can _________ read news at home and abroad __________ learn English ________the Internet/ _____ Internet. 2. With ___________________, they can have access to learning the latest news at home and abroad _________ learning English. 3. The Internet not only keeps the students ______________what’s going on at home and abroad but also ______________them a channel to learn English by themselves. not only but also through by the help of the Internet as well as well informed of provides/offers

8 Designed by Roger 要点 2 发 email 、欣赏音乐、看电影玩游戏 1.By_________________, they can also send emails to their families, relatives and friends, enjoy _________________music, watch movies _____ play computer games. 2. The Internet also ________________for them to keep in touch with others by _________emails and to relax themselves by _____________music, seeing films and playing PC games. using the Internet and various types of makes it possible sending appreciating

9 Designed by Roger 要点 3 网上购物 1.They can do online shopping_________ leaving their homes. 2. It is more _______________for them to do online shopping. 3. Online shopping brings them a lot of _____________. without convenient convenience

10 Designed by Roger 要点 4 过多的在网上玩游戏,浪费了时间, 影响了学业 1.They spend too much time playing computer games online. T__________/ c___________/ As _________, it wastes a lot of time and affects their studies. 2. They are addicted to/ are hooked on online computer games, _________wastes lots of valuable time and a_______ their studies. herefore onsequentlya result which ffects

11 Designed by Roger 3. They are buried in/are lost in/are glued to online computer games, which results in ___________time and _________________in their studies. 4. They are addicted to/ are hooked on/ are buried in/are lost in online computer games, w________a great d______of p________ time and having a bad effect on their studies. a waste of poor performance astingeal recious

12 Designed by Roger 要点 5 浏览不健康信息,对身心有害 1. They read some unhealthy/harmful/dirty information, _______ does harm to both their body and mind. 2. They read something unhealthy /harmful / dirty on the net, which,un__________ /un_________, is physically and mentally harmful to them. 3. Harmful information that they read on the net ________________their body and mind. which doubtedly avoidably has a bad effect on 适度添加副词, 增加语言表现力

13 Designed by Roger Step3. Form a passage and polish Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you something about how the students use the Internet. ________________, they can have access to learning the latest news at home and abroad as well as learning English with the help of the Internet._____________, the Internet also makes it possible for them to keep in touch with others by sending emails and to relax themselves by appreciating music, seeing films and playing PC games.________, it is more convenient for them to do online shopping. As we all know, the Internet is playing an increasingly important role/ part in our daily life. There is no doubt that it brings students lots of convenience. To begin with/Firstly What’s more Last/lastly 开头:引出话题 总起句:因特网的优势 分述三个优势

14 Designed by Roger ① However, every coin has two sides. The Internet also has its disadvantages. ② However, the unfavorable aspects of the Internet can not be neglected. Some students are hooked on /are glued to online computer games, which results in a waste of time and poor performance in their studies.___________________________, they also read something unhealthy on the net, which , ____________________ , is physically and mentally harmful to them. I hope every student can make use of the Internet properly for their studies. To make things worse/What’s worse undoubtedly/unavoidably ① However, every coin has two sides. The Internet also has its disadvantages. ② However, the unfavorable aspects of the Internet can not be neglected. 过渡句(承上启下 ) 贬义递进

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